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Phile 22: The Power of Goodbye

After trying for a whole week to get this uploaded, only to have the site go down (lol) on me repeatedly, I finally got it up!! This is the foursome baby!!! Mai/Yami/Joey and DIAMOND!! That's right... no Sunni for this chappie, and you'll see why.Also a little Yugi/Seto and Ryou/Otogi!! Whooooohooo!!!

This chappie contains: Triple dick foursome, superseme! Bakura, Seto Kaiba like! Joey, a little yaoi, and loads of fun! You'll see why I named this chapter what I did towards the end!! Enjoy!!

For Mystical Dragon: You rock, my dear. And thanks for chatting with me on the phone.

Czar-chan: Much love, hareta and not much longer now before I can see you! I can't wait!!

DD Yami Dragon and Bakurasgirl: How's married life treating ya?

DISCLAIMER: Not mine, so stop looking at me funny! LOL.

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"Is everything ready?"

"Yes. Yugi checked everything down to the last detail. Including the camera setup."

"Excellent. I want her to remember and realize the prize she let go. Since she thinks I am female, it should prove most interesting. Think she can handle three men?"

"She should be able to. She had no problem with Diamond or Sunni before. Too bad Sunni got her period and couldn't participate tonight. I want to see her face when she realizes you aren't a woman."

"That's why I love Yugi so much. I'm glad he's taping this for us. He, Seto, Ryou, and Otogi are all downstairs watching." Amethyst eyes met amber. "You've improved greatly since you came to MG as Seto's lover and Yugi's friend and lover, Katsuya. I am most proud of you."

A quick kiss. "Thanks, Yami. It means a lot to hear you say that. Tonight, I get to love you again as well. I hope Mai gets the lesson out of this. Are you going upstairs to the bedroom? Mai should be here any minute."

"Yes, let's hurry, Joey. Diamond will answer the door when she rings the bell, and you and he will greet her, then bring her up to me—I want to see her face when she realizes just how masculine I am."

Another quick kiss and a sarcastic chuckle. "Thanks Yami, let's get this show on the road."

Parting swiftly, the two men walked off, their silk robes billowing behind them.
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Mai Kujaku raced down the streets of Domino, back to Fantasy Mansion 1 for her private fantasy invitation. Holding the wheel of her car steady, she pulled out the invitation she had received a week ago and reread it.

~*~ Invitatio a D a Dark Sleep (A/N: yes, A Duel Monsters Card Name!! LOL!!)

Katsuya and Diamond request the pleasure of your company at Fantasy Mansion 1 Friday night at ten p.m. for your much-anticipated foursome. Please just bring yourself, and an active imagination. Also, the mysterious Yami will be revealed to you. Thanks again for choosing Millennium Gold for your sexual needs. ~*~

Mai frowned darkly, thinking of how that Yami bitch had taken her precious Joey away. "She'd better be more beautiful than me, because I honestly can't see how Joey would leave all this beauty behind," she muttered to herself. Viciously, she turned the car down the next street, swerving and making other startled motorists jump and yell at her indignantly. She flipped them off and stepped on the gas, her jealousy, curiosity and anger taking her faster to the mansion.

Meanwhile at the mansion, Joey was pacing up and down the short hallway by the foyer. He was nervous; it was the first time he'd seen Mai since their breakup. Diamond watched Joey with an expression between amusement and irritation.

"Will you stop that fucking pacing? You're giving me a headache."

'Sorry, Bakura, but I am a bit nervous. It's the first time I've seen her since we broke up."

"I know Joey, but it'll be fine, I promise you. If anything gets out of hand, Seto will come up here and put a halt to it. Did you forget they were watching?"

"Oh Gods… how am I to do this with my lovers watching me? I can't help but think about that!"

Bakura laughed shortly, then said seductively, "Once Yami and I get hold of you, I guarantee you won't remember your name, let alone a camera watching you."

Joey swallowed hard, then tensed up as he heard Mai's car swerve into the driveway with a loud screeching noise.

"Oh God… she's here."

