rate_review Reviews

That was a good story i never thought that kaiba would ever cry like that. Well anyways keep writing more it was good!

*sobs* T~T

Please post your sequel!

Aside from a few minor issues with grammar and spelling errors that was really lovely to read. I really hope you continue. Not only is this one of my favorite pairings, but I absolutely love the introspective work you've done here. The flashbacks are set very nicely in the piece, too, they don't seem out of place at all. Mokuba's thoughts were a little awkward, but I think that is mostly du onl only having a couple of paragraphs to his entire part in this chapter.

Overall, very nice, I hope to see more. :)

- Kira

Kewl!!! I can't wiat to see another chapter!!!!