Closets and Car Crashs
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Yu-Gi-Oh › Yaoi - Male/Male
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Yu-Gi-Oh › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
5
Views:
6,103
Reviews:
46
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own YuGiOh!, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Chap.1 Hidden
Alright, this is the first anime fanfic I actually finished.
I wouldn't put a story online, unless I'm 100% sure to finish it. So, don't worry, the updates will come.
The fic has 4 chapters and all of them are already completed. I just need to edit them a little.
I'll update about every three days. Hope you'll like it!
What else? Oh yeah! This is a Shonen-Ai fanfic, so, all of you who don't like male/male stories.... shoo shoo... get lost...
DISCLAIMER: A bunch of Yu-Gi-Oh! cards and a crappy old videotape is about all I own that's related to the series. And, not even I am stupid enough to expect payment for my writings, so... no need to worry about financial benefits, alright? Be generous and PLEASE don't sue me, all you might get are my cards... and I couldn't live without my baby dragon :(
EDIT: Thanks to my lovely Betas Oni_Kitsune and Ykarzel I proudly present the spaced and corrected and overall better version of 'closets and car crashs' (or as Ykarzel lovingly called it 'coming out of the closet')... I can't even say how thankful I am for all the help they offered and brought along!
So here goes the story:
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Chapter One: "Hidden"
Joey blinked. He hadn’t expected it to be this dark. They must have made sure every little beam of light would be stopped from entering the small room.
“Ouch!” Joey murmured when he stumbled over a shoe, or something, and nearly fell. “Couldn’t you clean the closet before sending people in to break their neck?” he yelled angrily, getting even angrier when he heard the others outside giggling at him. Joey grunted and stretched out his arms to find Mai.
This game had been quite boring until he had realized they would send him into the closet “where someone was waiting for him”. His friends knew about his thought to be one-sided obsession for the blonde haired woman, but Tristan was a lousy liar. He knew it was going to be Mai in the closet waiting for him.
Suddenly his hand caught another. Then a second hand ran up his arm and was placed carefully over his mouth.
No talking. Ok. She probably thought that by not speaking she could keep her identity a secret.
He grinned and nodded his understanding and the hand was taken off his mouth, but instead of leaving his face, it stroked Joey’s cheek. He closed his eyes, enjoying the tender moment.
He heard Yugi outside whispering to the others about going back to the living room and leaving them alone. There was the sound of feet walking away as the hand that had held Joey’s snuck up his arm and over the collar of his shirt to rest behind his ear and stroke his hair. When he lifted his hand as well to search for contact, it was tenderly pushed away.
“No touching?” he asked disappointedly, and was shushed by a delicate finger on his lips. Right, no talking either. He had forgotten. Suddenly, he felt stupid. Mai was so much more experienced than he was. It would probably be best to just let her have it her way.
Joey felt himself being drawn a little closer and inhaled. It wasn’t Mai’s usual scent, less sweet and not so heavy. She probably didn’t want him to guess it was her, but he could definitely get used to this scent. In fact it reminded him of something… something… pleasant. He couldn’t really remember what it was exactly, but he didn’t care anyway.
Right now, all Joey wanted to do was concentrate on the warm skin he suddenly felt against his cheek. Holding his breath he took in every little touch. The hand that had moved from behind his ear to the back of his neck, the other one that now lay on his chest and moved up toward his collar. The face that he couldn’t make out due to the darkness, even if his eyes had been open, but that he could feel rubbing tenderly against his cheek.
And then… lips.
Warm, soft lips barely touching him, tracing an invisible line from his cheek up to his closed eye and back down again, finding the way to Joey’s ear. He sighed almost unnoticeably when the lips parted over his earlobe and, for a second, he felt the hot tip of a tongue. Before he knew what he was doing, Joey lifted his hands again and placed them on the slim hips in front of him, and this time Mai seemed to be so distracted that she forgot to protest.
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“Maybe we should have a look at them,” Tristan suggested, “I mean, who know’s what they’re doing right now?”
Serenity laughed. “Oh, come on Tristan, that’s the very reason why we put them into the closet in the first place. And since when are you the prude?”
“Yeah, let’s go on with the game,” Yugi ordered when they heard footsteps coming down the stairs. All heads turned to the door.
“Mai?” said Serenity, surprised.
“Shouldn’t you be upstairs with Joey?” asked Tristan.
Mai smiled and sat down. “Well, let’s just say, I owed someone a favor.” Noticing the confused looks on the faces around her, she explained, “Alright, Joey would kill me if he knew what he’s in for, but I can assure you he’s going to be fine. He’ll love it. He just doesn’t know it yet.”
“Ok…” Tristan muttered, getting up. “You know, this doesn’t really make me feel better. Now I want to check even more what’s going on upstairs.”
Yugi held him back. “Mai?” he asked with a serious voice “You wouldn’t plan anything to hurt Joey, would you?”
She looked at him sincerely. “Of course not!”
“He’s my friend too, “ she added to Tristan. “I’m helping him to get to know himself better.”
“So, there’s someone else with him right now? Who is it?” Serenity asked.
Mai just smiled.
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End of chapter 1
So, what do you think? Just tell me. And if you're in a hurry or don't have much to say, a "good" or "bad" is better than nothing, even though I'd like to know why...
