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by deathwish

person Blue
schedule February 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well...that was a complete waste of space and the readers time. This is a place for -adult- stories...not pointless bashing.

Your grammer and spelling are good, on the other hand. I have to give you credit for being one of the few Anzu bashers that can actually spell and write well. But the lack of the actual characters personality just kind of deletes that fact. Sorry but, you might want to actually -watch- the show before bashincharcharacter.
person Skymouth
schedule February 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it cause Tea annoys me. I like to see characters taken slightly out of character to add some flavor. Takes more creativity to write them slightly out of character or really accentuate one of their flaws then to rehash the same boring stuff over and over againore!ore!
person Tea Hater MaverRver
schedule February 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! BWA HA Tea Tea loses...and almost dies! Keep up the good work. ^_^
person Magicman
schedule February 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm disappointed. I was hoping for mindless bashing to stay out of tsitesite.