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for Forever, My Puppy

by serialcabbit78

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not again! Gods! These people need lives! Or hobbies! Listen, doll, you just keep writing. Ignore these idiots. They don't mean ANYHTING! Take a deep breath and do what you need to do.
If these people haven't got the balls to give their manes when they flame, then they're not worth SHIT!!

So, to all the people who have flamed this story...knock it the FUCK off! She's writing this story for a reason! Just leave her the hell alone! If you don't like it, do read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know HOW many times I have to say it!!!

*hugs* You keep up the good work, babe, and don't let them get to you!
person dreamer
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So what if seto is OCC, what if we prefer it that way? Why should we care what you think. I love her fics because seto is OCC! I don't want to be reading a fic where ihe is an asshole and cares for no one. Whats so good about that? Anyway, what do you know what he's like? How do you know he's not really nice underneath it all? If you don't like the fic, don't read it. No one is forcing you to read it, so it seems to me like you just have nothing better to do than bother people.
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well Well Well, I see who my true fans are... the rest can burn in hell with their flames.
person sd-snow-vixen
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like the story and i like the plot i just figured out how to review for this site -_-' and yes i can be that clueless. so far i think it is wonderful the way you are developing the characters into the storyline and how they interact. and yes i can say you are not writing pwop otherwise i would not be reviewing this. ^_^ keep it up it is a wonderful story thus far
person bakurasgirl
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
True, animom, i can see your point, but there is no reason to be rude to the author. I realize sometimes you have to be harsh, but there is a fine line between constructive criticism and being rude..."reviewers who could not review themselves out of a paper bag" was completely un-called for. There's no need to be rude like that.
person Split Persona
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kathrine: DAMN FLAMERS!!!!! BURN ON YOUR OWN FLAMES WHILE YOUR ORGANS ARE GIVEN TO DOGS AS CHEW TOYS!!!!! WAIT!!! THEY MIGHT GET Flamer POISONING!!!!!
JC: Calm down girl... We finally got around to readin' this and we find the 6th chapter to be an author's note and we were like 'Wha?' Then we finally went to your reviews to find out if anyone knew what was going on and I guess now we do. We hate Flamers.
Kathrine: They don't care about the people who put hard work into their stories and actually enjoy them! ASSHOLES!!!!!!
JC: Kathrine is very worked up now. We happen to like this story and we think we read it before on FFNet but forgot to review. Just know, it doesn't matter who doesn't like the fic as long as you like it and you know someone else does as well. Be proud of your work, it's like your fingerprint on the AFFNet world.
Kathrine: WHO WAS THE FLAMER????? LET ME AT 'EM!!!! I'll sacrifice 'em to my Goddess!! *Smirks as she thinks of ways to punish Flamer*
JC: Don't you think you're going a little too far with this?
Kathrine: No, why would I? *Looks confused*
JC: *Sighs* Nevermind... Update soon please!! We're waiting! SETO/JOU FOREVER!!!! But additions may apply. ^_~
person bakurasgirl
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If she wants to publish her story, that is her perogative. Constructive criticism is always nice, but being rude or obnoxious isn't. Mystical dragon's stories are very good and if you don't like it, Akailblush, then that's your problem. Not hers.

And as far as reviewers who can't review themselves out of a paper bag, why don't you crawl back into the cave you came out of and show some respect for other people.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first of all, let me say...I happen to like this story. And I think you're doing an AWESOME job with it.

Whoever this PERSON is has no right going around slamming other people's work. If someone reads a story and they don't like it...just don't read any further! They have NO RIGHT to trash someone else's work. Who died and left YOU King Shit?!

Listen, my friend...this person doesn't know you and obviously doesn't care. Delete the frigging review and let it go. You know who your friends are and we all support you. WE know why you write. And unlehis his person is willing to be human and let you do what you need to do, then they can just kiss off!!

*hugs* You keep doing what you wto dto do.
Loves ya
person bakurasgirl
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My lover told me about your flame and I completely agree with her! Babe, just delete her reviews. It's YOUR story...not hers. I would love to see a story SHE wrote and see how her writing style is.

I'm not going to use nasty language to get my point across. After all, why should I stoop to such a base intellectual level and hurt my brain in the process.

If you do not like the author, that is YOUR opinion. Do not read her stories, then. I know you're carrying the banner of "We have to bring everyone's writing up to my level", but let the author do to her s wha what she wants.

And when it comes down to it, what mystical dr wan wants to do with her story is her business alone. If you do not like the content, don't read...it's that simple.

You may object to Mystical dragon..if so...that is your business alone...it's not your place to demean her or her style in any way.
person lunarsfire
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story....please continue.