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......Okay, I'm going to refrain from swearing like a sailor because 1. it's not polite and 2. this is online where anyone can see it, but-! O! Okay, first, you know I'm not the biggest fan of Seto/Jou stories (but no longer the biggest anti-fan, thanks to evil evil you, evil evil Nkoah, and evil evil Yukou XP), and rape fics are totally depressing, but I feel so dirty because I liked a Seto/Joey!! ::cries:: My god, I hope you're happy, you sadistic little demoness. You've got me wanting to see Seto and Jou together. ARE YOU HAPPY?!?! ::cries some more:: I really did like it, though, even if it was uber-sad. ::sniffs:: You write this frighteningly well. And it was their anniversary, too. ::whimpers:: You're going to have to do some serious repair to my psyche after this, lol. Tell me you're going to write more...?

It's VERY good, are you going to continue? This is something I'd like to see the end of.

This is anime AndrAIa offa ff.n too lazy to go to ff.n ^^;;
OMG It's amazing! I kept crying! *wipes away tears*
I cant remember what else I was gonna say, because I'm too tired...
But I hope you write more! Pweeze!
~Taryn~

WOW. JUST WOW. Is there going to be more? Yikes...I will read it if there is. This is really good. Kinda messed up...but really good. You are an awesome writer! So I'll be looking! Arigato! Ja ne!

I sooooo wasn’t expecting like this when I clicked on it. It totally blew me away. I’m still having trouble thinking. I mean I was squirming and twitching all the way through this. Just a stark, sterile portrayal, a kind of nasty gritty that is true to life. Very good partly because it was while written and because it’s a on a some what of taboo subject.
Oh, please continue this. It's tooo good to leave as it is. It's just screaming 'MORE!!!!!'. Maybe it should be told in Seto's POV or Mokuba's and tell how things happened afterward.

*sniffles* POOR JOUNOUCHI!!!!! *huggles him*
Yamikaito: THAT &^%& *runs off to beat Jous father to a pulp* GRRRRRRR Kai Kaiba-kun too...
Teacher didn b'leve 'm *sniffles again* i be'ter go b'fre My nose gets so stuffed I can' talk straid...

-falls over and blinks several times-
Wing: i think she's in shock......-pokes Leaf with a stick-
AH! stop! anyway, i really liked your fic...but is that really all it's going to be? i hate the idea of Jou totally leaving Seto like that! -sniffles- but if it is it, very good fic, i love it, you write very very well!
~Leaf~

Daisy: Heh heh, it's okay. ^_^;; I know how it feels to have written something and not know how on earth you came up with it in the first place.
Nuva: This was very good! ^_^ We haven't read an S/J storth tth this kind of drama in it. Very well written!
Daisy: I almost cried at the end. I feel so sorry for Jou. All this stuff that is going on is really messing him and his relationship with Seto up. Poor thing.
Nuva: You really should update this... that is, if you can finish it. Usually, it's kind of hard to update a story where you have no idea how you got to writting it, as you said.
Daisy: But if you're gonna update it, please do! I gotta find out what happens next! Or, as some reviewers have said, you can do Seto's POV. This is still very good either way.
Nuva: ^_~ Keep up the good work.

okay that was sad I seriously have tears in my eyes. You're stories really have that kind of impact you know

Wow. I don't believe words can begin to describe how wonderful you write. It's simply beautiful. I must admit it's far from what I was expecting when I clicked on it. Then again I really wasn't expecting much since there was no summery aside from a definition. I'm very glad I did click on it. I believe I’ve read a few things by you before, though I’m not exactly sure which ones they were. XD Gomennasai, I read too many stories by too many authors in too many fandoms. I do believe I’ve read Ice. That is if you’re the one who wrote it…

But I suppose I’m getting off track here. The point of this review is (Yes! There is a point!) to tell you how wonderful your story is. =D I would also like to note that this is one of the best Seto/Jou stories I have read. Well, considering it wasn’t very, um, happy I don’t think many people will agree with me. Damn helpless romantics. XD Anyways, keep up the good work.

PS – That ending totally blew me away.