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by Liscar

person sythetic_darkness
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really nice fics, especially then end ~_^ I'm starting to like otogi/honda couple. But anyway, this little fics is really good and well written. How they met and all is really good, the plot is not that bad and the coffee accident is quite funny. and I love the song too. Do you have any other like that ?
person Fel5
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, sweet and soft, and although I don\rinkrink coffee, I really felt with Kaiba, when every single machine in the house broke down, hehehee..still, makes one wonder, who could drink a whole liter of coffee in less than ten minutes?
Never mind, great story, and the song gives it a special touch. Keep writing!^^
person Akuchan
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He looked at his cup again then shook his head. Nah. He wasn’t that desperate, yet. -- Oh I've been there, that made me laugh out loud. Good story.
Akuchan

person Kat
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! That story was fantastic! The lemon... the lemon was amazing!

“Shh, baby,” Seto nuzzled Joey’s stomach just above his waistband. “I’ll ease that burning, I promise,” *points to that* My computer moaned at that!

The ending was cute too! Lordy, I thought I was the only one out there that crazy about coffee!!

Fantastic! I hope you write more!

KB
person saelbu
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great I really enjoyed it, it was so sweet. ^_^
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Ppfftt. Sounds like me with the coffee.
DD: *rolls eyes* You would have licked it off the floor.
YD: Whatever. That was hot, babe.
DD: When's the next one? I wanna see some Tris/Otogi action!!
YD: Take a bow, baby. Ya done good.