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for Keith on The Prowl

by Hentai

person Kitt
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Urgh. Anzu does not act like that. Since when is being some ones friend a crime or bad quality? Do you not like friends? Also, she's not the only one in YGO who friendship rants ::rolls eyes::. The whole fricking stories about friendship. YuJou = Friendship. Yami Yuugi is the one who goes on and on about it.

Dissapointing...I thought you could do better than that...

And, personally, I don't care if you flame me for this or not. ::shrugs::.
person Kitt
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, that wasn't meant as a flame. Just a bad review. There is a difference.

I've had it with all the thoughtless fanfic out there. ::shrug:: And you know, I'm angry. I refuse to sit by any longer.

I'VE gotten flames and bad reviews. And I think I can take it. Not everyone will like your work. It's a fact - Not everyone likes yellow, or the world, or christianity, etc.

FYI - I do like Bandit Keith ^^. My friend Star corrupted me XD. Just not they're portrayal of him ::shrugs::.

Also, In my faith, Not only the Cow is holy. All Animals are.

E-mail me if you want to keep up this argument ::Shrugs::. I'm not going to spam their review any more.


~ Kitt

person boobookittiefujimi
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah. Love the story!! Keep it the fuck up!! Love it!!!
person BLUE EYES
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAHHA GO ACIDFLOWER

AND ANZU CAN DIE SHE IS A FUCKING WHORE THATS RIGHT A WHORE

I LOVED THE FIC !!!!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP !!!!
person EVIL MJ
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh I have to respond to that flame.

Didn't you read the intro. This was a story specifically written to annoy and torment me. If they didn't like friendship do you really think they would have bothered to do this?

The warning clearly states ANZU BASHING...if you are not up for that kinda fun don't bother. I can understand that everyone has their own particuarly story or character that they like, Hey, I am sure I'm part of the minority that happens to enjoy Keith ;p, but man don't give out a bad review for something that was meant to be funny. Holy cow..get a sense of humor.

person Lady Elfskye
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! ROTFLMFAO!!!!! Dear Ra, I haven't laughed so hard all day!! *wipes tears from eyes* That was too much. Heehee, I never thought I'd feel sorry for Keith, but...ah, well. The feeling has passed. Let the bashing begin again!! I hope you know I will never be able to look at my neice's Care Bear the same ever again!!! I love the running commentary! That was a great touch! Once again, you gals have made my day!! Cheers~

Lady Elfskye
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was freaking hilarious. I am so happy that I read this. This story made my day. I am actually crying and few stories have made me cry. I think one of my lungs has collapsed and my heart has stopped. I love the bashing of both of my most hated characters and you guys side notes were awesome. This was great.
person XHiddenwithinDarknessX
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
XD!!! LOL!!!!! Thats the sickest funniest thing I have ever read!!! *shudders* Ewww...Bandit Keith in the is not the best mental picture!!!! ^________^ Your a good writing! Write more fics....I'll be reading ^_~
person EVIL MJ
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I bet you two thought you were being funny!!
Well jokes on you, cause all that talk of naked Keith just turned me on!!!

I wanted to strip his clothes off and ride him like a prize pony until he was screaming my name. Break out the body oil. Rub him all over. Can ya feel it girls, hot, hard Keith thrusting and moaning. Panting and groaning ....

Are you grossed out yet?

GOOD that will teach you to mess with my boy.
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, ok that was sick...

EVIL MJ
OH MY GOD LOL!!!!!