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for Getting You Back

by Kirie321

person G'ma Jloran
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks. Just be glad you don't have write about Yugi getting pregnant like she did. OY! x.x; But I think I can see where you're taking this story. Am I going to need to use the Weedwhacker of Doom on Ramrik instead of Yami? ;)
person sexxie_twisted_angel
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God the horrible angsty-ness of it all....I love it :P ...this story has a plot that is very real and it makes me want to hug everyone lol...I dunno reading this at 3 in the morning when you are half asleep and your brain isn't functioning properly makes you say strange things...ah well...but yea love the story keep writing as you are very good at it :D
person tati
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story get better even time i read it keep on going please
person G'ma Jloran
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're right, Yami is gonna squirm. I'm one for happy endings, but this time, he really deserves what he got. I should know, since one of my best friend was treated the same way once. I just keep hoping for a happy ending in this. Write more soon. Ciao!
person Yami Kitsune
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha hahahahahahaha!
I mean...poor Yami.
What am I talkign about?! Mwahahahahaha! *insert continual evil laughter*
You can't loev -em and leave 'em then exspect -em back, Yams!
Come on, you GOTTA update this.
person G'ma Jloran
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blushes slightly* Sorry. Anger management class was cancelled that day. ^.^; But you're right, I did enjoy this chapter. Guess Yami got just what he deserved and then some. I hope he squirms some more before this over. Write some more soon. Ciao!
person G'ma Jloran
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gets out Weedwhacker of D Oka Okay, must restrain self or I'm gonna end up hurting a certain Pharaoh. I hope he's gonna be in for a rude awakening when he gets back to Domino. Would serve him right, though I hope there's a happy ending anyhow.
person tati
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow good story keep going please
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OoOo!!! Please please please please please please update this really soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! The angst for it is good too! But can you make the chapters a bit longer? Thanks ^^ Update soon!
person Hikaru
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heyhey, ^^ goooood lol I like it it sounds like it'll be very interesrting, only a few critisims(or however you spell it) : length, try to make your chaptesr a BIT longer. listing: you list their names too much, instead try saying things like "Yami and the others" or "Everyone else", general things instead of specifics. Other than that I loved it, and cant wait for more, plus the lemon you promised me sounds like fun too ^.^ luv yu bye bye* hugz*