"Leave this to me, Joey. I'll greet the lady. You sit here on the couch, and rise when I bring her in the room." Bakura walked over to Joey and opened his amber-colored silk robe, baring his magnificent chest. Bakura gently nibbled on each of Joey's nipples, causing him to moan and perk his nipples up to hard attention.

"Let her see the body she chose to give up by acting like a spoiled bitch. Plus that was my excuse to cop a feel before anybody else touched that delectable body." Bakura's eyes roamed over Joey's muscled chest and abs appreciatively. Smiling with satisfaction, he leaned in to whisper to Joey seductively.

"I'm going to so enjoy fucking you, Joey. I want to hear you howl for me the way you do for Seto."

Joey swallowed hard and looked at Bakura, feeling his dick getd asd as petrified wood. He was about to say something when a knock sounded at the door. He jumped, getting nervous quickly.

"Leave this to me, Joey. You sit here on the couch and look sexy until I bring her in, okay?" Bakura said, rubbing Joey's chest soothingly. Joey nodded, having long since gone mute. Bakura winked saucily, then opened the black satin robe of his own pajamas and headed to the door to let Mai in.

Mai was about to knock on the door again when it was suddenly flung open by Diamond, who looked more sexy than the law should allow, with his long silvery white hair cascading over his shoulders covered by black satin. His pants were also black satin, and soft black slippers covered his feet. Mai felt herself get wet looking at this virile, sexy young man in front of her.

"Konban wa, Mai. We meet again. You're looking… well, my beauty." Mai was dressed in red—bustier, skirt, and three-inch strappy stilettos. Her lips were painted a deep crimson color and her long blonde hair flowed over her bare shoulders. Diamond licked his lips in anticipation, remembering full well how her body looked—all lush and pink and full.

"Konban wa, Diamond. You look good enough to eat. May I come in?"

"Yes, please do. Welcome to your Dark Sleep fantasy. Come on."

Diamond took Mai's hand and led her to the sitting room where he knew Joey was. Mai followed along, wondering in her mind where Joey could be, and feeling more nervous than she cared to admit. She hadn't seen her love in so long…

Diamond walked into the sitting room, and smiled sexily when Joey rose from the couch, like a Greek god rising from the sea. He turned to Mai slowly and greeted her, his voice soft and deep."

"Hello, Mai."

Mai's jaw hit the ground. Joey looked so damn GOOD! He'd grown his hair out, so it just brushed his shoulders and was thick and healthy-looking. He'd filled out more, too, she noticed, checking out how the silk robe hugged his shoulders before parting invitingly to reveal his smooth tanned chest and perked nipples. The silk of the pants did nothing to conceal the enormous bulge she saw ing ing in his pants as he looked at her. Her Joey had gone from an awkward and shy boy to one hell of a man…

Mai nearly lost her ability to stand when Joey approached her slowly, his amber eyes glittering like a cat's. She felt wetness trickling down her leg when Joey lifted one of her hands and gallantly kissed it.

"It's so good to see you, Mai. You look beautiful as always."

"Thanks," Mai said, her voice gone husky and purring as she stared at Joey. She nearly came when Joey gently pulled her into his arms for a hug. She moaned at the feel of his warm chest pressed against her breasts and wondered if Joey could feel her hard nipples through her bustier.

Bakura smirked, loving all the unresolved sexual tension in the room. The night held lots of promise, and he hadn't even taken her upstairs yet and shown her just who Yami was! Grinning evilly, Bakura coughed politely behind his hand, breaking the two ex-lovers apart.

"Come, you two, Yami is waiting for us. Let's not waste any more time. Follow me, please."

Bakura strode off, his robe billowing behind him in true Seto fashion. He heard Joey and Mai follow him, and his grin widened. This was going to be one hell of a night…


Bakura led the two to the third floor, first bedroom to the left. No one talked on the way up, but as they approached the bedroom's door. Mai suddenly found her voice.

"So, am I finally gonna meet this 'Yami' wench? You know, the one who took you from me?"

Joey rolled his eyes; he knew this was coming. "Mai, no one 'took' me from you. I just removed myself. Happy now?"

"You left because of her! She had a lot to do with your decision!"

"Mai, look, do you want to do this or not?" Joey was now angry, and sick of her fucking whining. He'd had it with that 'nobody is better than me because I'm Mai' arrogant attitude of hers.

