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Yu-Gi-Oh › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
10
Views:
1,850
Reviews:
3
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
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The Torture Realm
Surprise at Sea – Alternate POV
Welcome to another yaoi-filled chapter of sour goodness. Hope you are enjoying the story to date. I’m really having a ball rewriting this story from the other person’s POV. It’s really fun! In this chapter, it’s Malik and Marik’s turn to participate! So beware of all the sour stuff that is to come in this chapter!
-Malik- _Marik_ (Ri)
Chapter 7: The Torture Realm *Marik’s POV*
I stand next to the punch bowl and watch as Kura and Ryou dance…and dance…and dance… Damn Kura! You said a couple, not 4 songs! Well, maybe I should be dancing with Malik, but I dance worse than Honda and Otogi and that’s saying something! Well, I lied. I can dance. I just choose not to. If I dance with malik, I may as well be fucking him…
What?! I can’t help it if my hikari’s so sexy it makes me want to make love to him any and everywhere.
And there’s our favorite thief…finally.
“About time Kura. I thought I was going to do this alone. Jou’s been on watch for us, but he’s so wrapped up in Kaiba.”
“Just do it.” he says taking the bottle from his pocket.
We pour much more than needed into the bowl and stir it. Kura gets and couple cups of punch and goes back to Ryou. That’s one way to get in bed quicker. Yea…I need to do that. Glad I got Malik and I a cup before all the alcohol went into it.
I grab the two cups and go back to Malik who’s looking towards Kaiba and Jou.
“Want some punch?” I ask as he jumps a bit.
I smile lustfully as I could at him, hoping he’d catch the point.
“No thanks. I’m fine.”
You either take this or I’ll get you some punch.
“Don’t worry. I got this before Kura and I…” oops…
I laugh and he shakes his head at me.
“Come on let’s go hikari.” I say noticing Kura and Ryou literally fucking at the door then quickly disappearing behind it.
“Why?”
Because I want to get in your pants.
“Kura’s already gone. I don’t have anyone else to help me cause any torment.”
That’s too cheesy, even for you Marik. Are you losing your touch?
“You have me.”
Hmmmm….where can I go with his? Is this a door opening for me?
“Depends on what kind of torment you want.”
“The kind you love giving to me Ri.”
Hehehe. I’m going to give it to you, Marik style!
With one hand, I grab the back of his head and pull him into a kiss. The other hand, grabs the Sen’nin Rod. We separate for a moment to catch our breath. Marik looks around and becomes scared… Why are you scared? We’re only here for a little fun hikari.
-Why are we here Ri?-
So I can fuck your brains out with a little added bonus.
_To make things….interesting…_
He gives another scared look at me, but you don’t need to be. I hold him closer to me.
“Don’t be scared. I’m here with you.” I say kissing him. My hands wander up his white shirt and explore the skin beneath. He finally begins to relax. Time for the bonus.
My clothes ‘disappear’ from me as the Erotic Hands unbutton his shirt and remove it. Another pair takes his pants off as my hands trace the carvings on his back. I kiss his neck as our members brush teasingly against each other. I kiss lower to his hardened nubs and bite them. Malik pulls back, but none of that. The hands push him closer to me.
_Don’t be afraid of my hands hikari._
_Don’t stop Ri!_
I kiss the tip of his glistening cock, and then suck it as my fingers play with his entrance.
Time for the bonus to take its full effect hikari. Are you ready? Hell who cares? You’re getting it anyways. I push him back, but of course, he doesn’t hit the ground.
“I have something in store for you Malik. You will enjoy it very much.” I say laughing. I snap my fingers and a pair of hands grab his wrists and another pair grab his ankles. They place him in an upright position as he tries to get free of them.
There’s no escape from this Malik. Just sit back and enjoy the fuck.
“What the hell are you doing Marik?” he asks.
What do you think…?
“You are mine for the taking.”
“What are you going to do to me?” he asks very hesitantly.
“Ohhh…Just wait and see.” I reply as I pull out the Sen’nin Rod and trace his body and shaft. His body trembles a bit as the coolness of the rod on his hot body takes its toll.
