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Wild Thing

By: FatalSuccubus
folder Yu-Gi-Oh › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 6
Views: 4,832
Reviews: 49
Recommended: 0
Currently Reading: 0
Disclaimer: I do not own YuGiOh!, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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A New Zoo for You

Allo! I know I've had some problems with AFF regarding chapter 3, but it's now up and all is well ^.^ This is the last chappie of "Wild Thing", but I have an offer up at the end of the story, so read that! To my reviewers:

Anon: Chappie problem all better. Thanks for pointing that out. Hope you like the story now that it's fixed!

Random: Chappie problem all better. I'm glad you like the story so far, and I hope you like chappie 3 now that's it's up.Thanks much for reading!

Koalared: It was missing, but it's back now! I'm happy that you think the story is cute so far, cute and fluffy was pretty much my goal with this story! Thanks for reading it!

Terry: There! Seto passing out in the zoo for you! And this new chapter, and everything is good again! Also...MOO!

Shinigami: I'm sorry you don't like my story. I would appreciate if you would put what could make it better in your review too. You say you know I can do better, does that mean you've read my other storys and like them? But at least my story gets a cake! Thanks for your review, constructive critism is welcome, especially if you tell me what I can do to make it better.

Kat Tales: It's alright now! I fixed it! We now have a chapter 3!! You can continue again! I'm glad you seem to like the story enough to be so upset about the missing chapter. Thanks you much for your great review!

Maggiemay: MOOx5!!! I like jou, so sexy, specially when he's all confident and horny and such ^.^ I want aussie men, and I wish Manitoba could have some of Australia's weather, 5 feet of snow is just not cool! I'm gonna go to Australia and soak up the sun and meet all the guys and play with animals! Thank much for your great review!

Glue Project: I like your name! Here's the update for you! As for Joey, after 5 years in dealing with hot Aussie men, I figure he's gotten a bit more confident, or at least I hope so, my story depends on it. I'm happy you like the story, and I hope you keep reading! MOO!

Mu: I like Mooaholica Unanimous better, but oh well. I could likely just visit my parents and get the song from them, or download it from the comp. I don'[t even know which station is the oldies...I listen to them all. I'll have to listen to it if you say it fits the story. MOO MOO MOO MOO MOO MOO MOO MOO MOO!!!!!

Icestar(1): Lol, yep, close mouthed Seto! Sorry the chappie wasn't longer, read the offer at the end of this chapter! I'm glad you liked it anyways! And due, LOVE THE IRWIN!!!! He's so great! And I love Bindi!

Icestar(2): My Seto says it's a perfectly good excuse, and he'd like to see you do better! Lol, Still glad you liked..anough for 3 reviews, wow! MOO!

Icestar(3): Wow, creepy laugh. I tried it and scared my dog... ^.^ Amusing it is! And Seto's allowed to get heat stroke, that way he'll have to stay in Australia with Joey!

Thank you to all my reviews! It means a lot to me to get such amazing reviews! My review rate is at only 2.68%, even with all my reviews, so I'm giving up on getting to 5% Think we could get to 3%? Anyone up to the challenge? We'll thanks enough talking from me, on to the story! DO THE MOO, love ya'll!!

Disclaimer: Not my characters, got that? Plot is mine.

Warning: Rated 'R', M/M relationship, lime.

Status: Chapter 5 of 5

Stuff: Short story is 5 parts. Everything is written, and looked over by a great friend. I'll post 1 chapter a day. Reviews are hugely appreciated, as is constructive critism. Same as my other stories, if you don't want to leave a long review, it would be appreciated if you would even just put MOO to show you like it, it would be appreciated greatly ^.^ DO THE MOO, love you all!


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*2 YEARS LATER*

"Thank you all for coming out here. I would also like to send out my thanks to the many people who have made this possible. Now I turn things over to the new manager."

"Thank you. Now..." A quick snip with a large pair of scissors had the red ribbon fluttering to the ground. "I would like to welcome you all to 'The Wild Man Zoo and Wildlife Park!' Come on in!"

Two hours later found two young men cuddling near the crocodile enclosure.

"Looks like your idea is a huge success."

"You were expecting otherwise, puppy?"

"From you? Never."

"Good."

"...You really did all this for me?"

"You want your 'Wild Things', and I want you. It's simple really."

"Seto?"

"Hmm?"

"Your my favorite 'Wild Thing.'"

"I love you too, puppy."

Joey grinned up at his lover, and was met by pale blue eyes grinning back, and a pair of lips capturing his. After a few minutes, the kiss was ended, the blond and brunette smiling at one another.

"Seto?"

"Yes, Jou?"

"There's a croc behind you"

"YEE-AAUUGGG!!!!!"

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So that's it my friends! Ended with a bit of humor, cause I can just see Seto jumping out of his skin there! Thank you for coming and reading my story, and I hope you like it. Reviews are very welcome, even begged for.

For my offer: I know I cut off Seto and Jou at an aqward point after chapter 4, so if you guys want me to, I'll make a bonus chapter to fill in between chapters 4 and 5, that will be NC-17 rated, and will fill in part of that long gap. It's all up to you guys! MOO, Love You All!!!!
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