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WOAHHHHH
WOW i totally did not expect that. I'm in absolute shock of what Yami did. Damn that was crazy. I...I...I don't know what to say. it was a good chapter and i can't wait to see it updated again.

Your story is very good, and if you don't update soon I will have no choice but to cry in my room where no one can see me.
I really like your story, and i don't want to rush you it's is really, really, really, really, really, really, good.

MWHAHAHAHA! Die Oddvar scum die! No one, repeat, no one touches Lady Yugi Bolverk and fucking lives! MWHAHAHAHA! Will Dahlila be brave enough to tell her brothers the truth now? She should that little hussy! She indirectly got Yugi raped! I wonder if Annar's gonna tell mummy that he told Daddy and that mummy is gonna put missing Oddvar together with very bloody laundry and get Yami killed Svyen. This is such an awesome story! The Viking Brothers rocked and this Danegold is rocking! Please update with the greatest speed!

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Well...this is good and bad. It's good that the bastard died an excruciating death - but it's bad in that Bakura might not be proved innocent now...

Wow you updated so quickly!!! the torture scene was a little gory ^^; but entertaining none the less! Thanks for not wasting time on editing and posting quickly, (im not an english major so i dont care abour grammer OR spelling!)
I love your story!

You updated!! Yay!!!! Oh my Ra!! I was shuddering through the entier grotesque killing scenes. I loved it! They are so...well grotesque! I'll be waiting for the next chappie! Oh Ra I hope he gets away with it. *looks around nervously* Ja!

Whoaaaaa...that..was..ultimately..twisted...0o0...it's been awhile and I've never been happier to see an update! I loved your first Viking Brothers story and couldn't wait for the second! I'm sure everyone asks but when is Bakura gonna snap to it and give Ryou what he wants? Good Riddance that that scum Sveyn was killed but I would have liked him to suffer more by knowing he raped his own sister. By killing Sveyn, though, doesn't it get rid of potential plot/story? What's gonna happen with the case now? Can't wait to hear the conclusion! ~a faithful reader~

RD: wow ok ppls lesson number one never touch yugi unless u want to live but that son of bitch got what he deserved i mean come on taking out what happend to his sister out on someone WHO WASNT EVEN PART OF THE FAMILY i mean ok so hes married to Yami but thats it yugi only Bolverk by marriage not blood and yugi would never dream of hurthing someone never in his life would wished or wanted harm on the oddvars tea on the other hand is another matter but believe me when i say yugi is too tender hearted to want Dahila to be hurt by anyone so it makes me angry to think someone could actually hurt yugi like that its horrible i mean Malik and Ryou PROTECTED him from this and now now he knows he knows what malik and ryou went through and its wrotten just plain wrotten i mean even Dahlia knows what rape is and what it does to ppl but not yugi its not fare but i think figured them out Marik is 100% pure beserker Bakura is 100% sadist and yami is 100% pure demon when there out on the battle field mmhmm well keep up the great work and update soon huh but now what are they going to do i mean yes Sveyn would have gotten the death sentence if yami went to the king with his findings but now not only is Yami a murderer but he also killed the real person behind Dahlias rape or maybe this could work in his favor the hunters will say Sveyn got killed by wolves plus if yami tells Olaf what happened to yugi and more importantly who did it maybe then Dahlia will come out and tell everyone the truth cuz now it wont be so shameful for her cuz Sveyn would have done that all on his own well gtg now JA NE ^__^ and PLS UPDATE i need to know yugi will pull through this its horrible and now i need to think of a good death punishment for Sveyn Yami took all the good battle ones well till then later

Yami is the coolest husband ever!!!!!!!!!! I don't think my boyfriend would kill for me. ( Yugi's sooo lucky) Did they have acid in that time? Acid would have hurt alot. But then the wolves couldn't eat him. Oh well! update soon!!!

*spits at the mess* the only thing i hope is the wolves don't gag on such rotten flesh. one down, te rest of hte bastards to go. and i hope that bitch whore sister of the clan finally breaks down. personally, i'dd rather skin her alive and rip every hair out root by root until she confesses who really raped her... then contineud doing it until she begs for death. i am VERY cranky and I can get VERY bloody minded when i am cranky. yami, you had every right to do what you did. now go prove to yugi that you love him and always will.