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The New Girl - Perfection has Landed!

By: Whytney
folder Yu-Gi-Oh › General
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 21
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Disclaimer: I do not own YuGiOh!, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Chapter 2: The Items

Phantom_Panther: Well, here we are again.

Lori: Much to my amusement.

PP: And the readers, we hope. That's you *points* ^_^

Lori: Haven't had any flames so far so... let us begin the torture once again with... CHAPTER TWO: THE ITEMS

Bakura: How painfully original.

Malik: These people have no lives...

PP: Who?

Malik: You!

Lori: Us?! WE are the ones taking the piss, moron.

Malik: Well, you all have too much spare time on your hands.

PP: Not if you work full time like me e_e

Bakura: Just shut up and get on with it -_-


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Chapter 2: The Items

Sakura's P.O.V

We ran into the school and just made it to the classroom. Joey let go of me and I went flying into someone.

Lori: How

Bakura: Fucking

PP: Original.

"Ow...sorry..." I got up and looked at the kid I bumped into. He had long white hair and a kind face, "Let me help you up," I held out my hand and helped him up.

Ryou: Oh, so I’m a kid now? How old do you think I am?!

"Thanks," he had a really heavy british accent. It made him sound hot.

JG: “british” is “British”. Again, use a capitol letter for place names.

"You're welcome. I kinda was sent flying into you," I glared at Joey. The bell rang and we rushed into class.

Malik: Talk about getting your words jumbled.

"I'm glad you came to join us," the teacher told us. "Take your seats, oh Miss Kodasawa, please introduce yourself and don't leave out any deatails," the teacher smiled and pushed me to the front of the class. I hated doing this.

Mai: Details, not ‘deatails’.

"Well...my name is Sakura Kodasawa. You can call me Kura. I moved here from Osaka a couple of days ago. I like to listen to Good Charolett. I love to duel, and am the dueling champion from Osaka. I like to swim, and play the ocasional sport. My favorite cards, well a couple of them are, Buster Blader, and Black Luster Soilder.

JG: Holy motherf*cking shit, she even spelt it wrong again. “Charlotte” not “Charolett” =_=

"I wouldn't waist my time dueling you." Kaiba yelled.

Mai: It’s “waste” not “waist”. A waist is the area defining the hip region. *strikes a pose*

"HEY SHUT IT KAIBA!" the kid I bumped into shouted in that adorable accent.

Ryou: Again, a kid? A kid?! Do I look like I go to fucking preschool?! *hyperventilating*

PP: O.0 woah, Ryou’s having a bitch fit XD Breathe, sweetie, breathe…

Ryou: X_x

Who is that kid...

Ryou: O_O++

"HEY! BAKURA! DO US ALL A FAVOR! GET A LIFE!" a random kid yelled.

Ryou: Alright, why is this authoress referring to all the students in the class as “kids”? INCLUDING myself?!

Lori: Because she’s probably only a child herself…

PP: *laying in Malik’s lap sleepily* Touché…

"EVERYONE! SHUT UP!" I yelled getting angry. "Wow!" I was stunned I had the effect I did. Yugi, Kaiba, Ryou and Joey all backed up in there seat, "I'm sorry ma'am," I bowed.

Lori: “there” should be “their”.

"I can't yell that loud so, thankyou. You can take a seat beside Mr. Kaiba."

Bakura: Miss Little Tough Bitch who screams too much for her own good, eh? We’ve had those before.

PP: And “thank you” are separate words.

Great, I get to sit by Mr. Cheerful over there. I took my seat and stared at the chalk board.

"Bakura please come up and pass up the books. Ryou Bakura! BAKURA!"

"Sorry ma'am. I was staring at something," as he walked by me he smiled. The white haired one was Ryou Bakura. I stared dumbstruck as he passed out the books.

Jou: XD looks like you’re the guy that falls madly in love with her in this one, Ryou!

Ryou: =_= my life is over!

He's amazing!

Ryou: Well, I do try.

"Okay class, open up to page 3 and read chapter 1."

"Yes ma'am." The whole class said.

Lori: Are these people from Texas or something? XD

PP: So glad I’m not American…*

As I read I kept staring back to Ryou. When he looked up from his book I turned away and went back to my reading.

Lori: That’s something that only a blushing sixteen-year-old virgin would do.

Ryou: I feel nauseous…

Bakura: *is having a gagging fit on the floor*

PP: =_= eww.

After school I ran into Mr. Cheerful again.

Malik: She really likes using the same nicknames over and over again, doesn’t she?

PP: Amateur authors tend to do that… when they’ve got nothing more original to come up with xD

"Move Kodasawa! I've got a company to run," Kaiba tried to push me out of the way but I stayed my ground.

"Listen you baka, what is your problem? Tell me! Cause you know what? I want to be your friend! You just don't give me the chance. So...when you want to talk, call me," I tossed him a peice of paper with my number on it and left for my house.

JG: What the fuck?

Kaiba: Was she trying to pick me up or…

Ryou: I bloody well hope so, cause then she can leave me alone.

Jou: Or maybe she’s just a slut.

Lori: I concur.

How was your day? Cala asked me.

YEAH?! Caru screamed.

Well I met a cute guy named Ryou. I also met a baka named Seto Kaiba. Anyway nothin much other than that. Oh yeah I also met a few other people.

Well that is good. But hurry home!

Why? I asked Cala.

Caru is driving me CRAZY! SHE GOT INTO THE SUGAR! Cala yelled. I could faintly hear Caru.

YEAH! SUGAR! Caru had definatly got into the suagr. That was never a good thing.

