You spin me round baby

(I don't own YGH)
Warning: Yaoi & Heinte so if you are underage, CLICK OFF NOW!
Yugi: (on phone) Gramps isn't gonna be home till tommarow night, so bring the gang over tonight, later Jou
Yami: Are you sure this is a good Idea?
Yugi: Who needs granps, your the old man of the house when he's away
Yami: Just don't get into trouble tonight
Yugi: I won't
Yami: I'll be upstairs incase you need me
Yugi: Don't worry Yam (Door bell rings)
Hi guys (Jou, Honda, and Anzu come in)
Anzu: nice night for some specail games
Yugi: What do you mean by specail games?
Jou: You'll see
Honda: We were thinkin' since you had no friends before you met us, you never got invited to any real parties
Yugi: Just the usual family ones
Anzu: What first guys
Yami: (Came down stairs see's them all sitting in a circle) I don't want to know what spell your trying to cast but leave me out of it
Anzu: Were not casting spells Yami, it's a game, get with the times
Yami: Do you see me laughing?
Yugi: Come join us
Yami: (Sits with Yugi) why?
Yugi:(Wispers to Yami) Don't leave me alone with them, they are up to something
Yami: You sound paranoid
Anzu: Yugi since it's your house you spin first
Yugi: What?
Anzu: Spin this bottle and kiss the person it points to
Yugi: WHAT?
Yami: I don't get it either I never played this either, how do you win?
Anzu: The games ends once everyone is kissed at least once,
Jou: Spin Yuge
Yugi: Ok (points to Yami) HUH!
Anzu: Go on, don't you want to kiss him?
Yugi: (Embarrassed) I just, Uh......(Yami scooted over to him)
Yami: rules are rules (Kisses Yugi good and long, Yugi was subdued by the strong muscular tonge twirling in his mouth overpowering his ribbon like tongue)
Anzu: Ok that's enough (Still kissing)
Honda: Guys? (Still kissing.....still...)
Jou: Yam let the little guy breath (Still...)
Anzu: (Slaps Yami's butt) Enough (Yami wakes from the kiss) Your spin
Yugi: (Waking from the kiss) wow (Blushes at Yami who still stares at him warmly)
Yami: Fine (Spin points to Honda)
Honda: Your not gonna kiss me that long are you?
Yami: Your not specail enough (Kisses Honda but not as long as his signifigant other)
Honda: My spin (Lands on Anzu)
Anzu: DAMN IT!
Honda: WHAT?
Anzu: Nothing! (Annoyed)
Honda: Come here cutie (Kisses Anzu)
Anzu: I've had better
Honda: EEERRR!!!
Anzu: My spin (Lands on Jou) well it's not that bad
Jou: (Sarcasticly) I'm fond of you too (Kiss was better for Anzu) My spin (Lands on Yugi) AWE, come here little guy (Nice kiss, Yami looked at Jou angry, Yugi noticed and quickly finished the kiss)
Yugi: Well now what do you want to do?
Anzu: I picked the movie this week
Honda: Not another chick flick!
Anzu: It is not, I picked up Space wars 3 (Yugi, Anzu, Jou and Honda sat on the couch, Yami sat on a chair across the room. Yugi noticed
during the movie, Yami had been looking at him the whole night, he looked back at him and blushed when they made eye contact, Yami signaled to him to follow him, Yami got up and walked up stairs, Yugi got up and followed stopping at the bottom of the stairs, Yami signalled to him to come up to see him. Yugi did come up but then Yami lead him to his room. Yugi stopped in his doorway...but he didn't see Yami anywhere...The door suddenly closed behind him. He turned quickly only to see Yami lock the door as his eyes still locked with his.)
Yugi: (gulp) Yami?
Yami: (Walks toward him intimadatingly looking down at him with lust) Now Aibou (Holds his thin wrists in his strong large hands) Time to finsish what we started (Yami walked yugi backward to his bed and lay him down, his heavy frame gently pushing ontop of his light fragile body, Yami ingaged in the earlier long kiss, but this time Yugi could feel Yami's arousal hardening, heating, growing against Yugi's submisivly smaller groin, wich copied the elder's experience. Yugi lost all train of thought as he gasped when he felt Yami's large hands slipping up his shirt, tickling as he ran his fingure tips up Yugi's ticklish ribs and groped Yugi's chest rising and falling rapidly. He could believe what was happening. Yami sat up and slowly removed his own shirt, Yugi reached his hand out to touch the muscular body revealing in front of his eyes. Yami then striped yugi of his shirt then continued groping him and allowing the little one to grope him in return. Yugi looked up at his lover and smiled lightly at him. Yami responded by leaning over to his little ones ear gently nibbling and breathing heavily, arousing his Aibou more with each breath, every motion of his jaw, as his tongue slipped out circling hot wet sensation around the frame of Yugi's tiny ear. Yugi moaned when Yami lowered his head to nibble Yugi's neck. Yami gave up on his neck and recliamed his sweet mouth, groaning as his tongue re-entered subdueing the little one to arch his back and wrap those tiny arms around his lover and caress his back. Frustrated with the leather pants Yami sat up unziped Yugi as he unziped him. They threw off their pants revealing to eachother they're complety naked bodies. Yami sinicaly smiled at the Yugi's ercted boyhood, completely vulnerable and defensless making Yugi nervous and a bit uncomfortable until his sinful smile melted away with a seductive dark look in his eyes. Yami lay ontop of the scared little boy feeling every tiny muscle in his body shivering in fear.)
