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Surprise at Sea - Alternate POV Version

By: Naye025
folder Yu-Gi-Oh › General
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 10
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Disclaimer: I do not own YuGiOh!, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Erotic Foreplay

Surprise at Sea – Alternate POV

Welcome to the final chapter of this Alternate Point of View Version! I would like to personally thank each and every one of you for reading and reviewing! I can’t say it enough. Your support is greatly appreciated and welcomed!
Now, we are at the original Chapter 10 which was originally taken from Kaiba’s POV, but today, you get it from Jou’s . (Dance!!) What was going through his mind during the dance? Find out and enjoy the sour stuff. It’s falling everywhere!!

Chapter 8: Erotic Foreplay *Jou’s POV*

“Hey, what’s up Jou?”

“Nothing Kwak. You get everything ready for later?”

“Yea, the song, ‘Crazy in Love’? Got it right here. Just give me the signal whenever you’re ready.”

“I will. I’m going to talk to Yugi and Yami for a while. Keep an eye on me when I finish talking to them and go back to Seto.”

“No problem.”

I leave the DJ booth and go to Yugi and Yami’s table. Look at them, so wrapped up in each other. I wonder how long they will be here before they leave.

“Hey guys.” I say turning a chair backwards and sitting down.

“Hey Jou.” they both say.

“I have something to ask you two.”

“What is it?” asks Yugi.

“Well, yesterday, Otogi told me that he saw Anzu on board. Isn’t she supposed to be at some dance recital?”

“Well, she told me that she dropped it…or quit or something.” Yugi says. “I really wasn’t paying attention.”

“Yea, but what are the odds of her being on this cruise with us?” asks Yami.

“Slim to none. But if she is, how did she get on undetected? How did she even know about this?” I ask them.

“She came over the day we got the invite in the mail and since she left, the invite came up missing. Maybe she got a hold of it.” suggests Yugi.

“But think about it Aibou, she did call and ask you what you were doing today. Who knows, maybe she followed us from home.”

“Well, I don’t know what to say. I know Seto’s going to be even more pissed off. But are you sure the two of you haven’t seen her on board anywhere…or seen anything that reminded you of her?” I ask.

Yugi and Yami look at each other then laugh.

“Do you think we would actually be looking for Anzu or anything that reminds us of her?” Yami says lauging.

“You got a point. Well, I have to go now. Got something special planned for Seto. Stick around and watch. You may learn something.” I say winking at them.

Yugi yawns awkwardly.

“I’m getting sleepy. I think Kura and Ri got to the punch.” Yugi says.

Yami looks at Yugi and does a fake yawn. “Yea, me sleepy too. So, we’re going to turn it in for the night. Thanks for the party.”

I know what the two of you are about to do. I shake my head at them ad go back to my table with Seto. Why is he just staring at me like that? Well, who cares? I look damn good and he knows it!

“So what did they say?” Seto asks as I sit next to him.

“They haven’t seen her. But I know that Otogi wouldn’t lie.”

“How did she get on?! I gotta fire my security team for this!”

Yes, please…

“Calm down Seto. If she is on, and she learns the truth, I don’t care. I just wanna stay with you.” I say holding his hand up a little.

I kiss the back of his hand and watch as Seto becomes like a giddy school girl meeting her famous crush. Heh, who ever though the great Seto Kaiba could have those kind of emotions? He’s tough as nails on the outside, but soft and squishy on the inside. And he knows I’m the only one who can make the outside the same as the inside.

“I just know she’s going to react all crazy about this, and…” Seto begins as he tries to harden his outside once more. I put two fingers on his lips to quiet him.

“Don’t worry about it. If she does go and act all crazy and stuff, we got 3 ancient…well, make that 3 spirits and a reincarnation to shut her trap.” I say as I imagine Anzu’s demise.

I feel a wave of darkness spread through the room and notice a small black area covering Malik and Marik’s table…yami no game. I wish they wouldn’t do that everywhere they go. I’m still having jitters from when I was trapped in the game with Marik during the Battle City Semi-Finals.

Seto…why are you looking at the realm like that? My hand runs across his thigh and to the center of his pants…where I feel something…interesting.

“Seems like someone wants something more…” I say teasingly.

“What do you mean? I can wait. I just want to enjoy…the…” He says just before I grab the ‘unusual’ hump.

“Enjoying me is the only thing you need to be worried about.” I say moving closer to him and looking him dead into those hypnotizing blue orbs of his. I kiss him softly just before he grabs my head and deepens the kiss.

