AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for Paint It Black

by serialcabbit78

person Acacia
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far.

But just so you know, Katsuya's Jou's FIRST name. Jonouchi (which is the ACTUAL correct spelling, unlike most people's attempt) is his last. Just like in the manga's Tristan's name is Honda Hiroto, Honda being his LAST name.
person smalvina
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice fic
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Where's the rest of it?
DD: How did Joey's father get out of the rehab?
YD: Common girl! Get moving!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was.....short. Tension building, but short. Hey, it was good though!! Can't wait for another update!!!! You rock!

Lady Elfskye
person Ian weber
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow i am just speechless
person Ian weber
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow i am just speechless.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
keep it coming!!! This is good. I am really looking forward to the rest!!

Lady Elfskye
person bakurasgirl
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAT'S WRONG WITH MY BISHIE JOEY????? I love Joey too, like Ryou and Bakura...so bishie-licious! (and booty-licious!) mmmmmm.....joey booty. *dreams of joey's butt* Anyway, please continue thBTW
person xxkurenaixx
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ee.....oh whats gonna happen....poor Jou...i hope hes alright...fall into Kaibas arm...hope that was correct...^^""..hehehe...please post up more soon...^_^
person leaf zelindor
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awe, good chap, poor joey -huggles joey-
~leaf~