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by Ykarzel

person SecretSoul
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg i can't wait for this to be finished, i read the beach one and thought it was wonderful, you do a good job^_^
person ShadowMage
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this, I read Beachin Trip awhile back. And I like Bakura's new look, *snickers* I wanna see him freak out the teachers again!!!
person Holykari
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
Okay, first, I never went and reviewed Beachin' Trip, so I'll do so now. It was very well written, had some of my fav. pairings, and it was hucking filarious to boot.
I suppose the same could be said for this one, too. You're a great author!
Another thing, as for the Special News Report type thing...well...never been kissed, never had sex, so therefore have no idea. Sorry I wasn't much help on that one.
Alrighty then, I'm going to leave this site now in case my mom comes home and finds me reading this. That would be rather bad, since she's so freaking overprotective and won't even let me see R-rated movies and crap...
Yeah. How 'bout I shut up now. OK. Bye!
--Holykari
person Yaky
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK and I do mean HOLY FUCK!!!!!! AWSOME job keep it up and UPDATE SOON.
person DarkQueen
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT *falls of chair* @_@.....
person Rainy
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! I want Devlin to pound Tristan's ass!! Yeah, I'm normally a SetoxJou person, but you're making me want this!!! (Like that's such a bad thing anyways, right?) Oh, you better have Tristan finally give in next chapter!


Rainy
person KC
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: shit!!! What is Joey/Seto going to do now?!
Yami: *yawns* koi, let's go to sleep
Me: but yami... its like fifteen minutes until eleven right now
Yami: still koi, u got school tomorrow and its almost midnight!!!
Me: *pouts* does it matter?
Yami: yes, we could make love
Me: *blushes* Yami, u know that i would have to stay home tomorrow if u do it harsh on me
Yami: *grins* oh yea, bu'll 'll be gentle...
Me: no!!!
Yami: *pouts* fine then *leaves room*
Me: damn, i hate it when she does that!!! *smi ANY ANYWAYZ, CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! THAT WAS LONG UNTIL U'VE UPDATED TODAY!!! SO CONTINUE!!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO MOKUBA!!! SEE U!!! *RUNS AFTER YAMI*
person Razberry
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe.. not really a review(tho this fic is reeeeeaaaaaalllllyyyy spiffy, bet better than Beachin' Trip). I just wanted to be picky and point out a lil error. ^^ On Joey's dog tags, you wrote that his blood type was AB positive. In the official stats, his blood type is actually B. ^^ Hehe, I was just feelin' picky. Anywho, I'm gonna get back to readin' this thing!
person kay
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update NOw Dammit I want to know what happenes
person CarrytheSheepdog
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I finaly go a screen name so llok me up! (It's at CarrytheSheepdog.) ^^ lol! Li (mah friend) was confused about how Mono (Joey) broke his butt. Here is the conversation:
CtS: I've told you before! LEMONS!!
Li: ... Koto (Seto) threw a lemon at Mono's butt...? ^^
CtS: NO!! >.<
lol... Buuuuuuttt! Try to update! I want more SETO/JOEY!!! And Yami/Bakura... *sigh* Oh, and just so u know... I printed out Beachin' Trip and Li has had it for acouple months. She read it every night for the first couple weeks, then just read it one times every two weeks after that intill now. ^^' She said that she's memorided it... I beleve her.

Well bye!
LOVE, PEACE, DOUGHNUTS, AND YOAI!
CarrytheSheepdog