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person Lisn
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! INTENSE!! VERY GOOD CHAPTER!!!
person Sarah Costa
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! YAMI KILL THE BASTARD!!!! That was a great chapter. Great Story!!! Please update as soon as you can. And one more thing: How old are they? Especially Yami. Happy Memorial Day! Ja ne
person Camille
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so pleased to see another chapter! That bastard got what he deserved! I want to see more of this story soon!
person Nepha
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...that was intense and great. Yami kill the scum. GREAT!!! I hope Yugi is ok. He have to be ok. And he will with Yami by his side. Please update soon. Ja
person Ryzel
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet but if i where yami i'd chop the guys dick off first and mabey watch the wolf ravage the corpse for a bit lol but yeah enough of my sadistic mind. lol anyways love your story so far the suspence for baku and ryou gettign together are killing me though lol hurry up with that lol anyways gatta go ja mata!
person Crazy Demon
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hoooly shit O__O I had to "OMG" with every limb. That's just.... man and he's a dad too. I realize now that Yami is capable of delimbing people. Geez... OH WELL, that's what that bum gets for raping poor Yugi. Rock on with ya bad self!
person kupo
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! it's an evil plan. AAAHHHHH! But really like that wasn't expected. Great chapter! update soon!
person Nikkayla-san
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fucking hell :| i never knew Yami had it in him :| That was gory...and I loved it! -grins and runs in rampant circles- YAAAY GO YAMI YOU ROCK -sings-

Nice chapter, well written. I was shocked about that last little bit, but still. wow. like....wow :| I'm so going to have to read that again, it rocked!

nice job ^^;
person marbi_shadow
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
muhahahaha! bloody guts and gore! byebye sveyn assvar!
person SilverWing147!
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOO! Not Yuugi! AHH! *goes Crazy*
This story rocks.

I love you.