The Draconian Ruby

Massage 105

Mokuba was still giggling at Seto as they got into the limo that morning. "So Big Brother, who is it you want to fuck you?" he said nonchalantly as his brother whipped his head around and glared at him

"Do I have to wash your mouth out with soap?" he said to the giggling mass of black hair that was in the corner still laughing at him

"Only if you do it to yourself. You're the one screaming to be the Uke" he said to Seto as the car stopped at Mokuba's school. Before Seto could chastise him again for his language, he bounded over and gave his brother a kiss on the cheek

"Have a nice day with Joey!" and at that the holy terror ran out of the limo and the door closed behind him leaving a bemused and flabbergasted Seto stunned into silence.


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Hanna greeted the day to her normal breakfast. Unfortunately for her, or at least her kitchen, her Priest was with her and her normal breakfast of just raisin toast was not going to be cutting it today. Getting out her waffle iron that she had stored in the baker's cabinet that was just outside of the kitchen, she began the process of making waffles with strawberries and vanilla ice cream, which was his favourite. As she entered her kitchen, she began she noticed two things. One her priest was already up, and two, her kitchen looked like a tornado went through it.

"Katsuya what happened!" Hanna exclaimed as she came in to see Joey hyperventilating

"THAT BASTARD! THAT GOD DAMN NO GOOD BASTARD!" he screamed, making flour fly all over the kitchen as he had the same idea about waffles. Normally he was an amazing cook, but apparently not when he was agitated

"Who?" Hanna said, though she was pretty sure who it was

"SETO. THAT FUCKING BASTARD WANTS TO FUCK US ALL. NOT JUST ME BUT ALL OF US! I SHOULD NEVER HAVE TRUSTED HIM!" he screamed, and at that Hanna started laughing at him

"DON'T LAUGH AT ME!" he screamed, and then paused as it appeared the light went on in his head and then began to laugh as well

"Hanna!! He wants us ALL!!" he said nearly screaming again in joy

"That's right Katsuya, if he wants you all, then he accepts you all. And he finally can return the love back. Oh my dear boy, you did it!" Hanna said grabbing him and hugging him tightly "You will be able to break the curse now. Claim him, claim him soon." she whispered, knowing that since it was a full year before he was 20, he would end the curse before it triggered. No one had known what had caused the curse, but after Jono's death they had found out that someone laid it to be triggered on the soul of Jono on his 20th birthday. Jono had already turned 20, that previous winter, and he had died on June 30th of that year. If he did not claim the body of his soul mate by the time of the day of his 20th birthday he would be dead.

"Hanna, we showed him our lives last night. He saw everything, including Johfrit. Seth is apparently with Seto, though I don't know how. Seth said that after I claim Seto, he's gonna look after the spirits, so that they can finally get laid. After all, all they have ever wanted was Seth, not Seto. But my Dragon didn't know that. He thought HE was gonna lay them to rest. Oh Hanna, I am so happy!" he said nearly dancing in the kitchen. When he had gotten to know Hanna, he had begun to tell her of his previous lives, though at the time he had thought she was Wiccan, who believe in it, but now knowing, she knew of his lives, just not the full details as only Johfrit had any time with the Osiris Priests when he had been to Egypt when they had been looking for the Grail. At that time, Johfrit had taken Osiris into his body, though for the sanctity of history, the Priests of Osiris, had kept it from the history books. At that time, Osiris had helped to get the acolytes of Osiris ready, to prepare for the fifth and final live. They had recorded his looks as Johfrit had told them that he was the reincarnation of Jono and that their genes were the same.

"I can see that my lord. Look, go take a shower and get dressed. There is a pair of pants in there that I think you will adore. Or more specifically, a pair your DRAGON will adore. I will make breakfast for us and your lunch. As for your father, don't worry, I called him early last night and told him you were staying with me last night." Hanna said as she began to push him out the door

"Thank you Hanna, I don't know what I would have done without you." Joey said and at that Hanna nodded. As he turned around to head back to his rooms, she shouted at him

"Oh you might want to commando. I don't think you will be able to fit even a thong in THOSE pants!"



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As Hanna's car stopped at the front entrance, he turned to her, and gave her a huge smile. "Thank you again for being here." he said to her, his smile nearly 1,000 watts

"You are welcome my lord. After tonight, I will begin the process of arranging for your effects." she said with her own twinkle in her eye

"Effects? What do you mean?" he said, confused.

