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well, hell. Make me want to slit my wrists, why don't you? :p

Oh my god.. So sad but good none the less! I'm.. lost for words right now.. But really really good!!!

That was beautiful... made me cry...

Okay, I've been putting off reviewing this for months, but you wrote The Lair saying you weren't sure if you should post it or not. I think that the story is excellently well crafted, it wouldn't have hit me so hard if it wasn’t. Some people like this kind of story and I'm sure that there are a few at The Lair who would. The thing is, I would never have willingly read this story had it a proper warning. I don't like stories with character death in them in general, and the emotional scarring that Jou went through was so well written that it became a part of me. It took me a few days to get it out of my system. I know putting a warning of character death would short change the devastating impact of the ending, but at the very least it needs to be labeled a darkfic with heavy emotional abuse. I *think* that might have kept me from reading it unwittingly without spoiling the ending. As I said, it's well written. A poorly written story wouldn't have bothered me like this and it shows your strength as a writer to draw the reader into the story and become a part of it. But I gotta tell ya, without a warning and just the definition to go by, I thought it was going to be a story about injecting some spice in a relationship that had lost it's passion. Even after it became obvious that I'd had the wrong idea, I still kept hoping for a happy ending and thus was devastated when I worked out the ultimate conclusion we were left with. And it's perfect where you left it; anything more would have detracted from the true impact of the ending. Again, I do think you can post this on The Lair, but I think you need to label it very carefully.

i'm so sorry ....

This is sad... And yet I still love it! Is that wrong?...

Holy. Shit. damn, that was good. wah~~ too bad I can't write like that.....*runs off a cliff*

*whimpers*

I read this fic several moonths ago on another site and it was my first Seto/Jou. It made me so sad I just sat and cried. I hope you finally take pity on Jou and do a sequel. It's mean to have him just leave. I have to thank you for getting me hooked on Seto/Jou though^^; You're one of my favorite Yu-Gi-Oh writers. I've read the Shades stories, Ice, and Beachin' Trip. Is it ok if I post your stories on my site? If so e-mail me. Anyways, back on topic, CONTINUE!!!!!! Or I'll cry again.::eyes tear up:: Seto was Jou's source of happiness and now Jou left.::Sniffles:: Well ja ne!

I NEED MORE!!!!
Write a sequel. Or a next chapter...or ANYTHING!