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for Beautiful Silence

by ShardyPsychoElf

person Yami Nefertira
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, well well, Bakura No Yami's being SEXY FIEND again! Not that we don't LOVE him more for it! Well writen and very HOT!

More awesome Bakura sexiness please!
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was real good
person Jessica
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was extremely well writen and unique. You did a great job giving Serenity a deeper more human personality (instead of just being an extension off her brother lol) but still managed to keep her fairly cannon. Yami Bakura (Which I'm guessing wasn't really Yami Bakura) was also very in character. I was shocked by the ending and thought it was totaly brilliant. Your take on the shadow realm was also pretty cool. I always wondered about what would happen if you screwed there. Lol weird thing to wonder, but Bakura/Serenity was always my favorite pairing. I always figured since it was a pretty scary place for humans, that they would probably go into emotional over drive, or what not lol. The last line was perfect, as well. How you managed to pull off erotic horror, with a little bit of sadistic humor, (plus a mind boggling surprise ending) really deserves a medal or something lol. I wish I had more to give you than just a measly review lol. (With complimentary spelling and grammer mistakes of course ^^)


Thank you for writing this. It truly is the best I've read all year.
-Jessica
person yami nefertira
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo bakura is bad ass in this one, and with serenity? hmmm odd couple , but i an=m a little confused by the ending? well writen
person Chrissy E E
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kool fic. i like the way u placed it during that duel with kaiba and the 8th dules. bs. but why did u make bakura a vampire??
person Chrissy E E
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kool fic. i like the way u placed it during that duel with kaiba and the 8th dulelists. but why did u make bakura a vampire??
person Chrissy E E
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kool fic. i like the way u placed it during that duel with kaiba and the 8th dulelists. but why did u make bakura a vampire??
person Chrissy E E
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kool fic. i like the way u placed it during that duel with kaiba and the 8th dulelists. but why did u make bakura a vampire??
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*glomps Shardy* Whee! Yayeh! =D I loved it, but you know that already. Hehe. Just thought I'd review for the hell of it anyway. ^-^;;

(btw - I'm almost finished with that Malik/Serenity PWP, I got about 1-3 pages to go. >=D)
person Godlet2b
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i cannot beleive i read that -_- lol i'm more of a pervert than i thought -_- riss would be thouraly dissapointed in me -_- i'm supposed to be the innocent one of all my friends -_- i'm like Diana, thoe 15 year old that looks 12 (seriously) -_- k i'm just gonna stop now... i wanna read the Kaiba ren one ^_^