Mai was taken aback; Joey had never been forceful or talked back to her in such a manner before. Too surprised to speak, she nodded yes mutely.

"Good. I'm not in the mood for your bullshit tonight, Mai. I'm doing this because you asked me to, not because I have to or because I owe you anything. You don't like it, get the fuck out."
(A/N: Gooooo Joey!!!)

Ba cou couldn't help it, he cracked up laughing at the outright stunned expression on Mai's face. Seto's 'take no shit' attitude had really rubbed off on his young lover. Still chuckling, he said, " Come on, guys, Yami's waiting."

Bakura opened the door to reveal a beautiful bedroom. It was cozy and done in shades of amber, black and dark violet, and lit softly by lamps. On the nightstand, body oils sex sexual toys and lotions waited for use, and Delerium's 'Karma' Cayedayed softly in the background. The bed was massive, big enough for four people and the drapes were closed, but they were parted suddenly by a slim, brown hand. Mai gasped out loud…

"Katsuya," Yami purred, his voice husky and deep. He rose on his knees and wrapped the sheet around his waist, and it was clearwas was naked underneath. He held his hand out; soft invitation and lust in his eyes as his head tilted back slightly to look at Joey. The effect made his deep violet eyes glow softly and showed off his long dark lashes to maximum effect.

"Yami, koibito," Joey murmured, walking over to the slender Egyptian in his bed. Tilting Yami's head back, he kissed him, gently probing his mouth with his tongue and causing Yami to hum low in his throat. Yami let the sheet fall and wrappes has hands into Joey's thick blonde hair, and Joey moaned softly and clung to Yami's slim body tighter.

Bakura had to bite his lip to keep from cracking up at the utter shock on Mai's face. Her eyes were round as dinner plates as she watched Joey male out with the tri-color haired sex god in the bed. Finally, she found her tongue.

"WHAT THE HELL?!"

Joey broke the kiss and turned back to Mai, holding Yami close against his bare chest. Smirking, he looked at Mai, arching an eyebrow. Yami rested his head against Joey's chest, loving the feel and scent of him, and watched Mai with cool violet eyes.

"What? Oh, that's right, you automatically assumed Yami was female! That way, you could feel better about trying to trash him to build yourself up. Well, as you can see, Yami is all man, and a beautiful one at that, and also way out of your league. As you had a bisexual fantasy, I've had one as well, and you'd have known that had you bothered to talk to me instead of demand things. Yami here showed me how deep my own passion ran, and for that he is special to me." (A/N: Payback is a bitch ain't it?)

Mai was shocked, hurt, and downright furious. Her cheeks were red with angry color, and her eyes filled with tears. Bakura was red in the face from holding back his laughter, and finally he could hold back no longer, cracking up.

"You have a choice Mai… you can either stay here and get your boots knocked six ways from Sunday, or you can leave. It doesn't matter to us," Joey said coldly.

"You… You… you… LIED to me!" Mai screamed, tears of rage streaming down her face.

"No, you ASSUMED, and didn’t you know when you assume it makes an ass of you?" Joey said, cruelly. It felt good to give back some of the resentment he'd felt for Mai towards the end of their relationship. Yami giggled, inflaming Mai's temper further. She so longed to slap Yami across his smug, beautiful face, and she stepped forward, hand raised to do just that.

The Sennen eye activated on Yami's forehead and his eyes flashed a warning. Mai gasped in shock, and backed up, afraid now.

"I strongly suggest you put that hand down before you lose it," Yami said, his voice full of hard warning. "Either you want to stay and find out why Joey cares for me the way he does, or you take your little girl jealousies and brattiness and get the hell out of my mansion."

"Your mansion?" Mai whispered, still scared.

"That's right, I am Amethyst, real name Yami, and Millennium Gold belongs to me and my coworker, Sapphire, who is Joey's boyfriend," Yami said. The Sennen eye was still active on his forehead, although it glowed gold and not the angry reddish gold it was a second ago.

"Stay with us Mai, or can you handle the challenge of three dicks?" Yami said boldly.

