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**sad puppy eyes**please write more? I like it alot! wondering how yugi will teach yami he's not as weak and dependant as he thinks he is
J-chan

I didn't notice any credit given to Christine Feehan for this story, so if it is based on her books (and really, the similarity is so striking it almost has to be) she needs to be given credit. The premise is good, but as far as I can tell, not entirely yours. It has far too many similarities to one of the Carpathian "Dark" novels, Dark Desire.

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I relly love this story, I mean there is eveything, comedy, romance but only one thing I didn't like, the part were Ryou and Malik were killed, well the way they were just............ I think you got the point. Really looking forward for youe nest chapter!!!!!!!!!!^_^

Chapter 2 is unfinished...other than that, its really good!

Hehe! That was an awesome story! I loved it! IF that was the ending, though, it was a little sucky...

My god, this story has been something that I have been wanting to read for a while. I love the whole Hikari/Aibou thing, along with the concept of the barer and such. I love the possessiveness of Yami and the others and now they all have kiddos. Dude you have to continue this soon. I am so addicted to this story that I have read it like three times. Keep up the great work.

~Yami Yuugi

you have to keep going. i want to know if the Aibous catch Pegasus and if anyone else has babies. Anyway great story.
UPDATE OR FEEL ME WRATH *shakes fist*

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Please please please update this fic! I'm dying from suspense! Hope you can find the time to update this fic because it's really good!