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for Ubermensche

by SilvaraMaxwell

schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very in depth. It's wonderful how you captured the essence that is Yami no Malik. Excellent observations and abstract into his being.
person Nemesis
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your fic very much, specially the psyco part. But ... I think you spelled the title wrong. Do you mean the German translation of overmen? If you do, it's not called 'Ubermensche' but 'Übermensch' or 'Uebermensch' if there isn't an 'ü' on your keybord.
Have a nice day and write more fics like that.

person Horizont
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

What made ead ead this? The title. But I discovered it was a real good fic, easy to read, fluently and stuff.
Um, 'bout the title again, it's German, isn't it? Overman should be "Übermensch", right? You don't have that points for ä ö ü, do you?

Anyway, I liked reding this!

Horizont
person Slice
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like how you portrayed Yami Malik in this, very nice. Although...he kind of disturbs me Oo;
person Cyn
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sighs and pats Yami no Malik on the head* You are one screwed up little bugger that you are.... I agree with Slice, you did a wonderful job of characterizing Yami no Malik ^^
person Lucifer
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was beautiful. (yeah, i'm a sicko...^^) I love your description of Malik's soul room. It fits him perfectly, white, blood splattered walls.... I'll have to remember that.^^ Wonderfully written.
person Lain-chan
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was...different.I like the way it's written though I don't really approve of the subject. Oh well,thats just my opinion.