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for Birthday Party Bash

by ShadowofLight

person Ria
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Because you made them (YGO chars) get watsed... I totally support you repost soon! Ü
person Kari
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In the first chapter you wrote that Ryou was the Spirit of the Ring, and called the lighter half, Bakura. Eh...it would have been much better and less confusing if you did it like everyone else and called the yami, Bakura, and the hikari, Ryou. Noone´s ever called the yami, Ryou. >_<
person J.S.
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just want 2 tell u dat bakura is da dark half and ryuu is da light half...u seem to ave got them mixed up
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're doing good. Don't worry about timtweetween updates.
person CoH
schedule August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting, I can say that. Okay, Truthfully, I LOVE it! And you should certainly write more. Why haven't many people reviewed this? It's so Kawaii!
~ChangeofHeart
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wahahahaha...I'm loving this!!

I just wanna cuddle with Yugi...aww how dare Tristan make him cry!

Anywho, great story, can't wait for the next chapter ^___^
person Firestorm17
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What happened to chapter two? It seems to be missing.
Firestorm17