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for The Monopoly Game

by MissNatsumiAi

person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was funny omfg I can't stop laughing
pLEASE YOU MUST UPDATE PLEASE EXCLLENT WORK
I think Super sexy bandit keith needs some super sexy HELP
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE ^_______^
KEEP UP THE FANTASIC WORK
person Sue-Chan
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I thought it really funny especially the way Yami Bakura keeps on obsessing over cheese! Keep up the good work! -Sue-Chan-
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks everyone whose reviewed!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! ^_^ Anyhow, For the viewer I'm glad you like my story so far, or you think its ok, or don't like it, or just plainly haven't read it. Anyways, I would love more reviews! I want to know if I should continue the story or just quit where its at? Besides I want to know what the reader thinks. Bai bai for now! ^-^

-Miss. Natsumi Ai
person Mistress Gardenia
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and unusual story. Me like Kimo mostly! I think Kaiba was pervertly sick in the story. Bandit Keith is super sexy. Lol. I liked reading it. ^-^
person Bakurabonez
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I'm glad to see there are no Mary Sues or other original characters. The only thing I didn't like was Tea being hurt so much. But I did like Bandit Keith and Bonez. Those two make a good comedy pair.
person ashes
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol! This could go somewhere interesting.

Entertaining. ver very goofy way. Which isn't bad. :)
person OO
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O_O
person Sensei Kaoshin
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love Yami Bakura because he is so delightfully twisted at different points during the story.
Super Sexy Bandit Keith rocks!

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