"Tell you later. Now go. There is a Dragon inside there that is 'itching' to be near you" she said, still attempting to get over her shock of seeing him in the pants. Normally he would have been wearing his uniform, but each Friday they were allowed to wear regular street clothes, and today was Friday. Hanna had remembered this, but still could not believe she had gotten him to agree to wear it. Granted, she was the one who had them specially made for him, but she had never expected his body to melt into them. Even though the design was for a pair of women's pants, on him they looked incredible. The original pants were made of cargo fabric, but she had them made of leather for Joey. The opening had a button made of a pair of dragons, but not any kind of dragons. When closely examined, it was the Blue Eyes White Dragon, encircling the Red Eyes Black Dragon, which would only show when the button was done up. When it was not, the dragons were side by side, on their side of the opening. There was laces inside, made of suede, which were used to keep the pants together, but could be removed to allow certain male anatomy out. They were also very low riding, curving the edges of his lower abdomen, showing that he had barely any hair leading to his member.

The back of them was also laced with the suede, that lead in a direction to his ass, which the pants showed to complete perfection, and was one of the first times anyone in that school would have gotten a clear look at his ass. Unlike the female version of the pants, which allowed some leg room between the fabric, Joey's did not, and showed his powerfully long legs all the way down, leading to the slight flare of the pants at the bottom which led to the boots that Hanna had given him earlier. He normally didn't like boots, but they reminded him like the ones that Yugi wore, but a butter coloured version. For his shirt, he had found a cashmere, snow white shirt, that reminded him of snow. His hand trembled at the implication, but he was determined to put this on. It was long sleeved, and V necked, and felt like the softest kitten he had ever felt.

He felt so NAUGHTY in this, and could not WAIT to see his Dragon.



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Tristan had been sitting at the cafeteria with Duke and Yugi. After what had happened, no one ever left Yugi alone, if at all possible. Granted, Yugi was smiling, but it had not always been this way. It had bothered Yugi for a while, until they had all made it clear that this wasn't changing, and that he could either get used to it, or they would just start tying him down to their backs. But one way or another, they were not going to leave him alone. As they sat there, eating the early breakfast, Joey sauntered into the cafeteria, with a gaggle of girls following behind him, all looking at a certain part of his anatomy

"Damn Joey you look HOT! I want a pair of those!" Tristan said drooling over the pants

"Ask Hanna, she made them for me." Joey said standing over Yugi's chair, and placing a hand on his shoulder

"Why would your client make you anything special?" Yugi said, looking up and seeing over 20 females and nearly triple the amount of men all looking at Joey's backside. "Um, Joey, what is with that procession behind you." Duke asked curious, as he could see Yugi had been about to ask the same thing

"Oh, that would be because this is the first time I have allowed my body to be shown." Joey said nonchalantly, and at that Tristan's brow went up

"What are you talking about, we've seen you before...what's the big deal?" Tristan said not understanding.

"Think back Tristan. How many times have I showered without either you or Yugi around? How many times have you seen me without something covering my ass?" Joey asked them, knowing what they were gonna say

"You never have Joey. Hell, I remember one time that you actually got detention because you wouldn't shower after PE class" Yugi said suddenly remembering

"Bingo...and one day, I will be able to tell you all why. But for now, I got a Dragon to find." Joey said, and then turned through the other side of the cafeteria. "Later..." he said waiving behind himself at his friends, as he sauntered out the door. Until now, they had not noticed his right arm, but when he waived at them, Yugi saw the bracelet and his eyes widened

"JOEY!!" he shouted as Joey stopped and turned around to his best friend

"Yeah...?" Joey said, turning to Yugi, his left leg outstretched, bracing himself

"What is that on your wrist!?" he said, coming over to the wrist and attempted to touch the bracelet. At Yugi's touch, his eyes went wide, and closed, nearly collapsing, but Joey grabbed him and held him close

"What happened and what the hell is that?!" Tristan said, pointing at the piece of jewellery

"That my dear friend is the Millennium Bracelet. My gift from my God. He created it for me." Joey said, Yugi now cradled in his arms

"How the hell did you get that?" Tristan said

"I've always had it. Yugi made it for me. Or more specifically, Osiris had it made at Yugi's orders." Joey said, softly stroking the tri-coloured hair of his best friend

"What do you mean, Yugi made it?" Duke said

"It's a bit complicated and I promise one day I will tell you. For now, take Yugi. He's gonna come to soon." Joey said, as Tristan opened his arms, to accept Yugi. Joey then laid him into his arms, and with a very soft smile, stroked Yugi's cherub face.

