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RD: grr SVEYN listen and listen good if i catch ur dirty filthy mits on yugi i swear ur dead DEAD DEAD ill fucking murder you you disgusting pig yugi had nothing to do with it how dare you HE DOSNT EVEN HOLD NY RESPONSABILTY OVER BAKURA how dare you threaten yugi mark my words Sveyn you and that slut of sister of yours will pay dearly if yugi is harmed mark my words huh well great chapter im happy for ryou but im most displeased that that dirty filthy piece of a slut has the nerve to keep up this bogus lie now thanks to her YUGI IS IN TROUBLE how could she i swear just one look at yugis eyes after sveyn puts him through what Dahila went through the whole area holding the games will be disgusted theres no honor in disgracing someone as sweet as yugi especially when he has nothing to do with the dispute between the familes let alone this STUPID situation over bakura huh but like i said ill deal with her and Sveyn myself if they hurt yugi thats a promise well gtg now JA NE ^_^

AGH! Whats gonna happen!!!??
Please let them find out that it was Sveyn soon!
The tension burnsss! It burnssss i tell you!!
Excellent chappie hun!
Cant wait to see what happens now!
Much Luv
Debs xxx

:O NU, NOT YUGI! -runs madly- RUN YUGI -hugs Yugi- -ties him to Yami-

Anyway, great job ^^; I really do luff your stories. You are one of the few remainig fanfic authors that I like a lot :) Very well done!

p.s, oOo, add some more Malik X Marik, its so hot -drools-

I think Ryo should find someone sane! I was laughing my ass off when the pineapple and the coconut were acting like the angel and the devil on Bakura's shoulders. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAA!!! Everytime you come up with another chapter, it makes my morning and it was a great start for a Monday.

Oh my Ra!! Poor Yugi! I can't wait for the next chappie! Please, please, please update soon! I can't hold my excitement! Ja ne! ^^

*beating Svyen with a branch as she is screaming at him* STAY AWAY FROM YUGI, YOU BASTARD!

hey love this story to dreath!!!!! keep with the updates we all want more hehe

Great Chapter! I hope Sveyn's plan doesn't work too well...He must pay for what he done to his sister....Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne

I love the pineapple and the coconut ! That bonus-story in the last chapter was so cool to!
Poor Malik though: I think that was the first time we see him do something really nice for Marik (although personally I think he's going to far, but that's just because I like him much better than MArik).
It's nice how you don't just make the opponents evil for no good reason.

Ryou shouldn't be that unhappy about Bakura not seeming to care for him: this is the second time it saves him... But jealous and stunned Bakura is fun!

NO Yugi! -----I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! you left us a very evil cliffie! glares* but oh well. I just hope Yugi is not hurt to bad cause as you can probably tell Yugi is my favorite character (huggles Yugi). Oh and the whole pinapple and cocanut thing that was VERY funny, lol I hope you update as soon as you can (I am just hoping the next chapter comes faster then this one did) but ur updates are worth the wait truly bye!