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for Sisterly Problems

by blackcat8301

person Antidaeophobia
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nii-sama from my understanding means 'Honorable older brother' while nii-san just means 'older brother', it seems kinda weird to have her use honorifics to describe Ryou even though he speaks using them almost all the time in the japanese anime.
Anyway, I understand that there British but you have them speaking extra weird, and yugiyugi you could shorten down to Yami Yugi or just Yami.
I hope you continue this story, it sounds interesting. ^_^ I look forward to more.
~Antidaeophobia~
person Rockinmuffin
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! INCEST! O_O Just kidding! This story is really good and it has a lot of potential. I wonder what;s gonna happen when Bakura finds out about Ryou's sister. DUN DUN DUN! (Isert melodramatic music here please) I can't wait until your next update. ^_^
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks to all who reviewed so far.
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I need help with this story, people! Please help me!
person Ochodre
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm, interesting.. I had been hoping to find a story about Ryou and his sister, and this one looks good so far. Please continue. ^^;