rate_review Reviews

I have to say that I almost didn't read your fiction because the thought of Pegasus with Ryou... Gah! However, I am glad that I did. Your story was well written and intriguing. I liked how you started off with one character's side of the story and then followed it up with the other's. You were able to show that Pegasus had pure "evil" - perhaps "selfish" is a better word - intentions towards Ryou at first and that certain mannerisms of Ryou's even irritated him in the beginning. You even pointed out that Pegasus had loads of self-doubt as to why his feelings had changed for Ryou. Ryou's observations of Pegasus and the elder's odd behaviors were sometimes very funny (the limo bit). That Ryou was given time to "warm up " and to actually want a relationship of sorts with Pegasus was a delightful change to the usual rape dramas that seem to plague poor Ryou and his character. And the fact that Pegasus would/could wait until the very last possible second to claim his prize was important. The lemon was nicely done over all. I'm glad I took a chance! Thanks for surprising me with a delightful read!

cool...I never thought Pegasus/Ryou pairings could be THIS good. But it's definitely cute! I loved it! Update!

Ha! HA! /Finally/ I found this story again! I remembered it from ff.net because of one line at the end of the first chapter that I wrote down because I liked it, but I could never find it again after that. I'm glad you postedherehere. *grin*

One thing, though--random symbols have pretty much eaten your story. It's kind of distracting.