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January 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
can i be in the story?
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really well done. It was sexy and it had me grinning the whole time.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I loved every second of this fic! Truly Sexy!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes i totally agree yami can stay solid enough to give Yugi a blowjob but i loved the fact that he couldn't swallow that was hillarious i really couldn't stop laughing for a good five minutes i just loved that fact and probably also b/c Yugi would die if Yami hadn't cleaned it up and solomon had found it. please keep writing and update again soon.
thanx mizukimarr910
thanx mizukimarr910
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. it is very, very good. I just love when yami is so forceful.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm sexy mischievous yami, i wondered what on in that head of his, and yugi loving every moment of it, i love yami and yugi, they are adorable, especially together. well done
^_^
^_^
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this one, teheheheee
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September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Actually.. on a note about the whole Yami having a body.. I am almost positive that it does indeed happen later in the series. I just can't remember when exactly.
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August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i wonderd about yamis magic solidity in some fics i alwase thought they latter found a spell or something to get thier own bodys
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August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First let me say that it was a very entertaining story. Esp considering that it was your first lemon! I'm very impressed.
My one criticism is that the end of the story was not as strong as the begining. The ending felt rushed and not as
erotic as the beginning. That's just my opinion.
Excellent job!
My one criticism is that the end of the story was not as strong as the begining. The ending felt rushed and not as
erotic as the beginning. That's just my opinion.
Excellent job!