Yami: (Looking into his glossened eyes) What's wrong baby? (Kisses his forhead)
Yugi: (Hesitant to answere)...nothing is wrong....
Yami: Liar (Kisses him up and down his neck) you can tell me anything
Yugi: (Scared)....I've never been loved before...I'm afriad you might hurt me
Yami: I won't hurt you. Unless you want me too hehehe
Yugi: Please don't
Yami: I won't Aibou, I never will (Kisses lips lightly) Lay back and close your eyes, I'm gonna make you relax
Yugi: What are you doing? (Closes his eyes and feels his inner thy violated by Yami's mouth, Yugi moaned griped Yami's hair coaxing him to go further up but then tries to push him away as his fear returned by Yami's warm lips lightly griped Yugi's virgin spot, Yugi jumped back a bit away as much as he could. Yami did't want to hear it, He grasped Yugi's hips and forced him to lay back down.)
Yugi: NO!
Yami: I won't hurt you, I promise
Yugi: I don't know if I'm ready for this...
Yami: We've gotten this far
Yugi: I know, we shouldn't have...
Yami: I promised I wouldn't hurt you, why are you hurting me. I love you, and I want to share my body with you as I did my mind, heart, and soul.
Yugi: Did I hurt you?
Yami: Mentally, I feel you don't want me....
Yugi: I do...........Yami
Yami: yes.....(Yugi re-enters the kiss then stops to smile at Yami)
Yugi: I do want you..I guess I'm just acting like a scared little virgin
Yami: No one thinks they are ready their first time, truely
Yugi: Pin me, make me want it! (His mind and body finally agreed on what they wanted, and it was to be loved physically for the first time. Yami didn't waste anymore time, he wanted to claim Yugi for himself. He placed his hands on each inner thy and held Yugi's legs as far open as he could get them, his own erection pained him to proceed, he slipped in his fingure on Yugi's untouched, virgin entrance and watched the boys body quiver with each addition fingure probing his moaning lover stretching him to an apropriate size, Yugi watched in the mirror across the bedroom everything Yami was doing to him. Yami groped Yugi's inner thy's watching his boyhood flail back and forth, finally to get him completley seduced he took that soft organ in his mouth and licked every inch of it from head to root, keeping his hands firmly on Yugi's inner thys rendering him completly helpless against his will. Yugi shouted walst gripping the bedsheets above his head wich thrown back, Yugi forgot his fear and everthing except the feelings of passion he never felt before.) OH GOD! ( He could barley breathe. Yami was to intense for him but he wanted more. Yami rose up from his assault and lay ontop of Yugi kissing his neck and going lower each kiss, all the way down to his naval, then raising back up to hold his sweet breakable body up to his bulky bronzed body only to take his mouth once again blowing his mind and stealing his breath. Yugi dug his nails into Yami's shoulders and begged him) Now
Yami: (Panting) now my love? (Yami lay his lover down)
Yugi: Yes now (Yami positioned himself at Yugi's entrance and slowly pushed in) YES, OH YAMI! (Yami rolled his hips to Yugi's feeling the tiny boys lonsome unite warmiing against Yami's stomach, Yami gripped it and held it as they sincronicly moved as one groaning in passion, sweating from desire, and finally happy to be together at last in a lovers embrace, hours later they finished and became sleepy. Yugi completly forgot about his guests)
Yugi: Oh no, I hope they didn't hear us
Yami: And if they did so what...How do you feel about it?
Yugi: I feel good.....I love you
Yami: And I You
Yugi:(Getting dressed) The movie ended hours ago they probably noticed I'm missing (When Yugi went down stairs the others were smiling at him) Sorry guys..I was...
Jou: forget trying to look for an excuse
Anzu: We heard you upstairs
Honda: Close the door next time
Yugi: IT WAS CLOSED! (covers mouth)
Yami: (Yawning) Hey guys
Jou: Gee, I wonder what your tired from
Yami: How would you like a punch in the mouth
Jou: I didn't mean anything buy it
Yugi: SO what movie do you guys wanna watch?
Anzu: How about the movie 'Ghost'?
Yugi: Har har very funny!!
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