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The Chambers of Hell

By: gothic032003
folder Yu-Gi-Oh › General
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 4
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Disclaimer: I do not own YuGiOh!, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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The Punishment

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Yugioh characters, I only own the other characters that I made up.

We find the gang talking in quiet groups among themselves. Yami, Seto, Alyssa, and Liz all walked into the dark room where the rest of the group was and suddenly everyone else in the room became silent. “Yami I think you deserve to go back and join the others.” said Alyssa. “But Alyssa you said we could keep him with us and give him another chance, remember? You said that like a few minutes ago?” Liz asked whiningly. “Yeah I know, but I changed my mind, and I’m truly sorry I’m not just doing this just to piss you off if that’s what you thinking Liz; it’s just that he’s no fun, plus he makes us do all the work.” Alyssa explained. “Okay now that’s that settled, Seto come with us; bye Yami.” Liz said happily. “Hey! What! Why’t Y’t Yami or any of us come with you guys and get a break from this wall?” the guys all asked in unison. “Because you aren’t special to us, only Seto is; and besides he is mosefuseful to us in many fulfilling ways that you can’t ever understand; unlike you guys.” Alyssa explained. The guys taking them a few seconds to understand what she meant by that they then all shuddered with discomfort from what Alyssa had just said except for Duke. “What’s that supposed to mean?” asked Duke stupidly. Alyssa’s Pov- How can anyone not hear something like that and not get what it means. He’s probably never heard it before because he’s probably a virgin, or that he’s just really really retarded. Normal Pov- “Is someone (cough cough Duke cough cough) is jealous of someone over there because tve nve never experienced it before themselves and that they could only knows about it by reading magazines and watching movies?” Joey asked sarcastically. Everyone suddenly realizing who he was talking about and started laughing “Shut Up! It’s not funny! And for your information that’s not even true in the first place.” snapped Duke. “I want to know is why only Seto gets to run off to go make out with Liz and Alyssa, and Yami had to stay behind?” Joey asked changing the subject. “Because I didn’t give them what they wanted and Seto did so I got held back while Seto gets to go have fun.” explained Yami. “Sorry that’s too bad.” said Yugi sympatrically. “Yami is that where they took Seto of to?” Selena asked. “Yeah in some separate room somewhere in this huge castle.” explained Yami. “Oh.” was all anyone said in response to what Yami had just said being awestruck. The other three entered the room making everyone else that was already in the room look at them in wonder of what they might do next. “Come on Seto let’s go and leave Alyssa here to watch and torment these stupid idiotic people.” Liz said coyly. “Hey! where do you get off saying that we’re stupid, Where’re not stupid!” shouted Joey defensively. “Yeah, sure you’re not, you just look that way anyways Alyssa come and join us when you’re done here with these people.” Liz said as she started to walk away with Seto. “Hey Liz! Wait up! I never agreed to any of this! This isn’t fair!” shouted Alyssa angrily. “Calm down sis, I’ll be back in about 20 minutes or so to come back and get you. That way you’ll be able to join in on the action too.” Liz said walking away before Alyssa could say or do anything in response. Alyssa’s Pov- This is so not fair, why does she always get to have all the fun and not me! I always end up doing all the work. I know; I guess I’ll just have to take my anger and disappointment out on these guys. That’s too bad I almost feel sorry for them, almost. Normal Pov- “Ha-ha! I guess I’ll just have to torment you guys after all, since I can’t have any fun of my own.” Alyssa said happily. “What! That’s not fair! What is your problem anyway, just because you can’t get your way you act like a little ugly stupid baby brat and throw a tantrum by taking it out on all of us you stupid b****!” Duke said angrily. Everyone became silent after what Duke had just said. Joey than whispers to Duke silently “Nice move dice boy, now you’ve really pissed her off.” “Joey shut up and don’t call me dice boy you queer!” Duke started to tease Joey angrily again when he was interrupted. “Silence! You really need to learn how to treat a woman with more respect. And it’s very disrespectful of you to call any woman a b****”! Do you see any female dogs in here; no I don’t think I see any in here, so maybe next time you try to call someone else anything like that maybe you should think about what it means first, since you obliviously don’t know what a b**** means or else you wouldn’t of called me that.“ Alyssa replied angrily at Duke. “Great why don’t you piss everyone you meet off since that’s what you’re good at doing you dumb***!” said Serenity angrily. Serenity I never thought I’d never hear you call someone anything like that.” said Joey. “What Joey, she’s right that’s what he is and always will be” said Tea. “You agree with me Tea?” asked Serenity. “Yea why shouldn’t she, he deserved to be called that, since that’s what he acts like.” said Mai agreeing with what Serenity and Tea had just said about Duke. “Dude, that’s scary, all the girls are joining forces.” said Joey. “that’s right; right girls?” asked Tea. Everyone agreed with her including Selena, except Mai, she believed in being by herself. Mai’s Pov- I swear Tea is so gay who the hell ever heard of girls joining forces? I think all that crap is bull s***, who the hell would ever want to do anything Tea says; they’re probably just agreeing with her to be nice and not make her feel; bad. And Selena is acting so fake I wonder why does anyone else see it? Maybe it’s because I’ve know her longer than anyone else has and that I know her better than that. She’ll do anything she can just to get what she wants, and she