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for Unsteady Love

by darkvixen

person koi
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good and certenaly was the first time i ever read something about this paring in which bakura has this kind of reaction, which is good and quite original...congratulations you have to do more of those! although they can certenaly try to be also a little more ....hot!
person Inuyasha
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was Deep very nice i think this fic was rated "R" that's such crap, it should be NC-17...sorri, just thinkin' out loud...don't mind me^^
person Rachel Dracon
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've got Bakura acting in a way I've never seen someone portray him in before. It's nice though, it works really well. I'd say it wasn't one of your best lemons, but it was great overall story, with a happy aftertaste. ^.^
person Kirie321
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am being completely serious when I say that I had tears in my eyes.
That was amazing. Great job, both of you. Chip and artimus.
person Fate
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was *fantastic.* There's nothing more I can say! *Fantastic!*
person Chel-chan
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute story.
person Eres
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was cute, but Bakura acted like a kid in the last part. Anyhow, it was good, although you should really watch out with your spelling! ^^