Hope you liked it so far and in case you're interested... come and visit my Live Journal at http://www.livejournal.com/users/nina_nicky
. /)/)
=(';')=
.('')('')...........nicky :)
I wouldn't put a story online, unless I'm 100% sure to finish it. So, don't worry, the updates will come.
The fic has 4 chapters and all of them are already completed. I just need to edit them a little.
I'll update about every three days. Hope you'll like it!
What else? Oh yeah! This is a Shonen-Ai fanfic, so, all of you who don't like male/male stories.... shoo shoo... get lost...
DISCLAIMER: A bunch of Yu-Gi-Oh! cards and a crappy old videotape is about all I own that's related to the series. And, not even I am stupid enough to expect payment for my writings, so... no need to worry about financial benefits, alright? Be generous and PLEASE don't sue me, all you might get are my cards... and I couldn't live without my baby dragon :(
EDIT: Thanks to my lovely Betas Oni_Kitsune and Ykarzel I proudly present the spaced and corrected and overall better version of 'closets and car crashs' (or as Ykarzel lovingly called it 'coming out of the closet')... I can't even say how thankful I am for all the help they offered and brought along!
So here goes the story:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter One: "Hidden"
Joey blinked. He hadn’t expected it to be this dark. They must have made sure every little beam of light would be stopped from entering the small room.
“Ouch!” Joey murmured when he stumbled over a shoe, or something, and nearly fell. “Couldn’t you clean the closet before sending people in to break their neck?” he yelled angrily, getting even angrier when he heard the others outside giggling at him. Joey grunted and stretched out his arms to find Mai.
This game had been quite boring until he had realized they would send him into the closet “where someone was waiting for him”. His friends knew about his thought to be one-sided obsession for the blonde haired woman, but Tristan was a lousy liar. He knew it was going to be Mai in the closet waiting for him.
Suddenly his hand caught another. Then a second hand ran up his arm and was placed carefully over his mouth.
No talking. Ok. She probably thought that by not speaking she could keep her identity a secret.
He grinned and nodded his understanding and the hand was taken off his mouth, but instead of leaving his face, it stroked Joey’s cheek. He closed his eyes, enjoying the tender moment.
He heard Yugi outside whispering to the others about going back to the living room and leaving them alone. There was the sound of feet walking away as the hand that had held Joey’s snuck up his arm and over the collar of his shirt to rest behind his ear and stroke his hair. When he lifted his hand as well to search for contact, it was tenderly pushed away.
“No touching?” he asked disappointedly, and was shushed by a delicate finger on his lips. Right, no talking either. He had forgotten. Suddenly, he felt stupid. Mai was so much more experienced than he was. It would probably be best to just let her have it her way.
Joey felt himself being drawn a little closer and inhaled. It wasn’t Mai’s usual scent, less sweet and not so heavy. She probably didn’t want him to guess it was her, but he could definitely get used to this scent. In fact it reminded him of something… something… pleasant. He couldn’t really remember what it was exactly, but he didn’t care anyway.
Right now, all Joey wanted to do was concentrate on the warm skin he suddenly felt against his cheek. Holding his breath he took in every little touch. The hand that had moved from behind his ear to the back of his neck, the other one that now lay on his chest and moved up toward his collar. The face that he couldn’t make out due to the darkness, even if his eyes had been open, but that he could feel rubbing tenderly against his cheek.
And then… lips.
Warm, soft lips barely touching him, tracing an invisible line from his cheek up to his closed eye and back down again, finding the way to Joey’s ear. He sighed almost unnoticeably when the lips parted over his earlobe and, for a second, he felt the hot tip of a tongue. Before he knew what he was doing, Joey lifted his hands again and placed them on the slim hips in front of him, and this time Mai seemed to be so distracted that she forgot to protest.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ * * * ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
“Maybe we should have a look at them,” Tristan suggested, “I mean, who know’s what they’re doing right now?”
Serenity laughed. “Oh, come on Tristan, that’s the very reason why we put them into the closet in the first place. And since when are you the prude?”
“Yeah, let’s go on with the game,” Yugi ordered when they heard footsteps coming down the stairs. All heads turned to the door.
“Mai?” said Serenity, surprised.
“Shouldn’t you be upstairs with Joey?” asked Tristan.
Mai smiled and sat down. “Well, let’s just say, I owed someone a favor.” Noticing the confused looks on the faces around her, she explained, “Alright, Joey would kill me if he knew what he’s in for, but I can assure you he’s going to be fine. He’ll love it. He just doesn’t know it yet.”
“Ok…” Tristan muttered, getting up. “You know, this doesn’t really make me feel better. Now I want to check even more what’s going on upstairs.”
Yugi held him back. “Mai?” he asked with a serious voice “You wouldn’t plan anything to hurt Joey, would you?”
She looked at him sincerely. “Of course not!”
“He’s my friend too, “ she added to Tristan. “I’m helping him to get to know himself better.”
“So, there’s someone else with him right now? Who is it?” Serenity asked.
Mai just smiled.
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End of chapter 1
So, what do you think? Just tell me. And if you're in a hurry or don't have much to say, a "good" or "bad" is better than nothing, even though I'd like to know why...
Hope you liked it so far and in case you're interested... come and visit my Live Journal at http://www.livejournal.com/users/nina_nicky
. /)/)
=(';')=
.('')('')...........nicky :)