"Joey..." Tristan said, catching the look of love on Joey's face. The only times he had ever seen that was why Joey was looking at Seto, and this was starting to freak him out.

"All I will say right now, is that Yugi is learning something that is gonna shake his world. Hopefully for the good. In the meantime, I have a Dragon to find before class starts." Joey said, as he turned from them and headed down the hallway, heading to Seto's locker



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Seto arrived without seeing his puppy around. After last night, he was eager to see him, so he was rather disappointed that he could not find him. Turning to the hall that led to his locker, he went to it, and opened it. As he was about to grab one of the books from the top, he caught the unmistakable scent of Vanilla and Caramel, and with that turned around. The end of the hallway had a very large bay window, and with that he could see a figure moving slowly towards him, completely bathed in sunlight. The figure moved slowly and sensually toward him. As it came closer he could see it was Joey, dressed in clothes that had him instantly hard.

"By the Gods..." Seto whispered, as he grew hotter all over, as Joey's pheromones were sending him into overdrive

"Dragon..." Joey whispered as he came closer to him. As he came closer, Seto could see the pants, and realized that he was naked underneath it all.

"Dear god..." Seto whispered, now feeling that his blood was on fire. How was he going to survive this day without screwing him blind.

"My Dragon..." Joey whispered now only a hairsbreadth from Seto. In the heels of the boots, he was now nearly the same height of Seto, and was staring straight into his eyes

"G...o..o...d...M...o...r...n...i...ng" Seto managed to get out, his heart pounding in his ears, his blood thick and one thought driving every other thought away...MINE

"Good morning my dragon...did you sleep well?" Joey said, running a finger along Seto's chest, slightly grazing his cloth covered nipple.

"Sleep...I didn't get any sleep. I got my puppy times five all night." Seto said, his jaw clenched from trying not to react to Joey. Seth had drilled it into his head, that he must NOT make a move on Joey until the wedding, even if it killed him.

"I know...you still have my marking too..." Joey said, his lips going over the love mark that he had given Seto in the soul room

"You DIDN'T..." Seto said, then swiftly turned around and looked at the left side of his neck, through the mirror that he had in the locker, to find the results of the 'Puppy Pile-up' on his neck

"You're MINE DRAGON. And don't you EVER forget it." Joey said, nuzzling his dragon's back neck

"Joey, you're killing me..." Seto whispered as he could feel his love's member pressing against his backside.

"Mine Seto...your body is MINE." Joey whispered softly into his ear, nipping softly on the shell

"My body and heart has always belonged to you...but in two weeks I want to make my soul yours. Will you...?" Seto whispered, his eyes closed, but his breathing was very shallow. He could tell that Joey was not aroused, as those pants of his would never be able to hide it, but Seto was not that lucky and was so hard, he was sure he could drive nails with it.

"Two weeks eh...Seth has been telling you tales hasn't he..." Joey whispered smiling against his lovers neck

"Yes...please..." Seto said, not sure of what he was pleading for, but his body was almost beyond control.

"Come on then" Joey said, taking his lover's hand and lead them to the boy's bathroom. As they entered, Joey did not see a lock on the door, so lifting his right arm, he closed his eyes and the Millennium Bracelet came to life, and made the door disappear.

"Now we will not be disturbed." Joey said, a very evil glint in his eye

"Katsuya..." Seto breathed, calling him the name that Osiris had chosen for him

"Calling me by middle names huh...so what is yours..." Joey said coming over to his love, and straddling one of his thighs, wrapped his arms around his neck

"I wasn't given one. Joey, please say yes..." Seto said, his breath hitching as Joey was nibbling on Seto's ear again and running his hand and nails through Seto's hair

"Yes to what, Seto?" Joey said being obtuse with him again

"Be my Husband. Marry me Joey..." Seto said his breathing getting worse, as Joey had taken his shirt out of his pants and was undoing the buttons of the black dress shirt that Seto was wearing.

