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Me: u know, u should make a sequal after this
Yami: *rolls eyes* u always say that
Me: what?! I luv this story!!!
Yami: better than Family By Choice by Dragondreamer?
Me: *frowns* no, no offense though...
Yami: whatever, we still need 2 update our stories!!!
Me: i know, i'll do it tonight, don't worry
Yami: i hope so... *leaves room*
Me: we always update at least Wednesday or on the weekends, yea know? Unless i have 2much homework, i don't do it on those dayz. *sighs* Anywayz, CONTINUE!!! MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER VERY LONG!!! CONTINUE!!!

*laughs* wow... he broke the phone! Poor Seto, all that frustration. I think that was the funniest part! Ohhh, I'm gonna be sad when this ends. It's such a fun story!

'A horny Seto is better than an angry Seto.' OHH cHH can I find that out for real! Lucky puppy. Great chapter.

Hehe i'm glad they worked that out, huh stupid cleaning company trying to ruin things HA kaiba showed them lol. More soon

Oh my lord! I read "Spiffy Billed Duck" instead of what you'd actually written! I nearly shot my soda out of my nose! This was a good chapter (soda nearly on the monitor not withstanding...) and the whole story's just been a blast! Keep it up!!!

Naughty boys are always the best!

BUM BUM BUM WHY MUST IT BE A CLIFIE???? well ne way great story update soon plz!!!!!!

Oh man, that was great, and sort of romantic. You left an evil cliff, but I like it; great work!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
LATER...

awww, sweet beginning. LOL Seto should just give in and buy himself a mug that says "Make me late for work" I'm thinking thaey wey would happily do that every day. *bangs head on keyboard* Second cliffhanger tonight. Just not my day.

Great chapter. Ilook forward to the next one. So whos on the phone? Joey's dad? Yugi? Tristian? I think only Joey's dad whould effect him that way, but I may be wrong. Keep up the good work.