AFF Fiction Portal
person Eloin Dragonetti
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that Viking Brothers was an awesome fic and this one promises to be as good if not better. Keep up the excellent work, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Nikkayla
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH TEA IS A DEMON KILL KILL KILL! -stabs her relentlessly- god, i hate her so much... good to see they all hate her too ^_^ Yami must win games against the Lud-head dude -nod- hes a little asswipe :) you write really good stories. I enjoy reading them all the time! I just came across this, and I was like :O:O:O:O:O:OMGREADREADREAD! I've stopped reading most Yu-Gi-Oh stuff, since I'm currently obsessed with the Tallest Slash [the Almighty Tallest - Invader Zim ^_^] they rock ^_^_^_^

-runs around- AVALDAMON IS A SEXY BEAST

teehee..

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chappy 2 and I am still loving this!! Oh please please please pllllleeeeeeaaaaasssseee
let Bakura and Ryou get married!! And is it too late to chuck Tea off that balcony? >^.^<

AutumnRose - *pushes Tea off balcony* It was the wind!

Yami, Bakura, Marik, and Seto - *laughing hysterically*

Yugi - Well, I'll over look this act of random violence just this once, seeing as how it was the wind.

Ryou, Malik, and Jou - ^_^;
person Kupo
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHH! Tea's back it's like some weird creppy horror movie.(screams) update asap!
person anubiset
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL EVIL CLIFFHANGER. How could you? I need more. It already took me two days to read the first part and then I find a second part and only two chapters. Hurry, I need this. I really do. I only have read two others writers who pulled me into the story the way you did with this one. I need more. More I tell you.
person Velvetina
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
argh noo kill Tea *Borrows one of Bakuras knives* stupid idiotic girl, she never deserved to have Yami. Grrr. Great chappie though can't wait for the next one!
person sugarholic
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so the bitch is back how wonderful -__-
please update ^__^ gives u cookie
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* ooh lord i jsut want to snap her neck. yeah her husband gives her what he wants... please!! tea is nothing but a fuck toy for all the brothers and they rather have their dicks shoved down her throat to ehar her speak I bet *snorts* i hate her. i hate her i hate her i hate her!!!!!!! aye well can't wait for the update.
person Deb
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Its great!
I cant wait for the games!
It should be excellent!!!
Hehe Annar is definitely a devil child...Yugi is gonna have his work cut out with him!
Please update again soonies huni!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Letainajup
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORIES! Especially when you put Marik and Bakura together, I love their little squabbles/faights they have and pissing off Yami! LOL! Plus Bakura and his insane thoughts with the killer pinnaple makes me roll on the ground - where do you come up with this stuff!? I can't wait for the next chapter, more Bakura and Ryou in this one right? :) Thanks again so much!