wants Seto, but I don’t think Liz and Alyssa will give him up that easily or without a fight. Normal Pov- Meanwhile...Alyssa was still pissed off about what Duke had said to her earlier. “Okay, everyone (glaring at Duke) I think that the next dare should belong to Duke and to Duke only.” Alyssa said smiling. Releasing Duke from the wall she snaps her fingers and Duke ends up tied to a chair. “What the hell do you plan on doing to me?” Duke cried out in confusion. “Duke I think it would be best if you had chosen the choice of your words you use towards me more carefully or your dare might get even worse then it is now.” Alyssa said coyly. “I don’t give a f*** what you say to me; you’re not the boss of me and I can say whatever I want towards you.” Duke said angrily. “Okay fine; you asked for it, if you feel anycomfcomfort during this dare, just remember it’s your own fault.” Alyssa explained. Duke didn’t respond but only gave her a cold stare. “Okay Duke you’re dare will be that you will have to be tied to that chair, which you’re already tied to, while everyone will be given bats and metal clubs and to be allowed to beat the crap out of you. And if that’s not bad enough, after they’ve beaten you up to a certain degree; you must sit there and watch seven straight hours of female porn.” Alyssa explained laughing the entire time in his face. “What?! Nooooooo! I don’t wanna! I wanna stay and bake cookies with you!” Duke screamed while kicking and screaming trying to get away from fulfilling the dare. “That’s too bad you don’t have a choice whether or not you do this dare you should of thought of that earlier, you will complete it if you like it or not. Maybe this will hopefully teach you a lesson next time you try cussing at someone.” explained Alyssa angrily. When Duke realized that there was no way of escaping this dare, he just let his body go limp and let it the dare happen instead of using up all of his energy trying to resist it. Alyssa snapped her fingers and all the girls were equipped with long thick metal bats and all the guys were equipped with long black iron poles that looked like they could be used to shock someone. “Okay everyone get your weapons ready, now f the the girls get to beat him with everything you got for ten minutes, then the guys its your turn to do the same.” Everyone took there turns enjoying that they were putting him through hell and so much pain and suffering. Everyone got a chance to hurt Duke; except Tea. Duke’s Pov- The pain, it hurts so much I can’t stand it (and in a few minutes he couldn’t see anything and he started feeling light headed) I think I’m dying, everything seems so dark. (And everything went black) Normal Pov- “You guys he’s had enough.” explained Serenity. “I think Duke just passed out.” said Tea quietly, the only one that had noticed. “I think Tea’s right, okay everyone can stop now; he’s not dead, he just passed out that’s all; he’ll be okay for now.” explained Alyssa. Duke wakes up twenty minutes later and regains consciousness and awakes with a serious headache. “Morning sleeping beauty.” said Tristan jokingly. Everyone laughed at what Tristan had just said. “Ha-ha very funny Tristan.” said Duke sarcastically. “What the hell happened to me?” asked Duke angrily. “All I remember is being tied to this crappy chair, which by the way why am I still tied to, than you guys beat the crap out of me, which hurt like hell, and than I blacked out, which at the time I thought I was going to die, that’s all I remember.” Duke explained. “I didn’t hit you.” said Tea. “Yeah and even though I was pissed at you and still am, I wouldn’t of allowed them to beat you to death, I’m not that cold hearted.” explained Alyssa. Duke smiles at Tea “thanks Tea I appreciate it, and can I please be released now from this uncomfortable chair, I think I’ve suffered enough.” asked Duke. “As much as I’d like to you’re not done the dare yet and yet I think you deserve more suffering.” explained Alyssa. “What?! Why not? What’s wrong with you?! You stupid b****!” screamed Duke in outrage and puzzled confusion. “What did I tell you, you little piece of s***, did you not learn your lesson?!” snapped Alyssa. “Just ignore him, he’s just a stupid little sad boy deep down inside.” Said Joey. This comment made Alyssa smile. “Yes I realize that, and as for you Duke the next part of your dare is that you must watch seven hours straight of female porn.” Alyssa explained. Duke’s face went pale and white as chalk. “Nooooooo! Anything else than that! That’s like the worse punishment any man can ever imagine!” “As pathetic as that sounded; you almost sounded sincere, but you have to complete the next part of the dare no matter what.” Alyssa said laughing in Duke’s face. At the snap of her fingers a large television screen appeared in front of Duke. The other guys tried turning away so that they couldn’t see anything, but they were too late. “My eyes, my eyes! I’ll never be able to see again! It’ll be in my dreams for weeks, I’ll have nothing but horrible vivid nightmares, I think we’re scarred for life!” the guys all screamed and looked away. The girls on the other hand became horny as they all watched the television; all except for Tea since she’s never seen anything like that before. Seven hours later “Okay Duke you’re done now,
you’re dare is complete.” Alyssa explained. Duke’s Pov- I’ve learned never to piss her off or any other woman ever again, man that was horrifying, I don’t think I’ll ever survive from that. Tea’s Pov- Poor Duke I wish there was some way that I could make it uphim.him. I know I’ll tell him how I feel about him and I just know that, that will make him happy. Normal Pov- “I’m free! I’m free from that horrifying experience!” Duke screamed happily.
End of chapter threhopehope you enjoyed it please r&r(looks at the readers pleadingly, while dodging things being thrown at her from the guys “why did you make us watch that? That was horrifying!” “Here maybe this will calm you guys down” flashes the guys. “Yeah thank you that’s much better, you’re forgiven.”) R&R (read and review) (looks at readers pleadingly) Please??? (no flames :P

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