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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: GAH!!
DD: You are SO dead!
YD: At least Tris didn't kill himself.
DD: She's not allowed to kill him...not if she wants to live.
YD: Totally hot Seto/Isis, BTW.
DD: Mmmm...desk sex.
YD: Mako NEEDS to come back!!
DD: We want another Mako/Tris lemon!!!
YD: NOW, DAMN IT!!
DD: You are SO dead!
YD: At least Tris didn't kill himself.
DD: She's not allowed to kill him...not if she wants to live.
YD: Totally hot Seto/Isis, BTW.
DD: Mmmm...desk sex.
YD: Mako NEEDS to come back!!
DD: We want another Mako/Tris lemon!!!
YD: NOW, DAMN IT!!
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! VILE CLIFFHANGER!
Marik - Would you calm down . . . I'm not even in this one, and you're going nuts.
Drac - You're not the only cute guy in the anime, hun. Bakura happens to be downright gorgeous too, but that's besides the point, so shoosh. Anyway . . . I'm reading this because the storyline is great and very original, and I'm dying to know what happened and who the bad guy is. Jus I s I think I've got it figured out, something catches my attention that makes me think of someone else! GAH! I love it! Please continue soon . . . I'm dying here!
Marik - Would you calm down . . . I'm not even in this one, and you're going nuts.
Drac - You're not the only cute guy in the anime, hun. Bakura happens to be downright gorgeous too, but that's besides the point, so shoosh. Anyway . . . I'm reading this because the storyline is great and very original, and I'm dying to know what happened and who the bad guy is. Jus I s I think I've got it figured out, something catches my attention that makes me think of someone else! GAH! I love it! Please continue soon . . . I'm dying here!
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Huge Eyes* WOW What a kick ass dark plot! I love the gore.
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW MANY MORE CHAPTERS ARE YOU PLANNING TO WRITE BEFORE YOU FINISH THIS TORTURE OF ONE OF THE GREATEST DARK FICTIONS I HAVE EVER READ! Urr, sorry about that all caps sentence, but I have one too many ideas of whos Has Harbringer is and the fact that I hate prolonged fictions that counite mindlessly for 30+ chapters only to end it with a bad ending.
Great writing sytle and barely a mistake in grammer or spelling, great job and finish this fiction soon (or at least arc of the story and give Joey a new case to counite the series).
Great writing sytle and barely a mistake in grammer or spelling, great job and finish this fiction soon (or at least arc of the story and give Joey a new case to counite the series).
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oy, you come back and leave us with that?????????? Not fair!! Lovely! So, I hope you stick to your words and update soon!!!
Lady Elfskye
Lady Elfskye
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: YOU ARE SO DEAD!! HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO OUR BOY?!
YD: We know where you live, woman!!
DD: If Tris kills himself...YOU are SO dead!!
YD: We know where you live, woman!!
DD: If Tris kills himself...YOU are SO dead!!
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, BTW, my previous review is not a flame; this story is very well written. I'm not one much for gory stuff is all. But I like the sex scenes. It's nice to actually see a Yugioh story with sex scenes of a man and woman for a change..LOL
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MJ -
I'm really enjoying you're story! Rock On!
The "new computer blues" is something familiar to me. Hang in there..
I'm really enjoying you're story! Rock On!
The "new computer blues" is something familiar to me. Hang in there..
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh..I should NOT be reading this story. You warned us...but it's like a moth to the flame. Man this is so gross....
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay....I've just read all Fourteen chappies + Author's Notes and I must sa
IN
IN-FUCKING-CREDIBLE!
Like, OMG! The plot is freggin' groovy! The death and gore is just like a funky horror flick! And the romance is better than most Bently Little books!!!!!
Seriously, I'm still confuzzled about WHO exactly is the guy who's been killing all the girls...First I thought it was Seto....Then Backura...now Mokuba...and at one part, I thought it was Isis!!! Man, hurry up Joey! Stop screwing around and save some lives!!!! LOL!
Anyways, PLEASE update soon!!! YOU TOTALLY ROCK! (and I hope the Hurricane wasn't too bad on you!)
Keep on Writin' (for the love of God!)
Reviewer #34321
IN
IN-FUCKING-CREDIBLE!
Like, OMG! The plot is freggin' groovy! The death and gore is just like a funky horror flick! And the romance is better than most Bently Little books!!!!!
Seriously, I'm still confuzzled about WHO exactly is the guy who's been killing all the girls...First I thought it was Seto....Then Backura...now Mokuba...and at one part, I thought it was Isis!!! Man, hurry up Joey! Stop screwing around and save some lives!!!! LOL!
Anyways, PLEASE update soon!!! YOU TOTALLY ROCK! (and I hope the Hurricane wasn't too bad on you!)
Keep on Writin' (for the love of God!)
Reviewer #34321