“Soo good…” he moans as my hands hift him higher, up to the point where his length is in perfect line with my mouth. I kiss it.
-Give it to me Ri!-
Impatient hikari!
“Patience. Good torturing takes time.”
I lick the length of his rod, making him shudder a bit.
-I want…you…now.-
I take every inch on his hardness and suck him wildly.
_Fuck me_
-Wha?!-
_Fuck me. Choke me._
I grab his ass and push him further into my mouth, wanting more and more of my love. That’s right hikari, harder!
_Damn you!_
He thrusts harder into me once more and I smack his ass. He thrusts harder and faster into me…
-Ri…I’m about to…-
_Oh no you don’t! I’m not finished with you yet!_
Get that look off your face. I’m not nearly done with you. I snap my fingers once more and the hands move Malik to doggy-style with his mouth positioned for a perfect suck. I grab his head and shove my cock into his mouth and move his head at the pace he needs to go. Oh…Kami…yes…suck me…! My head falls back and my eyes roll in every direction as Malik’s movements…can’t cum now…
I lean over and kiss my love’s ass and lick on his lower back, making him shudder a bit. That’s enough for now hikari…
I push his head back and once again Malik’s repositioned…spread eagle.
You want my hardness Malik? Nah…how about some torture first. I reach behind my back and grab the Rod before thrusting it inside of him.
-There has to be a way out of these hands!-
_No way out._
I laugh as Malik continues to try to wiggle free of the hands.
_You must suffer in pleasure._
I place the Rod on his tummy and place my inkei at his entrance. Spreading his ass with one hand, and holding on to his side with the other, I thrust harshly into him. Malik’s head falls back.
_There’s more…_
A hand grabs his cock and strokes it as Malik’s eyes roll over every inch of his head.
“Ri…fuck me!” he begs. Is he sure he wants this?
I look at his face and it begs for me to do more, so I grant his wish…except…let’s see how much he can take. I thrust slowly, teasingly into my love, wanting to hear him beg for me once more.
“Faster Ri!”
Nope Malik. That wasn’t convincing enough.
“Faster dammit!” he yells.
You’re getting impatient. Didn’t I tell you I was torturing you?
_When I get good and ready._
-I want you now Ri!-
Make me believe it hikari.
_How bad do you want me?_
-Ri…I’ll…I’ll do anything!-
Wha?! Did I hear that right?! Let me make sure…
_Anything?_
-Anything!! Just go faster! I can’t take much more of this!-
You asked for it.
“Please the rod.”
“Huh?”
I wanna see what you will do Malik.
“Treat the Rod as if it was me, and I’ll go faster.” I say still fucking him slowly and very teasingly.
He nods. Good boy. He licks the handle and sucks it very well.
“Much better.” I say speeding up.
Malik continues to please the Rod, making me wander to what his mouth feels like over the Rod…what it would be like if I could fuck Malik and get sucked at the same time…making my hips buck harder and faster into him.
“I’m…Marik!” he screams.
I open my eyes to see his torso covered in his cum as the hand plays in it and Malik sucks it off the fingers. Malik…you’re so erotic…so sexy like that…keep going…
“My Ra!” I scream as my cum fill him to the hilt. I collapse over him and try to catch my breath.
_I love you my hikari._
-I love you too Ri.-
Gotta catch…breath…but…I need to get back to the party…just one more minute. I take one more deep breath and activate the Sen’nin Rod once more. We end up back in the entertainment room, fully dressed, looking as if nothing happened.
Moans…who’s that? I look around and spot Jounouchi and Kaiba having one hell of a good time. I wonder what Jou did to Kaiba? He’s looking pretty intense over there!
-I wonder who that is?-
_It’s that Priest and his servant._
I laugh quietly as Malik’s expression suddenly changes as Kaiba moans something rather loudly in a voice I never thought was capable from him. Malik and I sneak out the room and leave the two and whoever else is in there.
