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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I agree on your theorf Yaf Yami can stay solid long enough for anything, why not be it to give Yugi a blowjob?! Excellent fic. i hope for more like that in the near future ^_~
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was my first time reading a yaoi lemon. At first I was scared to read it but my friend AKA Talentless reccomened it. So I kinda hesitated but then I said, "What the hell". SO I read it. And I really enjoyed it! Since I'm tackling yaoi for the first time, I thought I'd read it. It was nicely done. You're good. ^^
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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, so Yami was going into Yugi's dreams and causing them!! XD Well done, especially for your first lemon. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, this was fun! :) Writen well, only 1 or 2 typos that I noticed.
I liked your solid/not solid thing; I dont think I've seen that before. ((though will firmly maintain that magical different body is fun! *smile*)) Good on the imagination there. I like the way you think.
I liked your solid/not solid thing; I dont think I've seen that before. ((though will firmly maintain that magical different body is fun! *smile*)) Good on the imagination there. I like the way you think.
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yami was being kind-of evil in this fic, don't you think? Messing with Yuugi's dreams like that. I thought it was a pretty good story though.
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I REALLY like it.
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: OOOO...HOT!!
DD: Now this could be a whole "sex in the soul room" series!
YD: I think my hikari just dared you.
DD: Hrmp...maybe I did!
DD: Now this could be a whole "sex in the soul room" series!
YD: I think my hikari just dared you.
DD: Hrmp...maybe I did!
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Ish good! This was well done, I liked this. Do s'more, it was very good for a first lemon! Keep up the good work! *hands you cookies*
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wooowee~! was that ever hot n' heavy! *_* that was a bootiful thing... tho it's not a lemon, it's just a blowjob... but hey! Yami made Yugi pass out??? LOL!!! that means Yami's EXCELLENT at b/j's...
ppl: *stare openmouthed*
hey! don't look at me like that! O.O;;
Xx-Sadistix-xX
ppl: *stare openmouthed*
hey! don't look at me like that! O.O;;
Xx-Sadistix-xX
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wipes self off*
Wow, I liked that! I have all kinds of dirty thoughts about Yami now... all those lovely dreams he could send. Oh, he's bad. :)
Looking forward to reading more of your stories!
Wow, I liked that! I have all kinds of dirty thoughts about Yami now... all those lovely dreams he could send. Oh, he's bad. :)
Looking forward to reading more of your stories!