"You had my answer 5,000 years ago. And we are still married anyways. Death never separated us" Joey said moving his mouth along Seto's jaw line as he was saying the words. As he finished, he looked deeply into Seto's eyes, and then whispered "Say it my Dragon. Say those three words that I have been waiting 5,000 years to hear you tell me again."

"I Love You." Seto said, tears beginning to form in his eyes as Joey began to smile. He then leaned forward and placed a chaste kiss onto Seto's lips.

At that, to Seto, the gates of Seto's control opened, and he grabbed Joey's hair and forced his mouth open. At the first touch of Seto's tentative tongue, Joey's met with his and they began to duel with each other. Seto's hands began to roam all over Joey's back, feeling every inch of his Golden Puppy, until his hands reached his ass. Lifting him slightly, and slamming him against himself, he began to grind against him, attempting to get some sort of relief.

"By the Gods Seto...you keep doing that and we both aren't gonna last" Joey said, pulling away from Seto's devouring mouth

"I am gonna FUCKING taste you if it is the LAST thing I do. If I can't have you NOW, then I am gonna have SOMETHING." Seto growled as he switched positions with Joey, slamming Joey into the wall, and sliding down the body of his puppy.

"You want my taste that bad huh..." Joey said smirking. He remembered the teasing that his former lives had done to Seto, and he knew that this is what he had wanted too.

"Yes...please..." Seto said, looking up at the golden boy

"Very well, but feel free to take a look at my buttons. I think Hanna had some fun." Joey said, as he arched his back, and in one swift move, removed his white shirt, thus, in his mind, removing the curse. As he tossed the shirt aside, Seto looked up at him and saw him fully. And wondered how the hell he was going to stop himself from not burying himself into this glorious body. All the shirts that Joey always wore, had hidden this gloriously toned body, replete with a six pack of abs that were completely drool worthy. Not even his own body could compare to his. His lower half could wait, Seto thought as he moved back up and took one of the tiny pink nubs into his mouth, and began to suckle it.

At his touch, Joey lost all control of his emotions and pheromones, and began to moan incoherently, running his hands through Seto's hair. It was then that Seto began to smell THE most delicious scent that had been ever created. Sliding back up his chest, and fully standing back up, he leaned into the younger teen and pushed his rock hard cock against his puppy

"God Seto, you're killing me..." Joey moaned as he grabbed the older teen and pressed his lips against him again. Seto then slid a hand down his body, and felt around for the buttons of the pants. Finding it, though going slightly mindless, he finally was able to open the pants and saw the strings that was holding the pants together. He then broke away from the devouring of their lips and looked at Joey. The beautiful neck that he had dreamed of seeing, stretched from ecstasy was the most beautiful sight he had seen. He then realized where they were.

"I am not doing this here. Our first time in 5,000 years deserves to be in a better place then a school bathroom. Joey, the bracelet can teleport anywhere. Teleport us to my bedroom. Please..." Seto said, nuzzling his mouth against Joey's neck, wanting to nearly cry from the need to release.

"Okay Dragon." Joey said, as he closed his eyes and pointed the Bracelet in front of them. As a tear in space opened, Joey leaned down and picked up his shirt. He then closed his eyes, and the bracelet gleamed again. "Go Seto, I have set it so that when the tear closes, the doorway will reappear. And other then my friends, no one else saw us here today. The teacher's think that we had the day off." he said

"Perfect." Seto said and he stepped backwards through the tear, not taking his eyes off of Joey. Joey followed behind him, his eyes burning gold. As Seto reached his bedroom, he began to tear off the shirt that Joey had already removed the buttons from and then he kicked off his shoes. Joey then entered the room as the tear closed, leaving Joey breathing heavily.

"As an asshole told me last night...strip" Joey said, his eyes so bright they almost looked like they were glowing

"Ladies first..." Seto said, with a smirk on his face as he undid his pants, allowing them to drop, leaving him in his silk blue boxers. Now all he had on was the boxers and his socks.

"Lady...I'll show you who's a lady" Joey growled as he whipped off the boots, showing that he was barefoot in them, and then now barefoot, and shirt free, all he had on was the pants that were still making Seto drool. Especially since the bulge behind them was threatening to destroy the top part of the pants. The button was still off of it, but the ties that were holding the inner part of the pants were beginning to come undone.