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Marik, you demented spirit you. Thanks for reading this chapter. Please review!! One more yaoi to go! Hope you all stick around for it! See ya in Chapter 8!
Welcome to another yaoi-filled chapter of sour goodness. Hope you are enjoying the story to date. I’m really having a ball rewriting this story from the other person’s POV. It’s really fun! In this chapter, it’s Malik and Marik’s turn to participate! So beware of all the sour stuff that is to come in this chapter!
-Malik- _Marik_ (Ri)
Chapter 7: The Torture Realm *Marik’s POV*
I stand next to the punch bowl and watch as Kura and Ryou dance…and dance…and dance… Damn Kura! You said a couple, not 4 songs! Well, maybe I should be dancing with Malik, but I dance worse than Honda and Otogi and that’s saying something! Well, I lied. I can dance. I just choose not to. If I dance with malik, I may as well be fucking him…
What?! I can’t help it if my hikari’s so sexy it makes me want to make love to him any and everywhere.
And there’s our favorite thief…finally.
“About time Kura. I thought I was going to do this alone. Jou’s been on watch for us, but he’s so wrapped up in Kaiba.”
“Just do it.” he says taking the bottle from his pocket.
We pour much more than needed into the bowl and stir it. Kura gets and couple cups of punch and goes back to Ryou. That’s one way to get in bed quicker. Yea…I need to do that. Glad I got Malik and I a cup before all the alcohol went into it.
I grab the two cups and go back to Malik who’s looking towards Kaiba and Jou.
“Want some punch?” I ask as he jumps a bit.
I smile lustfully as I could at him, hoping he’d catch the point.
“No thanks. I’m fine.”
You either take this or I’ll get you some punch.
“Don’t worry. I got this before Kura and I…” oops…
I laugh and he shakes his head at me.
“Come on let’s go hikari.” I say noticing Kura and Ryou literally fucking at the door then quickly disappearing behind it.
“Why?”
Because I want to get in your pants.
“Kura’s already gone. I don’t have anyone else to help me cause any torment.”
That’s too cheesy, even for you Marik. Are you losing your touch?
“You have me.”
Hmmmm….where can I go with his? Is this a door opening for me?
“Depends on what kind of torment you want.”
“The kind you love giving to me Ri.”
Hehehe. I’m going to give it to you, Marik style!
With one hand, I grab the back of his head and pull him into a kiss. The other hand, grabs the Sen’nin Rod. We separate for a moment to catch our breath. Marik looks around and becomes scared… Why are you scared? We’re only here for a little fun hikari.
-Why are we here Ri?-
So I can fuck your brains out with a little added bonus.
_To make things….interesting…_
He gives another scared look at me, but you don’t need to be. I hold him closer to me.
“Don’t be scared. I’m here with you.” I say kissing him. My hands wander up his white shirt and explore the skin beneath. He finally begins to relax. Time for the bonus.
My clothes ‘disappear’ from me as the Erotic Hands unbutton his shirt and remove it. Another pair takes his pants off as my hands trace the carvings on his back. I kiss his neck as our members brush teasingly against each other. I kiss lower to his hardened nubs and bite them. Malik pulls back, but none of that. The hands push him closer to me.
_Don’t be afraid of my hands hikari._
_Don’t stop Ri!_
I kiss the tip of his glistening cock, and then suck it as my fingers play with his entrance.
Time for the bonus to take its full effect hikari. Are you ready? Hell who cares? You’re getting it anyways. I push him back, but of course, he doesn’t hit the ground.
“I have something in store for you Malik. You will enjoy it very much.” I say laughing. I snap my fingers and a pair of hands grab his wrists and another pair grab his ankles. They place him in an upright position as he tries to get free of them.
There’s no escape from this Malik. Just sit back and enjoy the fuck.
“What the hell are you doing Marik?” he asks.
What do you think…?
“You are mine for the taking.”
“What are you going to do to me?” he asks very hesitantly.
“Ohhh…Just wait and see.” I reply as I pull out the Sen’nin Rod and trace his body and shaft. His body trembles a bit as the coolness of the rod on his hot body takes its toll.