Mai swallowed hard, looking at the three beautiful male fro front of her. They were handsome specimens, all well-skilled in the many ways of pleasure… only a fool would pass all this dick up, she thought. e bee being with a man had taught Joey some of the passion he'd never given to her. She knew if she walked out now, she'd look like a coward in their eyes and unable to move on with her life. With that, the decision was made.

Prideful as a cat, Mai tilted he chin up and looked directly into Yami's hypnotic violet eyes.

"I accept your challenge, Yami."

"Good," Bakura said, grabbing Mai and kissing her harshly. Yami let the Sennen eye fade from his forehead, and sat back on the bed to watch them, pulling Joey in front of him. Joey slipped out of the silk robe, and sat on the bed, watching Bakura tongue Mai down.

Mai moaned and held on tightly to Bakura's waist, kissing him back with equally starved passion. She hadn't had sex since she'd come here last, and her body yearned for it.

Joey was panting, so much like his nickname, Puppy. Yami was making it no better, rubbing Joey's back and chest and sliding his hands between his legs to skillfully caress Joey's raging erection.

Mai rubbed against Bakura, raking her ruby red nails down his chest and back. Bakura growled, then ripped Mai's bustier off, freeing her full breasts. Bakura wasted no time and planted harsh nips and licks against her breasts before drawing her nipple into his mouth, suckling harshly. Mai cried out loud, loving how rough Bakura was being. She so needed this…

Meanwhile, Yami had Joey lying back on the bed, and he was straddling Joey's waist and leaving hickeys up and down his chest and neck. Joey was writhing and moaning something fierce, and Yami marveled at the response he could get out of him. Joey was such a sensual little thing, and Yami was pleased that he got to make love to him once again.

Bakura stopped attacking Mai's nipples enough to drag her to the bed and shove her down on it. Mai lay there, looking and Bakura with such hunger he could have come on the spot. Instead, he stripped, leaving himself naked to Mai's hungry gaze. He then walked over to Mai and ripped the skirt away from her as well, leaving her naked to his gaze. Mai had decided not to soak up any panties for this trip. Bakura grinned wolfishly, and dropped to his knees, spreading Mai's legs wide and licking, fingering, and sucking on her pussy like he hadn't eaten in weeks. Mai screamed her pleasure out loud, then turned her head to the right, and she almost came at what she saw.

Yami had Joey on his back, writhing and moaning like a trained whore as Yami deep throated him expertly, humming in his throat for extra sensation. Yami felt Mai's eyes on him, and turned his head to her and winked saucily, all the while holding Joey's erection in his mouth. When Yami winked at her, Mai came so hard her whole body raised off the mattress, and Bakura had a hard time trying to hold her steady to prolong her orgasm.

Joey arched his back, then opened his eyes and looked at Mai, who was being held by a smug-looking Bakura. Violet eyes met amber, and Joey kept his gaze on hers as he came in Yami's mouth, screaming with utmost pleasure. Mai moaned out loud, turned on by that sight and the fact that Bakura was lying behind her, rubbing her body with skilled hands.

Yami swallowed Joey's release greedily, then sat up, licking his lips. He crawled slowly over to Mai and tilted her chin up and kissed her slowly, then gently slipped his tongue in her mouth to slide atle tle essence a la Joey in her mouth. Mai moaned, tasting the familiarity of Joey's come and deepened the kiss, while Bakura stood slowly and walked over to the nightstand, checking out the goodies lying in wait.
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Down in the control room, Yugi was sitting contently on Seto's lap, eatiopcoopcorn. Seto was somewhere between pissed and turned on, but he wasn't worried because he knew Joey loved him. Otogi was trying to masturbate on the slick, and Ryou was purring loudly, rubbing against Seto's muscled thigh.

"Damn, it's getting hot in here," Otogi said, still playing with his erection.

"Yeah it is," Ryou said softly, still rubbing against Seto's thigh.

"Calm down you fools, and watch the show," Seto snapped, although he had slipped his hand into Yugi's pants. "Bakura just broke out the lubricant. I've got to see what he does with it."

