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for Forever, My Puppy

by serialcabbit78

person KC
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was sweet!!! SO, is the next chapter going to be about Joey and Kaiba getting married? I hope so!!! *Looks around* Hey, I don't see my Yami anywhere in the room. Where is she? *Sighed* Oh well, CONTINUE TO UPDATE SOON!!!
person Dragonder Yer Yami Dragon
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: OMG! That's was SO sweet!!
YD: *sniffle*
DD: Are you CRYING?!
YD: No...mo, I'm not.
DD: Next chappie!!
person dreamer
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a nice surprise. I'm glad serenity is with her brother, even if its only for a while. He needs all the support he can get. Its nice to see that joey seems to be in a better mood. I will also be in a better mood once that steven guy gets what he deserves....:goes off muttering about bastards and torture:
person dreamer
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Noooo, how could you leave it there?!?!? It was just getting to the good part! Injustice!!! I hope in the next part they are able to continue without interruptions.
person Jadejj
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my what kind of wedding will it be ;)
person dreamer
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Again, more shocking events!!! Why am i even surprised after all the twists? First of all, i hope joey did tell the truth about seto not hurting him anywhere but only that he has a little trouble breathing. About joeys mom getting murdered, what!!!! I never expected that. Typical though, that bastard he just had to cause more sringring before he killed himself. If he had already escaped, couldn't he just kill himself and there. No, he had to kill their mom, knowing it would hurt them as well. Damn bastard, an asshole untill the end eh. I hope he's burning in hell. Usually i'm not so violent but i've had a bad day and knowing that guy didn't get all the punishment he deserved doesn't help. By comiting suicide, he took the easy way outvingving on, i'm glad serenity decided to stay with joey and seto, about the brother in law thing. Does she know something we don't? I hope seto does ask joey to marry him and soon. Keep up the great work and take care, ja!
person Lady Eye §ye
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!!!!!! Listening he she song as I read the story made the mood even more!!! I was absolutly *giddy* reading it! I could almost see the pic in my head. Just one little nitpick, cause it may just be my version, but right after the line "share each day with me, each night, each morning," Christine says "say you love me" and Raoul says "You know I do". Like I said, no flame intended, please don't take it that way. It just might be my version. I still absolutly *loved* it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Waaaa!! When's the wedding??????????

Shelly and the Horde
person leaf zelindor
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awe! that is just sooo sweet! -all teary eyed- i love it! ~Leaf~
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! EVIL! That was evil! Want more MORE! LEMON CHAPPY! Seto/Jou ly goy goodness right now! Please! Pllllleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! ^_^ MORE! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARIGATO! OyAsUmI! ^-^
person dreamer
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! How did i miss all these chapter updates?!?!? Ok, now the real question is what?!?!? First is the shock that joeys dad wants him back. Does that guy have no decency? After all he's done, now he thinks joey is just going to go back with him, he has to be delusional or something. Then the next shock was at the end. What was all that about drugs in joeys system and that his dad took him forcefully? How could that happen without joey remembering? What type of drug does that. If this drug actually exists, please forgive me for not knowing because i know nothing about them. Well i hope the next chapter explains more.