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for Mokuba's Education

by makoryoshi

person Emily
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i just don't know what to say. Wow. This fic swept me off my feet. Hot, smutty goodness.*Faints*
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that was some hot stuff!
person cardslash02
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I loved it. It was so hot. I love this pairing, please do a sequel!!!
person Talon
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY enjoyed this fic. I'm delighted to see I'm not the only person who thinks the love between the brothers Kaiba is the cutest thing EVER!!!!! I've been thinking of writing an incest/yaoiful fic, but hey...you beat me to the punch!!! Please do write a sequel...this was terrific!!!

Talon
person Kayume
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I have a weakness for everyone's favorite mini kaiba, but even so, That was MEGA KAWAII-NESS!! Plus ANything that has to do with 2 kaiba's is good for me. (Ie: Noa/Mokuba (My fav.) Seto/noa, and seto/mokuba.) Anyway, I'm not letting my weakness for moku get to me, I'm telling you, that was one of the BEST Mokuba/Seto stories.
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
overtones??? I was enjoying this story untill this last chapter... I'm sorry to say that you've lost me as a fan.. indefinately. This isnt a flame, and yes you did warn, but overtones are what was described in the first chapter... this is outright incest.. anyone who'd even think of touching a younger sibling in that mannor should be taken out and shot!
person Sparrow
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very nice! The narrative is flowing and easy to follow and the descriptions are perfect. I never really considered Mokuba and Seto in a pairing but I do now! *grins*
person MidnightMoon
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how cute..LOL.Well that was a good story. :)
person LilBit
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! ^_^ Beautiful! Please please please please write the sequel! I'll love you forever!
person Ryo-Ohki
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Geeze.. If you are gonna update, then do it already, dont just tease us!