"Oh, yesssss," Yugi moaned, feeling Seto's hand in his pants. "Let's … watch."
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Bakura moved back to the bed, where Mai was lying on her side and being rubbed by Joey from the front and Yami from the back. She was literally in heaven at their masterful touches. Joey was kissing her lips and neck with such tenderness that she wanted to scream, and Yami was licking a wet trdowndown the spine of her back. Bakura smirked, then instructed the other two men to stop, much to Mai's protest.

"Why'd you stop us, Bakura?" Joey asked. Yami smiled; he knew what Bakura was going to suggest.

"Since we have such a willing woman amongst us, I say we all get our dicks wet tonight," Bakura said evilly. "Mai, have you ever been triple penetrated?"

Mai blinked in surprise, then looked at Bakura with wide eyes. "Triple penetrated?"

"Yes. A dick in your pussy, one in your ass, and one in your mouth," Bakura said calmly.

"No, can't say I have," Mai said, a little stunned.

"Well there is a first time for everything. Joey, lie flat on your back. Mai, get on top of him."

Joey obeyed, and Mai climbed over to Joey slowly, skillfully exciting his penis back to attention. She stared at her beautiful Joey, marveling at how much he'd changed since she'd seen him last. He was a ravishing creature, well learned and deeply sexual.

Mai gripped Joey's erection firmly, earning herself a loud moan. Steadying herself, she slowly slid down Joey's erection, thrilling when she heard him cry out in bliss. Joey gripped Mai's hips tightly, and Mai moved a little bit, making Joey arch his back and tighten his grip.

"Now, now, Joey, calm down and let us finish," Bakura said, smiling a little. "Yami, come here."

Yami slid over on the bed to Bakura, and moaned when Bakura quickly aroused him again with a few well-placed touches. He then took the lubricant and generously poured it over Yami's erection, rubbing it in just a little bit. Yami thrust up into his hand then stopped himself.

"Now, prepare her just like you would your little lover, Yami, then take her," Bakura instructed. Yami nodded then took a small amount of lubricant on his own fingers and gently stretched Mai's virgin ass. First one finger, then two, then finally three until Mai pushed back against his fingers. Yami nodded again, then sat on Joey's legs and slowly slipped into Mai's tight nether channel. Mai moaned, feeling stuffed—both men had fairly big dicks, but she refused to punk out. She was going to ride this evening out—literally.

"Mmm, good," Bakura said, getting hard all over once again. "Ride Joey, Mai, and Yami, get in that ass."

Mai nodded, moaning loudly, then moved in a circular motion on Joey's erection. Joey moaned and gripped her tightly, and Yami repeated the same motion in Mai's ass until a rhythm was found. Mai leaned down over Joey, close enough to kiss him and give Yami room to thrust inside her, which he did eagerly. She rotated her hips in a circle, giving both males pleasure as Bakura watched, waiting to make his move.
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Downstairs, Otogi screamed his release as Ryou pounded into him, his whore side taking over. Yugi was riding Seto with an intensity that made Seto thrust up into him harder every time, making the little one cry out in both English and Japanese. Seto stabbed Yugi's prostate with skill and determination until Yugi came so hard, it hit Seto in the chest and stomach and splashed on his own stomach. Seto growled his release and filling Yugi up with so much cum, it ran down his thighs to drip onto the couch.

Ryou, who was fucking Otogi doggy style, leaned over him and grabbed his erection and pumped it roughly, making Otogi scream in four octaves as he came. Ryou growled possessively and bit Otogi's shoulder, marking him as he released hard himself.

Ryou pumped twice more to make sure all of his release was expelled then slipped out of Otogi with a low groan. Yugi had long since passed out on Seto's chest and Seto held him, rubbing his back tenderly. Otogi fainted next, the sheer intensity of the orgasm toch fch for him.

"I think we wore them out," Seto whispered. "Damn, Ryou, what happened to you?"

"Something just came over me," Ryou whispered. "All hot and animalistic."

"I much like that side of you, Ryou," Seto said softly, smiling serenely. "Let's watch the rest of the action upstairs while our two ukes get a nap in."

