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person Letainajup
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! Those evil brothers, I feel sorry for poor Yugi, what is gonna happen to him!? LOL! I still love the fact that Bakura has those pinnaple and coconut fighting and telling him what to do, classic! Thank you for continuing this great story, I know it must take time out of your schedual, so thanks very much! Please update ASAP, have a super day!
person Sabbie
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Y A Y i was here for the first part now im here again for the second Y A Y I LOVE IT ALL THE WAY HEHE And I HOPE TO GOD THAT TEA DOES NOT TRY TO TAKE ANAR he is no longer hers she ran out on him Yugi is his mother now and THATS the way it SOULD STAY Tea needs to DIE A HORRID HORRID DEATH ^_^ KILLL HER KILLL HER I SAY SHE DESEAVER TO DIE SHE IS A SLUT AND A WHORE AND what else *Thinks* Oh Yea A CUNT RAG Y A Y lol Keep on Write the GREATNESS of The Viking Brothers ^_^
Yami/Yugi Seto/Jou Tristin/Duke Bakura/Ryou Marik/Malik FOREVER HEHE Lov Ya Sabbie
person Sarah Costa
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...great story!!! Please update soon. PWEASE PRETTY!! Ja ne
person anubiset
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the that little story at the end. Daddy`s afraid of mommy. hehehehehe. Bakura is too cute.
person Angel Kawaii
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOl That was funny! I can't believe that happened. Poor Malik though. Oy 'Kura. What did you get yourself into? Please update soon! ja ne!!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I loved the little side-story. And I hope that Sveyn gets what's coming to him!
person Camille
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA!! That was so cute! Poor Bakura! Poor Chickens!! ;) I want more soon!
person Letainajup
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL ODDVARS!!!! EVIL EVIL EVVVVIIILLLL!!! Poor Yami, Marik and Bakura - But they were sooo cute when they were little! Awesome short story and chapter. I especially enjoyed the Marik and Malik lemon (rough tree sex) ;p I hope all goes well for Bakura and even Ryou, those two seem to never get a break! Have fun studying, and thanks for the quick update! Hope to see the next chapter soon!

PS We need to still have a Duke, Jou and Tristen story of when they were growing up!!!!
person kupo
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this is starting to sound like "Law and Order" or something!!! You just need a cool theme song and it'll be just like it. The lemon was great too by the way. But my favorite was the Bonus story. Those are always the best.
FEAR THE CHICKENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Update soon!!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay seto!! man i hope he finds hte truth. bsides that little bitch is such a whore i'm surprsied she didn't beg for more! whole family should be salughters and that whore anzu should be given as a whore that she is to all the other vikings. that's who hse got the breain dead dick head slept wiht the brothers but could only get him. aye i'm jsut pissed today but good chapter. damn mrik nearly kills everything he had doesn't he! ^^