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for Sweet Serenade

by YumeNoDchan

person zeynel
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!! it was great!!! ^^
person Ayami
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is awsome!!!
I love this fic soooo much, excellent!!!!
You're one of the best writer I have seen. ^__^
Great fic!

Ayami, rating: definately +++++
person Ykarzel
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hikari Ykarzel: You know what I love? I love it when my Sexy Seme Seto gets completely dead ass drunk. *nod* so, *glomp* for drunk seto!! and *glomp* for Joey/Yugi!!!! Now, you need more chapters, with Seto/yami and Joey/yugi (one of my fav couples and there isn't enough of them out there!) So, write write, and the songs kick too! Proabably smart to translate them, lol. I'm gonna shove this in Yami's face if she ever wakes her ass up...

Yami Ykarzel: *snore*
person Ayu and Chibbi ayu
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ayu - D-CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!! VOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!! You know the fic is great, i told you that, right?

Chibbi Ayu- Now, if you can get Kaiba to sing that to her, u know she wants to jump in right??

Ayu - >.< dirty ch........
person Solitaire
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg! Seto's song was so incredibly dirty! *rolls on the floor laughing* That was great. I'm glad you didn't Anzu-bash, either. She can be annoying, but she's not all that bad. Yami's song was cute, too, and I can't believe Seto taught that little kid how to flip people off. *snickers* Oh, and I just found it absolutely adorable how Seto and Yami were both afraid to tell the other how they felt. That was a great fic, and I hope to see more by you in the future. ^_^
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've done here, it was quite entertaining. XD Maybe work a littlemakimaking sure you stay in past tense instead of switching over to present. Also be careful of the grammar. Other than that is was very well done.
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've done here, it was quite etaintaining. XD Maybe work a little on making sure you stay in past tense instead of switching over to present. Also be careful of the grammar. Other than that it was very well done.
person pikazoom
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story...over so soon? Darn. Haha...I'm a Gackt fan too ;D I do believe he says Kami-sama in Vanilla, ne? =D
person Yamikaito
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOHOOO GO D-CHAN!!!! Kaiba singing Vanilla is either very hilarious or very sexy... and Yugi/jou is sooo cute ! this whole fic is great...
Yamikaito:you need to practice a bit more on the lemons tho
*hits her yami*
Yamikaito: I DIDN't MEAN IT THAT WAY!!!
Anyway i love ur fic
person animekid
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, this was interesting; Songs and singing. Maybe your next fic could be about Y/J as well as T/M, and the main couple in this fic S/Y! You did pretty good for a first fic! (I'm the same way, have so many ideas for fics but don't seem to write them or finish them!)