Sweet Sins

Disclaimer: I do not own enything othere then the plot. dount sue! pleas!
Warnings: Catholic!Jou,Yaoi, Slash, smut, non censored, Lemon, sexual situations on public places and um yeah that ought’ a be it. Don't like don't read. (probebly OOC its my err first)
Parings: S/J, YB/RB (later on Y/YY, M/M)
Summery: what happens when 2 frainds are hiding inside the stall that was used by the catholic priests were people came to confess there “sins”.

BEFORE YOU READ!
~ something ~ = Marik thoughts
# something # = Bakura thoughts
{ something } = Jou thoughts

"talk"


The story! Chapter one?

"What the fuck?!"

"Shh there’s someone coming this way!"

Jou enters the stall beside.

"forgive me father for I have sinned."

Marik panics and stares at Bakura to do something. ~the mutt's Catholic?!~

"Ehem when was your last confession son."

Bakura answers in a deeper voice then normal thanking the gods that Ryou was from England.

"one year, three months and two days father."

"uh continue pleas, why so distressed son?"

"well to begin with I have found myself to be bisexual. And have during the last 6 months found myself being courted by one of the most bizarre and annoying people I've ever met in my life! I mean sure he’s gorgeous and all that but he kills my nerves! He is the most immature person I've ever met in my entire life! He’s so annoying I want to tear my hair out most of the time!And the other times either strangle him or kiss him."

#Hey! Ryou is MY fuck-hole! And he's not that bad!#

"Gashh I don’t know how Yuugi and Ryou finds the patients to like him. Heh I don’t even know how I got the patients to love him. Oh gods I’m actually in love with him. I don’t know what to do!" "I don’t even know were to begin!"

"hmm how about from the beginning its usually the best part to start."

"um yeah that sound like a good idea. He, well it all started fore about 6 months ago when my fraind Mai finely gave birth to my sweet godson Yuki. He’s a real sweet heart!
Anyway, HE was there flirting with the otheres. Yuugi, Ryou, Mai the hole fucking bunch! Even that moron Marik!"

~Hey! I resent that!~

"Well maybe flirting wouldn’t be the appropriate word but still you get the picture. Actually now when I think about it, it was more like evol death glare contest, hmm.
Anyway then Yuugi comes up to me with these intense eyes. I mean seriously scary eyes. The ones he has when he plays. Eh he’s the best yu-gi-oh playere ever,
and one of the sweetes and naiv dude I’ve ever met. He starts talking to me, staring at me as if I had stolen something. He may be sweet and all but he's scary when it comes to injustise, very scary. And then Yami aproches and starts talking about cards and stuff.
I guess its 'cuss he’s to shy to talk directly to Yuugi."

~Oh comme on get to the pynt!~

"Which is just absurd. Yami and shy in the same sentence is just wrong and surreal. Well I guess it happens even to the best of Casanovas."

~giggle yeah that IS wrong!~

"Anyway HE was staring at me, his beautiful blue eyes bore into mine straight into my bare being! I felt like I was on fire! Then Ryou comes over to me and asks me if I’m okay. By then I decided to get some fresh air, there was just too much tension in the atmosphere. So I go out to have a smoke. Yes I smoke but my frainds don’t know. And I sincerely hope they never will know."

# Too late mate. #

~ well thats new! I wonder how much hed pay for silense...~

"So imagine my luck when He comes out too."

//FLASHBACK//

"Hey pup got a one to share?"

"Don't call me that monybags but sure, here. *hands Seto kaib a smoke. He inhales deeply and smirks.

"Thanks pup."

"watever and don't call me dog kaiba I got a name ya know, and its Jou."

"heh okay, but then you will call me Seto, deal?"

"Deal. (awkward silens) Hey isn’t that Orion’s belt?"

"Yes it is."

Suddenly a could breeze swept by and I was shaking slightly. A coat slipped on my shoulders I turn around and se him smirking and my heart skips a HUGE beat.

"eh thanks."

"You looked could. Thanks fore the smoke. I shuld be hedding home."
"yeah its getting late isn’t it? I should be hedding of home too. If I stay I’ll probebly get drunk!"

"hahaha yeah, want a ride?"

"ah sure thanks."

