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FOLAO!! This fic is hilarious! Its great and hope the author does more fics soon!

MYA!!!!!! KYULE! I _LOVE_ Malik and Ryou together!!!!! XD SUGOI!!!!!11 This is the funniest Yu-Gi-Oh! yaoi fanfic I'v ever read and the well, actually the funniest Yaoi fanifc ever!! XD It was so original and FUNNIE!!!! lol hahaha I REEEEEEEEEEAlly hope you write more. You don't _have_ to but I REEAlly would love to read more *HINTHINT* anyways, the idea od flavoured lube was great when they went "How could we choose?" "so we bought 'em all!" I broke my arse laughing, it's almost as funny and random and funny as 'Zig and Zag, nothing to do with toast Video' ^____^ (don't ask) Also wMaliMalik shoted "GET YOUR RABID HORNY YAMI OFF MINE!!" LOL!!!!! heehee I love funny things especially funny Yaoi X_X *drool* and Malik and Rynd Ynd YnM and YnB BEST couplings in Yu-Gi-Oh!!!!!! yay! *does the happychibidance* woo! This fic: FIVE STARS!!!

that was hella hot!!!!!!...but how exactly do you use flavored lube...i mean, does it just smell nice or do you actuaaly taste it..sounds kiickyicky...

*Hentai Grin* I read this on some other website, and I just love it! Poor Isis...trying to solve the lube shopping problem, but just causing another one...how long do you wanna bet they survive before g t g to the Poor House because Marik and Bakura spent all of the money on lube?

"I'm just fine," he answered, angered at the woman. "I've been driving this WHOLE FUCKING TEST WITH A RAGING ERECTION! I'm HORNY and I want some, and I want some NOW!"

I laughed so damn hard on that part, I choked on my orange juice! Sometimes trying to pay somebody back is a bitch... especially when it fails! LMAO, funny chapter! I hope you add another one soon!

oh my bloody Ra...you must write more or i think i might cry. this is...i'm seriously crying...my favorite couplings!! and just so droolably luscious! well, i prefer ryou w/ bakura, but whatever...yes, malik's ass looks adorable in tight pants. ^^ the awkwardness...this is just wonderfully delicious. you describe everything in such a way that i can't help but love it. please update! i beg you! i'd get on my knees and beg but that only happens for malik or bakura. arigatou for writing it, even if you don't, and making my horrible day slightly better.

YAAAAAAAAAAY! I simply adore this fic! I love the pairings, I love the plot(if that's what one could call it...), I love the detail!!!!!!!!!!You must continue soon, for the sake of us all,ne!?!??!
I would give you an idea, but....I'm pulling a blank here. All I can think of is maybe Ryou and Malik deciding that instead of trying to get nge nge on their yamis by having wild sex, they should go for a more romantic approach(oysters, satin, bubblebaths, etc....). You know, try to throw Bakura and Yami Malik off by giving them sensations they've probably never felt! ^^' (I somehow doubt that Yami Malik and Bakura take the time for romance....)

... This story was absoulutly perfect. It made me laugh hysterically....

My favorite lines:"I'm just fine," he answered, angered at the woman. "I've been driving this WHOLE FUCKING TEST WITH A RAGING ERECTION! I'm HORNY and I want some, and I want some NOW!"

Not to mention the colored lube bit...

Tee-hee! Very cute. Off to read the next chappie! ^_^

Very cool! Never mess with a Yami! ^_^