rate_review Reviews

Hey! I aboslutly LOVE your story so far! (i also can't spell ^.^''') gomen! Please write more! please please please please! Cause this has got to be one of the best fanfictions i have read in a long time! hehe. please update! *puppy eyes* ill be waiting!

Oh man this was very good please keep it up I want to know who came to vist Yugi

Wow, I love this storyline! But you could have done without that interval between chapters where I nearly DIED! -_-' Anywho...I think your story is a great piece of work, but one thing bothers me...I don't like being extremely critical, and if this is, yell at me later but...Your spelling. There's nothing wrong with the majority of the words, but I noticed that it's happening with past tense (U know, -e and -ed and crap like that?) and with commas and colins and semi-colins. But don't let it get you down, I'll die until you update again! I still think it's great!

<+Ame+>

Ame: BRAVO, BRAVO!!! WOW! At least I liked it...~glares at the people who are too stuck up to read and/or review it~ I think-
Yame: You think?
Ame: Yes...I...Do...Anyways, I think it's absuolutely great and that you should update really, really soon before I go CRAZY with anticipation...O_O
Yame:0_0 Good Rah, what _have_ I gotten myself into?
Ame: Good story...update...Morph!...can't wait...update...~insane laughter~AND SPEAKING OF INSANITY!!!
Yame: I'll think i'll just take my hikari here and ship off. Gomen for Ame's freakishness...-_-'
Author:O_o
Yame: Yes, yes, I do deal with this everyday...

Ame: BRAVO, BRAVO!!! WOW! At least I liked it...~glares at the people who are too stuck up to read and/or review it~ I think-
Yame: You think?
Ame: Yes...I...Do...Anyways, I think it's absuolutely great and that you should update really, really soon before I go CRAZY with anticipation...O_O
Yame:0_0 Good Rah, what _have_ I gotten myself into?
Ame: Good story...update...Morph!...can't wait...update...~insane laughter~AND SPEAKING OF INSANITY!!!
Yame: I'll think i'll just take my hikari here and ship off. Gomen for Ame's freakishness...-_-'
Author:O_o
Yame: Yes, yes, I do deal with this everyday...

I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying your fic and I eagerly await an update ^.^

I really like this story. I especially like that they speak through their minds so much. I do hope that ethinthing works out(seeing how this is a dark fic I doubt it)
Anyway keep up the good work I want to see what happens.

Aw, please write more i so want to know what happens next and who is the person who grabed yugi please update so i can find out anyways very good

RD:UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE NOW U MUST UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE hehe sry but this is a good story so pls update hehe sry just excited well gtg now TTFNTA FTA FOR NOW oh and i was wondering if my of sof saying goodbye is a bad thing pls tell me i need to know thnks ^____^

Wow...just...wow!
LATER...