"Yure fallin' behind Dragon..." Joey said, with a smirk on his face, the tips of his ears red, and still breathing very hard

"Just breathing in, taking in the smell...its very intoxicating" Seto said as he fell back against the edge of the bed, and allowed himself into a partial sitting position, so that his back was against the bed and the settee, his feet still dangling from the edge. He then leaned up onto his elbows and looked at his puppy

"Fuck the smell, I want you" Joey said, and at that dropped the pants, and stepped out of them, revealing his full self to the first person in 5,000 years. He then walked the short few steps to Seto's side and stepped in front of his Dragon, his own arousal threatening to destroy his boxers.

"You teased the fuck out of me last night with denying me a taste of you. I should tease the hell out of you, but I won't. I respect you and your lives too much to deny you. But make no mistake. I will get even with you for that. So with that..." Joey said, watching Seto's breathing become very harsh, as he was anticipating the next step.

He didn't have long to wait.

Joey ripped off his boxers and as he slid them down, he removed his socks at the same time, making Seto just as naked as he was. As Joey came back up, he engulfed Seto into his mouth, and he released a scream that Joey swore should have broken every window in the house. Coming back up, and swallowing the offering that his love gave him, he looked at his Dragon, and grinned.

"Aww Seto, I would have thought the big bad Dragon would have had more staying power then that. But by the Gods do you taste good." he said to the nearly boneless Dragon.

"You fucking prick, it was those damn pheromones of yours. You've been driving me nuts since last night." Seto said, as he grabbed the blond from the edge of the floor that he was still on, and hauled him onto the bed.

"Temper temper Seto...we don't want to disrespect our spirits. They went through HELL to bring us here." Joey said, attempting to calm him down.

"BAD PUPPY!!" Seto screamed and flipped him over onto his back

"Yes Master, I'm a bad puppy...are ya gonna punish me now?" Joey said slipping into the little fantasy that Seto obviously wanted to play

"If I didn't want to taste you, I would, but Joey...I want you so bad..." Seto said, slipping back out of his fantasy and looking at him

"Then take me...as much as we can without giving up our virginities. And I know you are Seto." Joey said pushing his head down to his crotch

"Now suck me. And take me to Heaven my love." Joey whispered as Seto tentatively touched the tip of Joey's member. Which like Seto, he arched and began to moan. Very slowly, Seto moved slowly to take Joey into his mouth. Given his size, he had to relax his throat as not to activate his gag reflex. Even then, Joey was so large, that he was sure he would not fit all the way, but he got very close. As he finally fit him fully into his mouth, he looked up and almost began to weep at the sight of Joey, his head thrown back, and clawing at the bed, the sweat pouring down his face. He could see that he was resisting the urge to thrust into his mouth, and he left his eyes open, as he began the assent back, beginning the process of sliding up and down on his beautiful cock. Even the pre-cum was the sweetest treat, and he had never tasted something as delicious as this. He knew that cum was supposed to taste slight salty and definitely like slime, but Joey didn't. He tasted almost like melted Vanilla ice cream, just with a thicker consistency.

Taking him slowly and deeper, he very gently used his teeth on the sensitive side of Joey's cock, nearly going blind from the smell of Joey's pre-cum. As he took him deeper into his mouth, Joey slightly surged, and all the control that Seto had was gone. Furiously going down on Joey, moving Joey's hips up and down for him, he was soon rewarded with his puppy's bright light, as Joey came. Screaming, almost as high as a piccolo, Joey shot his cum directly down Seto's throat and arched his back, still screaming. Seto had been watching, and tears flowed freely from the emotions as a bright aura seemed to emanate from the Golden boy. As Joey seemed to relax the energy formed a ring around them and then with lightning quick accuracy shot straight up into the air. Joey laid nearly boneless, and completely passed out, he had the most beautiful look on his face, that made Seto's heart swell with love.

Getting up, he picked up Joey, and laid him onto the pillows at the top of the bed. Putting down the covers, Seto walked over and picked up their clothing that they had scattered when they were stripping each other. As Seto picked up Joey's pants he then saw the buttons on it.

'How did she know?' Seto asked as he could see the Blue Eyes and the Red Eyes dragons on the buttons. He then did them up and saw that the Blue eyes seemed to be cradling the Red Eyes, in a lovers embrace. Picking them up, along with Joey's sweater, he folded them, and placed them onto the settee. He then went into his walk-in closet and grabbed his robe. Dauning it, he went back into the other room, to see that Joey was still asleep. Smiling, as the energy that had emanated from him, might have put him into a slight coma, he headed downstairs and went to go make a few snacks for them, as Seth had warned him that Jono was always ravenous for food after their lovemaking.



