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for Cool Baby

by Jams

person MistressofDragons
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my. . . yummy, yummy. well written too. sexy dancing, oh yeah! could have used a little more blood though *blinks, blushes* ahh, ignore that. i have an annoying little blood fixation. *sigh* dang thing just won't go away. anyway. . .

this is so good that i have given you the somewhat dubious honor of recieving my first ever review on AFF.net.

now i shall leave you to your writing, slan!(means farewell in Gaelic. the a is supposed to have an accent)
person demonwing_12846
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams, you are just to cool. I didn't know whether to laugh hysterically at this or make a run for the bathroom to spend some quality time to myself. hehe. I absolutely loved it.

D-chan
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: *drools* SOOOOOO HOT! Thank you Jams!!
DD: Good to see the writer's block leaving ya!!
YD: MMMM.MMM....uke Seto.......
DD: We LOVE uke Seto!!
YD: Hell! We love you, Jams!! That rocked!!
person bakurasgirl
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OO......OOO! This was soooooooooooooo good. This just go to prove that when dragondreamer tells you to write to eliminate writer's block, you write!
I know I always listen to my wife. Glad my wife told you to do this...mmmmmmmmmmmmmm. seme Jou.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Go Jams!! Whatta comeback! Seme Joey!! That rocks!! Lovely!! I agree, it's getting hot in here! I think I better kick the kid outta the shower and take one myself! Woow!!

Lady Elfskye
person Rupi
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LoL- that was great. :) Very sexy and funny. Yay for pervy Mokuba! Yay for Seme Jou! Yay for horny, impatient Seto! Kup tup the good work.