rate_review Reviews

Really good story! It's nice to read a story with an actual plot and character building interaction between Yugi and Atem before the lemony stuff.

I diffently liked the end. but I felt sorry for Yugi losing his granfather..... Anyways back to the end, Yami hitting Yugi's sentive spot like that now that's good. I loved the story ^^ Read mine and see if you like it.

Eriko: awww, this is so sweet, i loved it! this really deserves the five star rating, congratulations! this is going down as one of my fave stories!
Bakura: tcht...another yugi and yami fic...
Eriko: but a very good and sweet yugi and yami fic! sigh...how i wish to have someone like yami...he's so sweet and brave and perfect and sexy and----
Bakura: =_=... we get the picture.
Eriko: humph! you're just jealouBakuBakura: O_O why would i be jealous of the little twerp?!
Eriko: ...(shrug) meh, anyway, great oneshot! kepp up your writing skills! you're great!

O! Th! That was so...BEAUTIFUL!!! *Cries* lol. I'm okay now. ^_^ I loved it! I'm undoubtedly going to be reading a lot of your fics...Too bad fanfiction.net banned NC-17 ne? ff.net, no offense, has better stuff. Author Alerts, Review Alerts, all kinds of stuff! But still, it was wonderful! ~Karasu8

One word: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
that was a very pretty story!

Keep on Writin'
Reviewer #34321

awww that was so sweet Keep up the great work oMG that was sad, but I am so glad that Yugi has Yami to help in out. I hope you write more soon hon ^__^