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Joey came back from his slight out of body experience and saw his dragon moving around. He then saw him leave. Leaning back onto his back, he closed his eyes and entered the soul room. As he entered he saw Jono inside.

"Just the person I wanted to see" Joey said to the former Priest

"I see that your libido’s couldn't resist each other." Jono said as the other spirits came in. The bed that had been in there now changed to a very large bed, and all the spirits gathered onto it, Johfrit taking a hold of Joey and holding him close to his back, in a strong hug. All of the spirits were very protective of him, as they cherished him, like their son, more so then Johfrit. It was him that had made his presence known the first time, when Joey was only seven years old, and his father had beaten up that first time.

It was Johfrit that had taught him how to fight, which they did in the soul room. None of them seemed to question how it was created...until they had first seen their Pharaoh emerge from Joey's best friend. It was then that they had become aware of how, and first had an inking that they too were in possession of a Millennium item. But they chose to keep this from Joey, as they discovered that if their lord wished for Joey to know, he would tell him. All of them had taught Joey something from their lives, with Johfrit teaching him his fighting skills, and Jono teaching him mannerisms of an Egyptian court. When Joey had begun to play duel monsters, Jono had allowed him to learn from their Pharaoh, as he would not get a better teacher. Until their love schooled him. Jono had gone on a tirade about HOW he was going to kick Seto's ass three ways from Sunday, and it was then that Jono began to teach him about the ancient ways. Jono was the most experienced in the Duel monsters game as only his love and his Pharaoh could ever beat him, and that was only because he had the utmost respect, and the other fact that he was not about to dishonour them by being able to defeat the High Priest of Set and the great Egyptian Pharaoh, he had always let them two win...he just never let on. After the SECOND schooling and Seto throwing back Joey's attempt to show that it was not a serious duel, no one could control Jono. So Joey did not venture into the soul room for a great deal of time. It was not until after the Pharaoh and the others left, that Joey came back in. By that time, Jono was very worried, as Seto still had not responded to Joey, and time was running out. It was then that they all decided that enough was enough, and Jono began to teach Joey, all of Seth's pressure points, in order to wake up the 'Dragon' inside.

Now seeing the results of their work, they had all smiled. And they were all just as blissfully happy, as Joey's release was all their release as well. They all held Joey, in a comforting embrace, until they heard a knock at the door. Surprised, Jorrin got up, as he was the closest to the door, and opened it. Finding Seto on the other side, with just his boxers on, they all smiled at him, as Jorrin allowed him inside.

"I brought food for you, but I saw that you were glowing still. So I assumed that you might be in here. And you owe me puppy. Seth knows now." Seto growled as they could hear a laughter from the other side of the door

"And how are ya gonna make me pay, Dragon? Yure in my realm now." Joey said, still being embraced by Johfrit. the Celt's hair draping over Joey's chest, like a caress

"I can think of a few ways...but they will have to wait for the honeymoon." Seto said, and then looking at the spirits directed he added "I respect them too much to do it now." and at that statement, he got another Puppy Pileup as the five bodies dragged him onto their bed, as Jono held Seto, as Johfrit continued to hold Joey.






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Chapter 6 is almost done. It probably would have been done yesterday but as it was Joey's birthday I did a one shot, that gave me some practice for the final chapter. And that is the one that the full on lemon will be happening.


I have found that I really love this story, as I had opened so many different possibilities and I can't wait to explore them. Like how Hanna became an acolyte, and what is going to happen when they finally 'do it'

Course my main problem that I am running into is that I had said that when Seth and Jono married, they were married by Atemu, who is the son of Ra. My problem is this, who should I get to remarry them now. Since Atemu is not returning 'yet' he can't re-marry them, which leaves someone that is a Priest of Ra, being the only person that is high enough rank to be able to marry the High Priest.

Another thing my betas have said is that they do find that the story is moving quickly, but this was my impression. Jono had been working on Joey for over two years, since they first saw Seto, and Seth had been working on Seto for the last year, so to me, the progression is exact. Always willing to discuss this if you guys think I am wrong.


I would love all the wonderful input to this, as I gotta come up with something before the 10th chapter, which is gonna be the last chapter. So need some help with this