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for Nedjem Bit

by sakata

person Raine
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY #$%* OH God you have to update please update soon I can't wait for the next chappie
person Ashley
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-Sniffles.- So sad! So far, I'm truly enjoying this story! I know the Ancient Egypt's been overused, but I like how you created some of the more Egyptian names instead of just using Katsuya for example. I'll be looking for updates! ^-^
person Kodachi
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES!! YES!!! SHE HAS FINALLY UPDATED THIS STORY!!!! OH, PRAISE RA!!!
I am so happy that you finally taken this story up. I have been waiting patiently for the next
chapter for... uh.... more than a year??? i can't remember when i have last read this story....
I was sooooooooo hooked on this story and waited for the next chapter. I LOVE YOU!!!!

This is the one of the... and i mean THE... BEST story i have ever read!!!! So please, and i am
begging ya, do not make us wait for another year for the next chapter.... PLEASE!!!

I have seen no flaws in this story yet, and that makes me happy!!!! It's difficult for me to read
a story when there are billion mistakes in it. IT's a bit distracting.
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! u updated i'm so happy, i've waited so long, srry is i upset u in the email, i just really wanted u to update, this is a great story, i like the way u tell it. forgive me?
person Kat
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAY!! I'm so glad you updated this! Yup, I remember it. Still like it too! Sorry about the loss of your muse, but I'm glad you seem to have found another one.
person leaf zelindor
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is very good...very well written..and i love the little lessons we get in language and stuff in each chapther ^_^ ~Leaf~
person Joey Fanatic
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!
I had almost given up all hope. This is THE best past life fic I have EVER read, and I really, truely, absolutly mean it. The depth in which you travel through the characters . . . the development of their thoughts and ideas . . . the description . . .
Please, please, PLEASE keep going, now that you have picked up the story again. I await the next installment with great anticipation.
person Moon
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH RA!!!! you finally updated please continue this story is far to good to have it stopped

please update soon

Ja ne
person Joey Fanatic
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
IF YOU DO NOT CONTINUE PAST THE TWO CHAPTE WIL WILL CURSE YOU WITH THE POWER OF RA!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
person QueenV
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. This is so well written. All the Egyptian and careful characterization really adds to the overall feel of the story. You've made this an incredibly 'real' feeling piece of work. Well done! ^_^
I'm enjoying this a lot and hope to see lots more so^_^ ^_^
You are an excellent authoress! There were several times when my stomach did flip-flops and twists. Beautiful writing. __^ __^