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by Djehuti

schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was... so beautiful...
person Diva937
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
""Dammit!" Yugi cursed uncharacteristically, his eyes stinging with
tears of pain. He got to his feet with a soft whimper and proceeded
to limp slowly down the street. Yanking a glove off, he wiped his
eyes with an embarassed sniffle." Most adorable paragraph ever written about little Yugi. This was such a sweet story!
person Trippin2Infinity
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww,how strangly cute.
I'm not usually a fan of this couple but a friend told me to read it,
and I'm glad I did.
Well Done!!
person Ficreaderrob
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was a terrific story! So realistic, and I loved every second of it. =)
person Tasha
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo adorable, sweet, sensous and yummy ^_^ !

I especially liked the tentative thoughts between them both, the little scenes i.e. when Yugi attempted to feel Yami's chest, his 'suggestion' and Yami's reaction, the constant mention of the feeling or lack of when Yami was in ghost form etc etc.

Very good.
person Red Asatari
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so beuatiful,,it was one if the best yu-gi-oh! lomens I have ever read, i love ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
person Yami_Seirei
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic :) it's actually on my favourites list heh. I can't get enough Yami/Yugi fics so i write them haha they are my fave pairing. anyways keep up the good work i would love to see more of these.
person mizukimarr910
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god mind numbingly great doesn't even come close to matching how amazingly awesome that was i wanted to cry at times it was so sweet and then it was so intense i felt like i was in the same room i loved reading this i'll eventually print this so that i can read it whenever wherever!! please keep writing and update again soon.

thanx mizukimarr910

ps. you f**king rule man/woman whatever you kick a** everyone should kiss your ass that's how much you rule!!!!
person Arainaina
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah this was so good poor Yami though, he wasn't able to keep his body for very long but at least Yugi's dream came true.
person Nari
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very beautiful. I love your style of writing. ^^