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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has been beautifully written. The emotions in this are just amazing. The discription, too. I'm sure others have asked you but, could you write a second chapter to this story. It has quite a bit of potential to just be left alone.
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn... I have to tell you that was... oh... just so awe-inspiring... Utterly beautiful fic that brings out the harsh realites in life. Really, I do love the title and the whole concept behind the fic. It just amazes me how wonderful and brilliant your writing is. Pity, it doesn't seem like you're going to continue this since this fic is really one worth continuing. Its simply /above/ many of the other Seto/Jou fics out there (not that there aren't some really good ones out there) but this just has to be cold, but such is life, ne? Lovely fic that has such a desperate sadness to it that I love. Poor, poor Seto and Jou... Truly brilliant.
Kudos
~DarkRoseBlood ^_^
Kudos
~DarkRoseBlood ^_^
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say... any word I might come up with wouldn't be worth this review.
And it doesn't matter anyway, does it? What I say, I mean. No, it doesn't.
You touched me though.
And it doesn't matter anyway, does it? What I say, I mean. No, it doesn't.
You touched me though.
schedule
December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wow, I really like this, do go on.
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOWEE!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!
schedule
December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhh
*sob*
so so so sad!!!!!
it's really good but really sad, and in the end i started crying literally.... it was so sad!!!!
*shiver*
sooooooo sad!!!!!
please write more, i wanna know what happens to poor jou
*sob*
so so so sad!!!!!
it's really good but really sad, and in the end i started crying literally.... it was so sad!!!!
*shiver*
sooooooo sad!!!!!
please write more, i wanna know what happens to poor jou
schedule
December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THAT was incredibly good. One of the best I've read yet. Indeed, as some have said, there should be a sequel and I will be on the look out for one. A very splendid job, brava!
schedule
November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...-Blinks.- Wow. This actually had me crying a little at the end. I'm such a big softie to heart. ; _____ ;
Kitty: Oh shut up Ashley. You love angst, it's your fault you choose to read this stuff!
Lemme' 'lone. -Glare.- I loved this, and don't update it. It's perfect as it is. ^____^ I like sadingsings when I'm depressed. It makes me feel a little better.
Kitty: Oh shut up Ashley. You love angst, it's your fault you choose to read this stuff!
Lemme' 'lone. -Glare.- I loved this, and don't update it. It's perfect as it is. ^____^ I like sadingsings when I'm depressed. It makes me feel a little better.
schedule
November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was beautiful and heartbreakingly sad and a wonderful oneshot. ^_^
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*finally exhales* Really excellent. You take the cliche and elevate it to poignancy by the quality of your writing.