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person Mo-Kitty
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mo-Kitty: Oh yea, go 'kura being nice and all! O___O Malik was about to kick Ryou's ass! >__< I was scared to read this chapter to be honset. I didn't want to see Malik and Ryou fightin' but it was well worth it. Can't wait to see what happens next,

Ja ne for now

person Eva-chan
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eva: 0___o Um... that was unexpected of Bakura... I know if *I* slept with one of my friend's husbands I would six feet under right now. >< that was just wrong, Ryou sleepin' with Malik's husband. Desprate or not. I would NEVER do something like that. Ryou didn't deserve the lil "I love you" from Bakura even though that woke him up right there. Malik should've knocked the living out of Ryou, but mind me that's my thought right there.

Anyways, Continue can't wait to see what happens!
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was about fucking time Bakura told Ryou that he loves him but it was kinda wrong that Ryou slept with Marik if I ever do that(witch I won't) I'd be long dead tough nice story keep going I love it
person ayachan
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGH, YOU FUCKING BITCH!!!!!!!!! sorry, only on chapter 6 so far
person Nancy
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I think i have complained at you every chapter for the last..50 someting chapters to finally give ryou a break!! Yay im so glad they are finally together, and you will never hear me bitch again :D
person Starwarrior
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like that! It was sweet and heart warming, and it's awesome that they found Annar! ^____^ Keep up the good work!
person Dani Wheeler-Kaiba
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew...ever since I finished the previous chapter I've been wondering what Malik would do. Hardly a surprising reaction, though. Now I don't know who to feel more sorry for...Ryou, Marik or Malik...okay, I'll rule Ryou out because for starters, out of the three of them, he was most in fault (I'm not blaming him! I love him! But OUT OF THE THREE, it was more his fault), plus he was happy for the rest of the chapter. Pff, my reasoning sucks. Anyway. Down to feeling more sorry for Malik or Marik. I'd have to say Marik, because he had no idea, and he's getting cold shouldered for it anyway...I hope he and Malik make up soon.

Bakura and Ryou - what can I say besides FINALLY! Of course only something like Ryou sleeping with Marik would be major enough to make Bakura finally admit his feelings. Though I imagine he will make good to his word when he says that he's not perfect, right? He still seems like he'll make a big stuff-up somewhere along the line. But no point thinking negatively - they're together for real at last! Woo!!

*Whines one last time about Marik and Malik fighting*

By the way...did I mention in my last review how much I cracked up when I was first reading Viking Brothers and read that Marik sat on Little Bakurina?? I was laughing FOR DAYS! I told everyone at rowing the next day, and we were all pissing ourselves laughing for about two hours!! So thank you. It's not often I get such a good laugh!
person hatochiisai
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAH!!! PARTY AT HATO'S PLACE!!! BAKURA AND RYOU ARE FINALLY TOGETHER!!!!! WOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Now we have to get Malik and Marik back together. Damn you, Chibimisu!! Can you NEVER let them ALL be happy at one time?!?!? @_@
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...What the hell....HOW could Ryou do that?! That little whore! I disliked Ryou before but now I completely despise him. He lets himself be fucked by his friends husband and what does he get for it? "I love you" From Bakura! He doesnt deserve that! -Growls and bites onto fist.- I still like this fanfiction but now I think something horrible should happen to Ryou. Extremely horrible. Like...Beheading. Though I know that wont happen, I shall dream of it happily. Anyways...Keep writing. I only flame Ryou. To a crisp.
person Carol
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh this was good i hope Ryou and marik make up god that was sad i can understand way Ryou did it and i'm also happy that Ryou and bakura are together this is great!!!