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person Draza
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!! please please please? I'll give you a cookie...mmm, chocolate chip....*waves hands over freshly baked cookie to send the scent*
person Draza
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great sequel to the viking brothers. It's coming along really well. Umm...i know it may upset you and some readers but *grabs viking shield* could you write about when Yami met Tea and the brother's reactions? *ducks flying objects radomly* i'm sorry! i'm curious!!.
person aramis_chan
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea! I like the sequel as much as the first story, meaning I love it. Good thing Ryou is a bit ill, at least Bakura is being a bit nicer.. or, he's being a jerk without hurting Ryou to much - well, I'm not totally sincere, I like Bakura being a jerk, and that story about how Malik got Avaldamon made me feel sorry for him. But I like this horse! And I like little Annar. He's evil, and Yugi isn't even aware of it *g*. I expected a bit more from Tea, though: I thought she would really have something to say beside "I want my child back". Oh well. It's Tea.
I hope the others get their fight as well - Marik, Bakura, Yami... Especially Marik. And I hope Malik succeded in learning to fight too. I'd love him to surprise Marik a bit by it, so he can show him he doesn't need protection all the time.
person Deb
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellence!!!!
The bonus chappies were great too!!!
Hehe Avaldamon was so funny! hehe
Cant wait to see what happens next!
Go go seto!! And down with Tea! The stupid biatch!
Hehe
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great chappie!!! I'm still thinking something drastic needs to happen..like Ryou finding someone else and Bakura finally realizing what he lost..Ryou is way too sweet and forgiving!! Anyways..loved it and can't wait for another chappie!!..would love to see some of the memories of fighting between the Bolverks and Oddvars growing up!!
person Evil Yugi
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KICK TEA ASS ! YUGI MUST KICK HER ASS!!!!!!! oh another thing I seemed to mes up alot in my other review for this chapter I meant to say read not hearying about yami's age and and there was somethin elese to but I am to tired to care right now. So if you would be so kind and kill tea off for me , of course if you don't listen to me and do somethin else that's ok to cause anything you write is good! SO update and I be sure to REVIEW!!! (not update) damn type ups .
person anbuiset
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read ch.3. and I love it. It is amazing how welll you do these. So few mistakes and a well written and worked plot. It makes it all the better. You can almost believe that you are there watching it play out. (That would make me happy, a camera and being able to see those bishies go at each other. crap drooled on the computer.)
person Roxria
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Over all amazing Story! How old is Yami anyways? He can't be that old...hmmm.
Please update quickly!
person Camille
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! I love the side stories also. When will Bakura realize that Ryo loves him? Is he that dense?
person Letainajup
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah the games are beginning! EVIL TEA! I hope she gets what's comming to her *Grrrrr*! Great work, I can't wait for the next chapter to come! I lobe your bonus stories too, I think it's cool that you get to explain certain things like Bakura and his pinnaples or marik and his horse. What I would like to see in a bonus story is one about Jou, Tristen and Duke when they all were togther growing up in the village! That would be cool to know, thanks again!