//End FLACHBACK//

"So there I am, arms around this gorgeous mans waist thanking the gods fore this opportunity. I mean who knew Set not only owned but actualy drove an MC?
So when we finely arrive at the others side of the town, I never really had appreciated the size of Domino until that moment, I reach up and I kiss him!"

~Woah go dogboy!~

#so Mr cocky has a spine.#

"I blame it on the alcohol I drank.. Anyway, things happened and we somehow stumbled into my apartment and well…"

//FLASHBACK//

"Mmmhh, w-wait are you sure about this pup?"

{what does he think I am? A virgin? Oh yeah…}

~Hmm I wonder how many he’s had…~

#.... common get to the good part!#

"As ready as I’ll ever be." I half whisper half moan as his hands brushes past my sensitive nipples as he takes my shirt of and lets it drop to the floor.
He backs me up against my bed and practically rips of my pants as I fall backwards lifting up my legs over his shoulders. Sucking my life essence out of my mouth. Softly letting go. I feel his lips and tong trailing soft kisses over my chin, my neck, down to my nickel bones were he stops to suck lightly, making me moan slightly.
My nipples! Oh gods he’s sucking on one of them and with wet fingers toying the other, they harden to pebbles I can feel his clothed, heavenly crouch, rocking against mine.
Oh heavens I want more, need more!

"Seto! Seto pleas! Stop teasing me!"

"mmh but pup I’ve just begun and I so love to listen to your pretty moans"

"aahhh Seto! Seto, pleas more, need you.."

"your wish is my command."

His tongue started licking a pattern down to my bellybutton were he dips it causing electricity to rush thru ought my entire body finely going straight to my cock making it twitch.

"Ooohh" Seto grins up at me.

"Quite verbal aren’t we?"

"Can't help myself. Mmh don’t stop!"

And with a predatory grin the evil teasing bastard slowly takes of my grey boxers and tosses them over his shoulders. He looks down at my cock as if it was a delicious treat that he was just about to devour.
And devour it he did! As hot wetness engulfed my member his demonically evil hands travel down my body to my butt cheeks, squeezing them firmly. Then brining one hand up to my mouth letting 3 fingers sip in my mouth.
I suck on them viciously, moaning around them. Ones well coated with my saliva he brings the hand back down to my ass spreading my butt cheeks letting one of his long slender fingers sip inside my tight ring of muscles.

"AHH Shit! Setoo!!! AHH."

I’m throwing my head from side to side at this point. Pleasure over taking my senses as I arch my body unconsciously lifting my hips not knowing whether to push into his hot talented mouth and tongue or back towards his finger that’s now slowly, torturously pumping in and out of my anus. The bastard adds another one of those delicious fingers and starts making scissor like motions with them widening my
opening, searching fore something. And finding it! Lords I’m seeing stars as he rubs my prostate. And the greedy bastard doesn’t stop at that ether! By know I’m begging him,
screaming his name like a mantra making my voice go hoarse. His other hand that was fondling my balls until now is searching its way behind them towards that special spot.
And finds it. Sucking my dick like a vacuum cleaner, trusting his fingers fast and hard against my prostate and rubbing my sweet spot vigorously. Screaming at the top of my lungs, I arch my body, toes curled, fingers cramped, tightly fisting my cotton sheets ripping the material slightly with my nails, my head thrown backwards as I see white. Coming into that heavenly mouth with a seismic force! Writhing stills.
My breathing slowly getting back to normal wiliest my body starts to relax. I look down to see him clean my cock with his tongue with a cat like smirk.

"mm delicious." He mumbles as he takes of his cloths and lies beside me ready to sleep.
Al I can say is. Wow! And I fall into darkness

//End FLASHBACK//

"Well after that we kind of hit it of and started dating secretly. I mean we are rivals and stuff after al.

~weeei to much info! don’t get a nose bleed, Don’t get a nose bleed!~

#he-he-he that reminds me a bit of my Ryou. love it when he screams#

"He’s one of the sweetest most romantic man I’ve ever have the pleasure to meet!!" *giggle*

~ he? giggles?! Thats soo gay!~

#thatas a “tad” out of character. Even fore dogboy#
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ookay so I reposted it with a few modications err moderation.. err W/E you get me.
what do yah think now? like? shuld I continue or just drop this one for real??