Kaiba: “definitely” and “sugar”.

Hurry! Please?!!! Cala was definatly needing some help.

PP: What he said. *points above*

"Hey Sakura," a voice said.

"AH!" I turned around and Yugi was standing there. "Oh, sorry Yugi. You scared me."

"Why are you holding your necklace?" Yugi asked. I had unknowingly grabbed my charm.

"Oh...I just hold it when I get scared. My father gave it to me," I answered. I didn't want to reveal that I had a Millennium Item. Much less a Millennium weapon. I noticed Yugi's golden puzzle and than it hit me.

PP: “then” not “than”.

Yugi has the Millenium puzzle. How can he have the Millennium Puzzle. He's in danger! Anyone who holds a Millennium item is in danger. Cala! Caru! YUGI HOLDS THE MILLENNIUM PUZZLE! I was trying to keep my cool, stay calm. But I couldn't face the fact that he might be killed if I didn't do something. I have to help him!

Lori: She just left us totally in the dark.

Yuugi: Why must I be killed? Not that it’s a bad thing… bearing in mind I LIVE next to this bitch =_=

Kaiba: Is she going to kill him?

PP: Are her yamis going to kill him?

Lori: Is her alcoholic mother or “Jenina” going to kill him?

Yuugi: I’ll kill MYSELF! *runs to closest nearby window and jumps out of it*

Calm down Sakura. We have to talk to his yami as soon as possible! Understand? Cala remained calm.

Yes. I needed to get home. I snapped out of my trance, it seemed Yugi had just snapped out of a trance too.

Malik: Well that’s… actually, rather stupid. I was going to say nice, but, no. It’s not.

"You ok?" I asked.

"Yeah, you?" Yugi asked me.

"Fine," I struggled for words, the last time I grabbed that charm he was there. I hoped he wasn't coming.

What happens if he's already here? Cala? Caru? Can you sense him?

No...wait...there is something evil, Cala told me. I was starting to worry.

"Sakura are you ok? You look pale." Yugi looked worried.

"Listen, I need to talk to you later. Is Yuri your sister or cousin?" I asked, I'd been wanting to know that for so long.

"Sister, rather sad story how she came into our life, so...I...maybe I can tell you later. Call me so I know when you come over, and just walk in. Okay?"

"Alright," I smiled.

"Cool, so see you later."

"Could I ask a favor?" I was a little embaraced.

PP: That’s not even a word.

"What?"

"Oh, never mind. I'll talk to you later, bye!" I ran off without another word.

Normal P.O.V

Sakura raced in the door and ran up to her room. She spwarld out on the bed and laid there for a bit.

Mai: XD She “spwarld”? Please, hon. Get a dictionary! Or go back to school, either or. Its “sprawled”.

AHH! CARU! STOP CHASING ME! Cala yelled while being chased by Caru.

ALMOST GOTTCHA!

Would you two shut up for a bit.

Sakura got up and went to the closet. She pulled on a black and white plad mini-skirt, a blue blouse, and red platform sandles. She pulled her hair down and let it hang full length, which fell to the small of her back, and put on light red eyeshadow.

Mai: “Plaid”, not “plad”.

PP: “Sandals” not “sandles”. Oh, and isn’t it always the way how every perfect, gorgeous, stunningly beautiful, flawless, powerful, Sennen-Item-owning, psycho-tempered Mary-Sue has got waist-length hair?

Mai: You can talk. Look at your hair!

PP: Shut up, yours is the same length. Oh, and, again, “eyeshadow” is not a joined word. Separate.

Glad to be out of that blasted school uniform!

It is pretty ugly, Cala paced up and down.

What's up? Since Caru finally went to sleep.

I sense an evil presence, I have a feeling it's him.

Great. I'll go and call Yugi.

Lori: How is something “great” if it’s supposedly evil…?

Sakura picked up the phone and dialed Yugi's number. (A/N: For the phone call Sakura will speak in bold italics while Yugi will speak in italics)

"Moshi, moshi. Who may I be speaking to?" Yugi's voice said.

Moshi, Moshi. Yugi can I come over now? Please? It's an emergany. Sakura was shifting around.

Kaiba: An “emergany”? She missed out the ‘c’ -.-

"Of course. Is something bugging you?" Yugi asked.

Yeah. I need to talk to your yami. Do you know anyone else who has a Millennium item?

"Yeah, why?"

Like I said. Tell you when I get there. Ja ne. Sakura hung up the phone.
(A/n: phone call ends here)

Lori: Well DUH!

Ryou: We kind of figured that when she hung up…

Sakura rushed out of the house and into the Kame Game Shop. Yuri and Yugi were waiting in the living room.

"We can talk in my room," Yugi said and they all went upstairs.

"Sakura," a new voice came from his room. There stood his yami, right beside him. His yami was a bit taller, but other than that, he still looked the same.

"Yami..." Sakura bowed.

"Sakura, may I see your yami's?"

"Her yami's?" Yuri asked. A person who was just like her but a bit taller.

PP: “A person who was just liked her but a bit taller”…… a bit taller what? What was the point in that sentence?!

Kaiba: There was none.

Otogi: And it made no sense.

"How did you know?" Sakura asked.

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* PP: Heh, I'm not American ^_^ na na na na na naaaaaaa!! Betcha can't guess where I'm from ^~ unless I put it in my profile... *doesn't remember* o_O

Lori: Well, that was…

PP: A really retarded place to end a chapter.

Jou: I concur.

Lori: That’s MY saying! *tackles*

PP: -_- okay, well… guess we’ll end this chapter now XD Until next time, fellow readers! Ja!
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