“Soo good…” he moans as my hands hift him higher, up to the point where his length is in perfect line with my mouth. I kiss it.
-Give it to me Ri!-
Impatient hikari!
“Patience. Good torturing takes time.”
I lick the length of his rod, making him shudder a bit.
-I want…you…now.-
I take every inch on his hardness and suck him wildly.
_Fuck me_
-Wha?!-
_Fuck me. Choke me._
I grab his ass and push him further into my mouth, wanting more and more of my love. That’s right hikari, harder!
_Damn you!_
He thrusts harder into me once more and I smack his ass. He thrusts harder and faster into me…
-Ri…I’m about to…-
_Oh no you don’t! I’m not finished with you yet!_
Get that look off your face. I’m not nearly done with you. I snap my fingers once more and the hands move Malik to doggy-style with his mouth positioned for a perfect suck. I grab his head and shove my cock into his mouth and move his head at the pace he needs to go. Oh…Kami…yes…suck me…! My head falls back and my eyes roll in every direction as Malik’s movements…can’t cum now…
I lean over and kiss my love’s ass and lick on his lower back, making him shudder a bit. That’s enough for now hikari…
I push his head back and once again Malik’s repositioned…spread eagle.
You want my hardness Malik? Nah…how about some torture first. I reach behind my back and grab the Rod before thrusting it inside of him.
-There has to be a way out of these hands!-
_No way out._
I laugh as Malik continues to try to wiggle free of the hands.
_You must suffer in pleasure._
I place the Rod on his tummy and place my inkei at his entrance. Spreading his ass with one hand, and holding on to his side with the other, I thrust harshly into him. Malik’s head falls back.
_There’s more…_
A hand grabs his cock and strokes it as Malik’s eyes roll over every inch of his head.
“Ri…fuck me!” he begs. Is he sure he wants this?
I look at his face and it begs for me to do more, so I grant his wish…except…let’s see how much he can take. I thrust slowly, teasingly into my love, wanting to hear him beg for me once more.
“Faster Ri!”
Nope Malik. That wasn’t convincing enough.
“Faster dammit!” he yells.
You’re getting impatient. Didn’t I tell you I was torturing you?
_When I get good and ready._
-I want you now Ri!-
Make me believe it hikari.
_How bad do you want me?_
-Ri…I’ll…I’ll do anything!-
Wha?! Did I hear that right?! Let me make sure…
_Anything?_
-Anything!! Just go faster! I can’t take much more of this!-
You asked for it.
“Please the rod.”
“Huh?”
I wanna see what you will do Malik.
“Treat the Rod as if it was me, and I’ll go faster.” I say still fucking him slowly and very teasingly.
He nods. Good boy. He licks the handle and sucks it very well.
“Much better.” I say speeding up.
Malik continues to please the Rod, making me wander to what his mouth feels like over the Rod…what it would be like if I could fuck Malik and get sucked at the same time…making my hips buck harder and faster into him.
“I’m…Marik!” he screams.
I open my eyes to see his torso covered in his cum as the hand plays in it and Malik sucks it off the fingers. Malik…you’re so erotic…so sexy like that…keep going…
“My Ra!” I scream as my cum fill him to the hilt. I collapse over him and try to catch my breath.
_I love you my hikari._
-I love you too Ri.-
Gotta catch…breath…but…I need to get back to the party…just one more minute. I take one more deep breath and activate the Sen’nin Rod once more. We end up back in the entertainment room, fully dressed, looking as if nothing happened.
Moans…who’s that? I look around and spot Jounouchi and Kaiba having one hell of a good time. I wonder what Jou did to Kaiba? He’s looking pretty intense over there!
-I wonder who that is?-
_It’s that Priest and his servant._
I laugh quietly as Malik’s expression suddenly changes as Kaiba moans something rather loudly in a voice I never thought was capable from him. Malik and I sneak out the room and leave the two and whoever else is in there.
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Marik, you demented spirit you. Thanks for reading this chapter. Please review!! One more yaoi to go! Hope you all stick around for it! See ya in Chapter 8!