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for Just a Bit of Catnip

by darkvixen

person vixinkitsune
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is kinda creepy but I like it when it scares you. Why does Marik stay with Bakura if he hurts him? Isn't that the smart thing to do? Leave him? Ryou said he loved Bakura... Why is that so hard for the stupid demon to get that he is loved by people and if he wasn't so mean to them he'd have alot more people that liked him.... Anyway please do update soon I'd like to see the end of this.
person SweetMisery
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue soon
person happy yaoi lover
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
T-T that was short......but its ok! i liked it any way *hands arti band aids*bats are dangeres if you dont know how to use them...*rubs lumps on head* ^_^
person deb
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee!!!
Great chapter!!!
Whats going to happen now?????
Tsk tsk Ryou, he shoulda listened to Malik! Bet he feels silly hehe
CANT wait to see what will happen now!
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person happy yaoi lover
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*yells at arti's friends and family*NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!BRING ARTI-SAMA BACK!!!!!!!!!! ^_^' any i was reading this again and realized that *gasp* i hadn't reviewd this chap yet O_O! so here it is...the review.....oh what the hell update! *gives arti an base ball bat* to help you fight your way through the peoples.
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...I've honestly never seen Marik going so angsty and so abused before...I love every single minute of it...so painful and pretty....eheheehe *evil thoughts* Wow! About time you updated! *being a hypocrite* nah, you updated pretty quickly, I'm just impatient. When I read this chapter I was like "OMG I GOT to review this chapter!" just cause Marik was angsting in it... ^^ Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!
person Tayko
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tayko: HI,

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW this story is great keep it up!!
update soon PWEASE *puppy dog eyes*
i hope Ryou and Malik are gonna be okey!

Yami Tayko: yeah it's fantastic!!
Keep it up!
BTW my hikari and me are from the Netherland so if she or i wrote somthing wrong.......she's sorry
and I'm NOT mwahahaha bye

Tayko: much love bye
Yami Tayko: YEAH BYE SEE YA
person Caska and Stef
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Caska: I hate Bakura!

Stef: I thought you liked Bakura.

Caska: I did but he hurt Marik so I dont like him.

Stef: I really dont understand you.

Caska: *grins* good.

Stef: I give up. Now Caska be nice and give your opinion of the chapter.

Caska: Nicely written, really good plo ver very annoyingly sweet Ryou.

Stef: So?

Caska: I loved it. ^_^ how bout you?

Stef: It was a very good chapter. I feel really sorry for Ryou and Marik but who cares. Anything else you want to say to the author?

Caska: Yup yup I want Malik/Ryou chappie or a very gentle Marik with Ryou. pretty please *puppy dog eyes*

Stef: Guess that was it well update soon.



person cloeyvalentine
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_____O UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! I WANNA SEE BAKU RAPE MARIK! ^___________^


At least that's what I hope he's gonna do >.>;

Anywhoo, love the fic! Keep it up! *Glomps and smooches.* Ja! Update soon or I'll sick Baku on ya. ^_~
person happy yaoi lover
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! an update.....ryou torture sounds gooooooood ^_____________^