Ryou nodded and climbed back onto the couch, holding a still-sleepingOtogi in his arms as they watched the explosive climaxes going on upstairs.
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Bakura thrust in and out of Mai's mouth so fast, she could barely keep up. Bakura had a death grip in her hair, and she loved it. Joey was now thrusting up into Mai, timing his thrusts carefully with Yami's. As he moved up, Yami pulled out and as Yami pulled out, he moved down, and so on. All the dicks in the room overwhelmed Mai, and she had already come twice.

Suddenly, Bakura tensed and growled, coming in Mai's mouth so forcefully she choked. Joey gripped her hips and came, howling like a wolf at the moon. Yami gritted his teeth and shrieked, filling Mai's ass with spurt after spurt of hot come.

"That was good," Joey whispered, passing out.

Mai swallowed, streams of cum running down her chin as she felt Yami gently slide out of her. Streams of come ran down her ass, too, and she could not believe she'd taken so much dick in one night. She eased herself off of Joey, feeling his come trickle down her thighs and flopped on the bed on her side, a come-soaked mess.

"This was the best night I've ever had sexually," she whispered. "I never knew I had all of this in me. Yami I must thank you for bringing Joey's hot blood to the fore."

"Joey's always been hot-blooded," Yami said tiredly, lying on his side behind Mai. "He just felt he couldn't express himself with you."

"I know, and I wish Joey all the happiness in the world with you three," Mai said sadly. She still loved Joey, and it was hard for her to admit defeat.

Bakura lay down next to Joey, watching the scene in front of him but offering no comment. For one, he knew Mai still loved Joey, and for two, he also knew she'd come there tonight to try and win Joey back, but her will to fight was lost after seeing how well Joey was being taken care of here. Bakura locked eyes with Yami, and he knew then that Yami had known the same thing as well. Understanding flashed between the two of them, and together, they rose from the bed, letting Joey sleep peacefully, and took Mai to the shower, where they took turns gently bathing her body.

"I admire your courage, Mai, in letting Joey go," Yami said softly as he washed Mai's back and buttocks.

"I know. It hurts so bad, letting him go, but I have to," Mai replied. "And I apologize for my fit of temper earlier. I wasn't going to hit you."

"I would have stopped you anyway, " Yami said calmly as the three of them finished their shower. They hopped out and dried off quickly, then headed back out to the bedroom. The three of them stopped and gazed at Joey tenderly, seeing the little smile on his face as he slept. Yami took a small basin and had Bakura fill it up with warm water, and he handed the towel to Mai.

"Clean him up."

Mai nodded and began to gently wipe the leftover come off Joey's stomach and thighs, and off his now soft arousal. Joey moaned in his sleep, then called out a name.
Oh, Oh, Seto…" (A/N: we all know what he's dreaming about! Tee hee!)

Tears filled Mai's eyes, but she kept going and finished the job. Afterwards, she covered him with the blanket, and sat on the bed, looking miserable. Yami and Bakura nodded at each other, and each man gently took one of Mai's hands and laid her next to Joey, who'd turned on his side. Yami went in behind her and Bakura bought up the rear. Mai closed her eyes, comforted by Joey's scent and body so near hers as she closed her eyes, tears streaming down her face. Yami and Bakura soon followed afterwards, but not before Yami used his gift to play a song for Mai and turn the lights off.

'Your heart is not open, so I must go.
The spell has been broken, I loved you so.
Freedom comes when you learn to let go
Creation comes when you learn to say no.

You were my lesson d tod to learn.
I was your fortress you had to burn.
Pain is a warning that something's wrong
I pray to God that it won't be long.
I wanna go higher…

There's nothing left to try.
There's no more places to hide.
e'se's no greater power
Than the power of goodbye.'


I think Mai learned her lesson. Don't you?


~Owari~
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That was my longest chapter to date: 12 pages!! That's right, 12! The song is "The Power of Goodbye," by Madonna. I love that song, and it fit this situation perfectly.

Basically Mai's fantasy was her fully letting go of Joey, knowing that he would never have him or be with him again. Mai fucked up a good thing by being the way she was, and the fantasy was given to her for that reason--to learn to say goodbye and move on.

I am working on Shadow Sabre's phile now, since he or she won the contest for my reflections fic. Rock on!!

Off to finish typing.... thanks guys!!!

Keysha, who loved this phile a lot!
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