Seto breaks away, he should have taken a deeper breath. I look at him lustfully, before I pull him into another kiss.

“Seto…I want you, I need you.”

“I do too Jou.” he says as I take his shirt off.

“Your body looks better and better each day.”

I kiss his neck and his head falls back…allowing me full coverage of the area. I straddle him and unbutton his pants, knowing that he needs relief as soon as possible.

“You know if you stay there, I may fuck you.” Seto says to me.

“I don’t mind.” I say then kiss his neck and chest. My hands wander all over his body as my tongue plays with his nubs.

I’ve given you all the appetizers, now it’s time for the main dish… Hope you can stand this Seto.

I stand up and take his pants and boxers off. I stand in front of him and point to DJ Kwak. He sees me and nods, then starts playing ‘Crazy in Love’. I take a quick glance at Seto who’s looking very oddly at me. I turn my back to him as the song starts I turn around to face him slowly and hold my belt in both hands.

I hope I can remember to do this just like Marik and Malik taught me. They’re pretty damn good erotic dancers. They should teach a class or something.

Nerves…go away for now. Clumsiness…go away for now. This has to be perfect for Seto. Perfect for perfection. Nothing less.

I do some sensual dance movements to the beat as I take off my shirt. My eyes lock with Seto’s as we seem to be making love to each other in our minds. I kick off my shoes and bend over to take off my socks. I throw them to the other side of the room. Something moves out of the corner of my eye and I see Seto’s hand travel towards his erection.

None of that Seto!

I take his hands and place them behind his chair and shake my head. Calm down. This can’t be rushed.

My hands grab the sides of my pants and slowly slide them down as I turn around, giving Seto a full view of my backside. I can only imagine what he looks like as I slowly straighten, hands tracing the sides of my legs and grasp on to my thongs. I slide them slowly down my legs and bend over to take off my feet, revealing my completely naked body to my one and only.

I turn around slowly towards him as watch as his hands are tightly holding on to the legs of the chair, shaft fully erected, glistening in the lights of the room, waiting for me to become its leech, to suck every drop of his cum from him. But I must wait…we must wait just a few moments more.

As the song nears its end, it’s time for the finale. I walk closer to him in time with the music and as the song plays its final beat, I drop to my knees and suck him. I look up at Seto who’s completely dazed at what has just happened. I don’t think his mind as caught up to this moment to endure the pleasure I’m giving him now. Never had I seen Seto so flustered, so in awe.

Very few things startle and surprise him, and I can add this one to the list. Way to go Katsuya!

“Amazing…” he finally says as I think he’s finally finished playing the dance in his head over again for the billionth time. I stroke myself in time with my sucks as my pre-cum escapes me. I feel his cock harden just a bit more…signaling he’s close to spill, but not now. I don’t wat that yet Seto.

I stand up.

“Stand up Seto.” I command him. He obeys without hesitation as his knees wobble as if he’s had too much to drink.

Can you handle me Seto? Have I truly bought the great Seto Kaiba to his knees? This is a night to remember!

I sit down and watch as Kaiba leans heavily on the table and continues to watch me please myself. With my other hand I signal for him to come closer and he slowly comes nearer to me. My pre-cum soaked hand goes straight to his entrance and I insert two of my fingers.

Seto starts to shake nervously, passionately? I can’t tell which is which at this moment, nor do I care. I continue to thrust my fingers in and out of him and watch as he’s literally about to collapse. Heh, we’re not done yet Seto…just you wait.

“Suwaru, Seto.” I say pointing to my dick.

He places a hand on my shoulder and straddles me. He easily takes my entire length and moans loudly…

“Ride me. Ride me like a horse Seto.” I whisper into his ear.

He slowly, but sensually moves up and down on me. I’m surprised he has enough strength to do this, especially after what happened earlier. He hands hold my head and our lips lock together as I thrust into him. I take hold of his length and stroke it in time with my thrusts. He pants and moans loudly as the pressure of release builds further and further up in him.

With a scream of my name, he erupts on himself and me. Seeing how his cum erupts from his stiffened cock…just makes me…want…to…

“Seto!” I scream as my release escapes into him. He collapses on me, still panting…but then again, so am I.

“You are mine Seto, forever! I love you.” I say as I finally catch my breath.

“I love you too, Katsuya.”

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Ok, I lied. This isn’t the last chapter. You know that the original 10th chapter included how Anzu saw Jou and Kaiba and started to freak out and all that other stuff. I was going to pass that up and just leave the yaoi as the last chapter, but what the hell. I may as well include this also. So, see you in the next chapter! Don’t forget to review!!
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